Luckyfeatherstudios

i dunno B doesn't sound that good to mee not to discourage you but i think needs some work.

Very heartfelt, a lot of soul in this. Your voice and flow has a lot of potential, I dig that relaxed vibe you have. I think that hook should be covered by a female voice brother, it'd add more flavor. To be honest the autotune wasn't my favorite part however the lyrics are deep, and I would enjoy collabing with you man. Hit me up at broken.scythe@yahoo.com and let me know what track of mine you'd like to try and just send some thoughts/ideas/lyrics on it and we'll go from there.
great track, really though
Peace to ya

The intro cracked me up!! Hey, keep doing what you're doing. The more you put tracks together and play with the effects and features in your daw, the better you will get at it. None of your friends seem too shy so I feel you'll be uploading more stuff soon!

Wayne

I can feel the emotion in the lyrics and can feel that you put a lot into this. You have a decent voice to do vocals. It needs some work but all my tracks do too. So work on it some more and keep learning as you go. It's a long process so don't get discouraged, keep it fun. Don't be afraid to move on to the next idea for a while and give a project a rest, then come back at it later, fresh new mind on it with a new perspective.

Way to go man!

Wayne

yo man i really luv the track and the beat kills. if u're really this beatmaker, there 4 i still gat more 2 learn man. the piano is well played and the flow is nice.

you chorus part needs LOTS of work.

As for that robot part - work on that as well.

As far as the rap part goes it don't even sound like rap.

Yeah I would take this back to the drawing board - and get to
work seriously.

maybe make this an instrumental.

iight, certaintly a lot better on the verses. I actually likes those verses. Buuttt,,i see why yu dont sing often hahah, no offense. But yea good imprvement.

and btw. yu just made my week by saying i inspired you to do it again. I mean, over money, success, women-everything. The one thing i hope my lyics and music do is inspire, thats why i consider KiD CuDi as one of my biggest influences. I mean, people underrate cudder all the time, but the man just like, has this certain thing about him(nooo homoooo!!!) I can just relate to him.
But thank you, that meant a lot haha

i like the enthusism you guys got, really use that in your next tracks, i felt the auto-tune was a little unneccisary for the rap. i understand its one of your first so im not going to hound on things that could be done, my first couple of tracks weren't the best and all it takes is some experimenting and feedback. i thought the beat was good enough for a track, but you would want to increase them in the future, and push the vox back more to fit in. a reverb would help blend vox, and there are various other tips i could give, but id rather let you experiment with different thing to find out for yourself what works best.

there are tuns of tips and tutorials in the forums and i believe there is a section somewhere around here with great tips for mixing and production. and maybe later on sometime we could work on a project together. but for now just keep on trying, dont let anything discourage you and if you need anything at all, ill try my best to help :)