Takes me to a sunny beach in the 80's. I think it's got potential to be a top track. I think the conga could be dropped entirely and the track wouldn't lose any substance because it's quite relaxing. The second clown guitar at 2:43 takes me out of the moment. There's also some technical issues. Some substantial audio clipping between 3:47-3:48. And a few minor audio clipping type noises between 3:54-3:57.
I can't thank you enough for this great review. I'll look at the issues that you've raised, and see if I can fix them. It's hard for me to drop the congas, because they are my new toy :), but let's listen without them and see if I can bear to do it.
Bob
By 'light' I mean weak, lacking in balls, attitude, edge, vibe, body etc.
I make a fairly broad range of music, which also includes a lot of chillout so I often use quite a few sounds on the lighter side of things.
I have to be very careful that they don't come out sounding weak and cheesy. There's quite an art to this. Clean guitar can sound very weak in the wrong context but sometimes adding distortion can be completely wrong so you need to go with the clean but make sure it's not sounding weak.
Various ways to fatten up and give these sounds more attitude but I guess you won't as these are no doubt the kind of sounds you're into. As always, if you like them, go with them and don't change a thing. I'm just expressing my opinion ie honest feedback.
I thought this one deserved some feedback as the musicality is good. Not my sort of sounds but would probably make more sense with a romantic vocal. I still probably wouldn't like it (ie if it were a cheesy vocal) but I do respect it.
Good luck getting to the 80s. There's some serious cheese to be found in 80s sounds so beware!
Many thanks for taking the time to clarify the term.
My problem isn't that I only enjoy the sounds I produce. I'm kind of locked into a place where it's hard for me to see outside. Sometimes I have dialed back the aggression level because I don't want to hurt anyones ears. I'll try to find a way to get nearer the edge for a bit, and see what happens.
As far as honest feedback is concerned. It's far more useful to throw down your honest perceptions, than merely rubber stamp something, so I'm grateful to hear your real opinion
I agree about the cheese that was present in the 80s.
anyway, thanks, and take care
Bob
I think cinematic is a good choice. To me it sounds like tv theme music for a show or perhaps music to into/outro a scene. It sounds a bit dated, like SN said maybe the '70's. I can almost picture Bob Newhart jumping into bed with Susan Pleshette... and Mary Tyler Moore, lol.
It's certainly easy on the ears, relaxing and the mix sounds even. Nowadays, we have these daws with thousands of sounds and effects, might as well use them and see what they do. Nothing abrasive or poorly done, they seem to add a certain feel and atmosphere to the song.
Many hanks for the review Wayne. I think I have too many miles on the clock to sound contemporary. Still I've managed to get to the 70s with this one. Maybe I can get to the 80s next time. :)
I appreciate the musicality in this one. Makes me think of 70s rock quite a bit.
I don't love all the sounds as I find some a bit light (probably the high string part and brass). Actually sounds like it could be a successful 70s romantic pop song. Or romantic film theme tune.
That guitar lead starting 1:17 is really quite romantic but also quite a light sound.
This one should probably have vocals to go with it as I can hear all the necessary changes for a singer and you're guiding them throughout in terms of melody.
Very proficient arranging and instrumentation, a good length and a good, definitive end.
Many thanks for the review.
I tried to add more edge than in the past, but now I'll think some more. Would you mind helping me understand what you mean by "light". It would help me find how to improve these sounds.
I would definitely work with a vocalist, if the chance comes.
I don't know Bob James. I'll listen to his stuff. I don't have any CDs out, but, if you want, you can download any of my tracks. Thanks for stopping by.
Bob
Fantastic bit of musical creativity here...a beautiful journey as it turns out...that sort of parts company with its original self around the 2 min mark...music with feeling that conveys some interesting/peaceful mind pictures...standing ovation from an old guy up in Canada.....Bravo.......Ed
Nice track, very smooth. And what you might have done to the mix seems to sound good. Cool, relaxed vibe. I do like the key change, nice track, very well constructed.
Very nice, Bob. Would make a great soundtrack for something. Your mix is good, maybe up the volume a bit to get full effect of the dynamic range out of the sound system.
well..I see this one has been around a while and I have been my usual slack self in catching up with it....I seem to get along best with minor keys myself...This one carries a lot of emotion Bob...love the instrumentation choices and the straight up melody bits that remind me a lot of good things gone by...really lush choice of backing pads that carry the theme along well...excelllent Sunday afternoon listening up my way...great track...I could use a lot more like this one.......Ed
Bob I wonder what Whitney, or Patty Labell could do with this track.I Like every thing about this track. There's a new Burt Bacharach in town. I will be back.PEACE THE MACK MAN OUT.
This composition is ol' skool in a most brilliant way. I can't believe I'm saying this, but I love the flute (long and quite funny story). I can definitely envision this as a theme song for a movie. Perhaps the end credits on a Clint Eastwood movie!
