RampatheSwift

Cheers man. Just gathering ideas to liven up the track at the moment. Hopefully get it finished soon it driving me mad. Thanks for you comment.

Awesome. This is great feedback. I'll see what i can do with the vocal. Thanks man!

I know, i know, i have been busy busy with university assignments and projects lately, but i have a tonne of unfinished work i would like to complete and put on here. I just get major writers block and i don't want to put crap up on here so i never post it in the end.

I thought i's take a different angle now and try to get feedback for the Looper Fam to give me that push to finish my work.

As i mention this track is unfinished (not even close) so i did not see any urgency. Nonetheless I shall credit the vocal immediately.

Good to hear from you Behnam

Paora.

thank you for your words. you are too kind =)

You misunderstand me. I meant that this song was made starting with nothing but the acapella, and progressed from that. I had a go at searching for another acapella that suits, but no luck. I shall take this as a hit and miss, but I understand what you mean.. I am so oblivious to the clashing of keys in this song..
Your comments are an eye opener.. I really need to study up on my music theory =\ and knowledge of keys. Thanks for listening. I appreciate your advice and i'll keep an eye out for your next upload.

I see what you mean. It's not a very good structure for a proper song is it.. To be entirely honest, I did not have any true intentions for this track... I was just experimenting i guess.. And I can see why it sounds like a mashup (it is a mashup). If i take away the current vocal the track sounds retarded. If i leave it in the different keys clash. Cohesion, I'll remember this. As for keys, I most definitely need to do some homework and ear training.

I shall not stop at this though. May I ask some of the things you consider, in terms of structure, when writing a song?

I appreciate your honest opinions.

Peace,

Paora

Thanks, I appreciate your opinion. I don't know a lot about keys, but mayb i should get familiar with them. you're good. i just listened to a handful of your tunes. I like the arrangement & progressiveness of them a lot, not to mention the mix is flawless... Is it weird that i made this track from that sample tho?

thank you for taking the time to listen. i appreciate your kind words. i shall visit your page soon and check out some of your work =)

Thank you Behnam. I only just saw this comment. Appreciate the fav very much =). Hope you are well!

wow you don't waste any time, finished and posted all in one day!
thank you for appreciating my track! i can tell th music speaks to you clearly, and brings about specific emotions of th past. this track was originally written to help people relax and wind down from a rough day or a long day doing something.. less enjoyable lol.. but the chords certainly allow it to have a.. reminiscent vibe to it. so i like what you've done with it =). it's very intriguing seeing th different perspectives of a track. thanks again for using it!

thank you so much! that is exactly th feeling i was going for! i could not have described that any better myself.. i was unsure that anyone would even appreciate this, let alone follow it! it took a whole lot of editing without a grid to produce this track.. so thank you for taking th time to process it =p i know some people probably wouldn't even call this music, but i'm glad you like it =)

Funny you say that cuz . .. this is one of those tracks. i cant access the files cuz i shared a computer with my bro when we were living together. Then i moved out, but he kept the computer =/ Now its broken and this original track.. . lost... sucks big time

thanks for listening!! appreciate your time and kind words =)

hahaha well i'd be honored to give you the stems. would love to hear what someone could do with this. although i've never given stems to someone before..how would i get by doing that? would audio bounces of each track be sufficient? lol forgive my ignorance.

cheers bro. thanks for your ears

cheers for listening and taking the time to review. i will definitely consider glitching the drums in my future tracks to draw the listener in even more. thanks for the tip. i'll be listening out for future creations of yours, cuz i think your judgement and ear for music is cool man. right up my alley

hey JJ!
that sounds like it would be a lot of fun hehe. just the kinda thing to do to unwind.

thank you for listening and commenting =)

i never imagined it like that. when i wrote this song it was more like 'clear the weighed mind on the bus ride home from a long day working/studying' but now that you've mentioned it, wondering the fairground =) its so vivid in my head hehe and so much cooler.

i think its so cool how people can interpret music differently.
thoroughly enjoyed your comments MStokes. thank you.

Wow thanks brillbilly. I appreciate your comments they're very humbling. To be honest this is a completed track in my eyes, but i'm always open to suggestions so I can improve my music for people like you, who want to listen =). Cheers for the feedback and download!

thank you Dan. I appreciate your kind words =)