Delivery and content of lyrics are well chosen..never strayed of topic which is something most tend to do..I would really like to hear this after you recorded it on a studio mic, add some subtle effect a hook and it should be good to go....real nice track
hey thanks for the feed back. i have just recently re recorded it using better equipment. and uploaded it. check it out. also i have Zenia working on the hook so i will hopefully have a full track soon.
The instrumental is amazing!!!! Seriously, amazing. And you are great at rapping, and I can hear that touch of 50 cent skills. Definitely you have the skill and the voice, but I think you should edit your voice a bit so it doesn't sound like you're in a bathtub, because the instrumental is so deep. I'm sure this could be done really easily!! I'd love to collab sometime, this could use a nice vocal chorus of some singing, seriously... your instrumentals are fab. You're awesome. haha. :D Keep them coming!!!!
thanks for the feed back. yeah i know the vocals are a lil off. this copy was recorded using the mic built into my webcam. i cleaned it up the best i culd. i have just recently boought my recording equipment so ill upload a better recorded version soon. i have been looking for a female vocalist for this track so if your keen to jump on board id love to hear what you can come up with. ill try post a better recorded copy in the next couple days.
Have you heard "Down On Me" by Jeremih ft. 50 Cent ... Very much like this; I know it's still in progress but it's looking good,
Me as well I rap but I wish I could rap as well as you, If you've got any tips I'd love to hear them...
wow being compared to 50 cent is a pretty big call thanks. the only tips i could really give you is practice. its taken me years to rap like i do now but i probably still got a long way to go to. also if you need help with writing there is a free program available called "verse perfect" its designed to help write tracks and gives you a syllable count per line but can help out with rhymes as well if you get stuck. hope this helps
I admire anyone who can rap-I just can't do it!
This is really good and a very catchy song.The music is excellent and I felt it could have been a bit more prominent in the mix,but altogetha I gotta say,this is a hot track!!
That's really good for your FIRST time! Just slight imperfections, but overall still good. Remember quality over quantity - never rush things. Did you produce the beat also? 'Cause the beat was right on the mark.
You have an old school style that meshes well with the beat ...
Experience is the best teacher ... I want to hear more emotion maybe more of an edge to your voice
I think if you could increase the range when your voice is doubled so that the accompanying voice goes either high or lower so they don't sound so similar, that would be cool. You got it though bro! Keep on
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Me as well I rap but I wish I could rap as well as you, If you've got any tips I'd love to hear them...
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This is really good and a very catchy song.The music is excellent and I felt it could have been a bit more prominent in the mix,but altogetha I gotta say,this is a hot track!!
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Experience is the best teacher ... I want to hear more emotion maybe more of an edge to your voice
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Keep it man.
Rashid
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I think if you could increase the range when your voice is doubled so that the accompanying voice goes either high or lower so they don't sound so similar, that would be cool. You got it though bro! Keep on
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Pumped up shiet!
I like it.
Your flow's pretty good!
Pretty good for a beginner!
-Skrib