davepowell1

Great tune. Lyrics once again are well on point, and clearly put forward a message (if that makes any sense?) which isn't always so easy to do.

Only small criticism is to let that great voice of yours cut through the mix a little more.

Other than that, really loved it. Thank you!

Great song man, love the lyrics. Just a shame the vocals aren't more pronounced as you've got a real drive to your voice that sometimes seems to get a little lost among the instrumental.

Still really enjoyed it though, and thanks for sharing :)

great guitar skills, nice songwriting, very talented musician it seems!

i love this dave
masterpiece
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love the spark at minute mark where you get higher pitch
really like the track, great job on it.
amazing
very well put together
cheers
-CAP

Nice track!

Like it, reminds me of CCR, I think it could benefit from a touch of mastering.

I love your guitar sound.

i see

that guitar is so powerful...

Hello, can I use that song in a video clip with a slideshow?

Man I love the guitar in this, I am assuming its a 12 string? Thanks for sharing, its a nice acoustic track.

Kyle

Hey Dave

Great track in a Neil Young style and great lyrics too. Nice job man.

K;)

Hey man, this is a really great song and the lyrics are so heart felt. IMHO, a little reverb on your voice would make the whole thing more haunting.

Nice Job.

Kenny

Really nice track with a Neil Young feel to it, love that. Your voice is slightly off in places, but that's cosmetic. It's great to come across original talent here and you've definitely got that. Thanx for sharing.

hey dear Dave , it was really cool & lovely.
and the same one guitar was quite communicative & enough,beside this interesting lyrics.
man I'll looking for your album , please tell me whenever is published .best wishes (but this time with a new avatar).sincerely.___Behnam.

WOW!!! Not amateur at all- could totally hear this on the radio!! So glad to hear you're putting this on a studio CD. Is this a CD I can purchase? If so, please let me know when it is ready to do so. Write4heaven@hotmail.com

Beautiful Track Dave

Loving this fleetwood mac type feel!

superb loving lyrics,awesome singing and that beautiful guitar,makes this a fave for me!

peace all the way man!

really admirable,perfect and professional about everything.
exactly every thing.I really enjoyed this loudable acoustic track.best wishes.___Behnam.

Only two reviews. That's ok, I'm here :-)

I really love the idea of this song! You're singing out, and the intensity of the guitar really meshes well with your emotion as you're singing. Love that!

The honor to please him...used to do that.......never works :-)

Anyway, good musical piece!

ok... I found your music thrue your latest post of a track and decided to write a comment here after listening to your music by a random choice election on your trackpage.
This fanpost, is by no means directed only at this single masterpiece of thee arts of you, rather to EVERY single track of yours here for so far.

Simply amazing creations!

I like the vibe of the song. It kinda takes my mind back to the early days of rock and the greats that made rock legendary. Very very catchy guitar rhythm and the chords choice is fantastic.

I agree with Glocke on the vocals being a bit to filtered and sounding small but this is definitely a track with a lot of potential. You could easily turn this into a power metal type of song by adding some drums and heavy guitars on top of this arrangement. Definitely lots of options in there.

Thanks for sharing!

beautiful song. :)

but why did you some filters on your voice? would be much cooler with your real voice, hearing the breathing and the distinctive sound.

anyway, nice feelings in here! :)

Love the guitar man. Little too much Chorus for me otherwise great. I love the vocals.

pure class!.........hope your wife knows just how much your love for her grows!

lovely lyrics,superb vocals and awesome guitar playing!

peace all the way man!

Dave,
Nice track man. May I suggest a little less reverb on the vocals to bring them to the front? Your voice is too good to hide man. I know, I used to lol.
Mark.