Hi Mykeal
Many thanks for taking the time to listen and comment. I often try to break out of ol' skool, but I guess I have too many miles on the clock! :)
What a nice sounding production, loved all your instrument choices. The guitar has a wonderful tone. I really liked the flow of this, nice breaks and changes, such a nice track on a Sunday morning! Well done Bob!
The rain has stopped falling and now the sun begins to return warming us with her life giving rays, beautiful track :D Great clean mix too, excellent job!!
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Bob
on Dreams of a Clown by bbedford48
Bob
on Dreams of a Clown by bbedford48
Bob
on Dreams of a Clown by bbedford48
By 'light' I mean weak, lacking in balls, attitude, edge, vibe, body etc.
I make a fairly broad range of music, which also includes a lot of chillout so I often use quite a few sounds on the lighter side of things.
I have to be very careful that they don't come out sounding weak and cheesy. There's quite an art to this. Clean guitar can sound very weak in the wrong context but sometimes adding distortion can be completely wrong so you need to go with the clean but make sure it's not sounding weak.
Various ways to fatten up and give these sounds more attitude but I guess you won't as these are no doubt the kind of sounds you're into. As always, if you like them, go with them and don't change a thing. I'm just expressing my opinion ie honest feedback.
I thought this one deserved some feedback as the musicality is good. Not my sort of sounds but would probably make more sense with a romantic vocal. I still probably wouldn't like it (ie if it were a cheesy vocal) but I do respect it.
Good luck getting to the 80s. There's some serious cheese to be found in 80s sounds so beware!
My problem isn't that I only enjoy the sounds I produce. I'm kind of locked into a place where it's hard for me to see outside. Sometimes I have dialed back the aggression level because I don't want to hurt anyones ears. I'll try to find a way to get nearer the edge for a bit, and see what happens.
As far as honest feedback is concerned. It's far more useful to throw down your honest perceptions, than merely rubber stamp something, so I'm grateful to hear your real opinion
I agree about the cheese that was present in the 80s.
anyway, thanks, and take care
Bob
on Dr Hookey by bbedford48
with taste...
Enjoyed It...
Peace...TG.
Take care
Bob
on Dreams of a Clown by bbedford48
It's certainly easy on the ears, relaxing and the mix sounds even. Nowadays, we have these daws with thousands of sounds and effects, might as well use them and see what they do. Nothing abrasive or poorly done, they seem to add a certain feel and atmosphere to the song.
Nice job Bob!
Wayne
on Dreams of a Clown by bbedford48
I appreciate the musicality in this one. Makes me think of 70s rock quite a bit.
I don't love all the sounds as I find some a bit light (probably the high string part and brass). Actually sounds like it could be a successful 70s romantic pop song. Or romantic film theme tune.
That guitar lead starting 1:17 is really quite romantic but also quite a light sound.
This one should probably have vocals to go with it as I can hear all the necessary changes for a singer and you're guiding them throughout in terms of melody.
Very proficient arranging and instrumentation, a good length and a good, definitive end.
Not my kind of thing but I very much respect it.
I tried to add more edge than in the past, but now I'll think some more. Would you mind helping me understand what you mean by "light". It would help me find how to improve these sounds.
I would definitely work with a vocalist, if the chance comes.
again, Many thanks, and good luck
Bob
on Dreams of a Clown by bbedford48
A very sophisticated mixture, which you have the secret .... Different approaches in this concept make this track a pleasant moment to listen.
Dan
It gives me much validation to hear this review from you
Bob
on Someone Waits by bbedford48
Bob
on Hooked on Air by bbedford48
on Someone Waits by bbedford48
Love & Light,
Mykael
on Someone Waits by bbedford48
I wondered if this piece went to too many places! Gave me a big boost that someone of your great ability liked this
Bob
on Adagio for Synth by bbedford48
Bob
on Down thru Yuma by bbedford48
best regards
Bob
on Down thru Yuma by bbedford48
all the best
Bob
on Down thru Yuma by bbedford48
Wayne
on Down thru Yuma by bbedford48
Very good job!
Cheers,
Scott
on Down thru Yuma by bbedford48
Thanks for listening, and I really value your impressions.
Made my day!
Take care
Bob
on Hooked on Air by bbedford48
Bob
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Bob
on Down thru Yuma by bbedford48
I used that voice harmony at the end a couple of times now.
Bob
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I appreciate you listening and commenting
Bob
on After The Rain by bbedford48
Love & Light
Mykael
Many thanks for taking the time to listen and comment. I often try to break out of ol' skool, but I guess I have too many miles on the clock! :)
enjoy life
Bob
on After The Rain by bbedford48
Wayne
on After The Rain by bbedford48
Made my day!
Bob