ok the lyrics are tight i like em, the only thing i might suggest is speeding it up a lil, some parts are just a bit slow and it loses flow. but thats just me keep at it its good
im loving some of these lines very creative. you got imagination that should help you out. you go off subject a couple times but all in all a cool track. look fowad to hearing more of your stuff
yo man im feling this could def have some potential to become great but like mythology said could def use some fx. keep producing these mad beats tho man you got skillz. artists can always add their own fx if they want to
very mellow track. i like it, not sure if it would be classed as hip hop but prob could be turned into one eaisly enough. you got some dope beats comming out keep up the good work
all i gotta say is wow! amazing voice, amazing range you wanna do something with me and i def want you on baord. i would really love to hear what you can do with my candy girl track. so dl a copy and holler back wen you got something and ill record a better copy and let you know wen its up
your stuff is amazing too! im workin on the track, i unfortunately got a sore throat [[bummer for a singer!]] so i'll have some more tea and be at it preeeetty soon. ;D thanks man, that'd be amazing. :]
hey man thanks alot for the revue!!! you fancy doing a couple of verses on one of my new tracks? id love a collab,if so ill send you the track see what we can come up with? thanks again man :-)
not bad, is defiently useable ut it would need to be chopped up a bit in order to loop it, also could do with a hook in ordert o be made into a track but nice work
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