I like the track. Could easily fit into cinematic or ambient. I didn't find it dark myself, I found it more relaxing. Might just be where I'm at. The whole interaction of the music and the listener combining to achieve something different for each new ear.
Like this track a lot! Has a great industrial with the drums... Like what you've done with the hihats and the synth. Fine as is, but I feel like a little panning with some of the synth stuff would really add a lot of depth to the piece. Very cool!
It's a good start and I like what I can hear... but I feel like it could use some mixing. To be honest the bass drum, snare and Hihat are all mixed at a normal level, but EVERYTHING else is incredibly quiet, which is too bad cuz it sounds cool from what I can hear.
I also feel like it could use some variation, maybe a bridge, a drum fill or two some addition/subraction of parts to really make this track pop.
This definitely has potential to be something great though, so keep at it!
If you put this in Hip Hop without the vocal it will get picked up in a second. Nice drum loop.
There is a problem with the vocal there is a really very lound and high pitched (bat sonar high pitch) when it kicks in, it could do with being cleaned up or re recorded.
on My life is empty without you by Fayjay
on This will end by Fayjay
I liked the piece. Well Done
John
on poison in my veins by Fayjay
on Dreams of Blinds beat by Fayjay
John
on My life is empty without you by Fayjay
Very laid back, almost a cool collective attitude sound.
Good one, i like it.
Peace...
on Dreams of Blinds beat by Fayjay
on Cancer beat by Fayjay
I also feel like it could use some variation, maybe a bridge, a drum fill or two some addition/subraction of parts to really make this track pop.
This definitely has potential to be something great though, so keep at it!
on This will end by Fayjay
Wayne
on Dreams of Blinds beat by Fayjay
I like this one!
Big Respect
Greez DJ-DOUBLE
Cheers FayJay
on poison in my veins by Fayjay
on This will end by Fayjay
on poison in my veins by Fayjay
There is a problem with the vocal there is a really very lound and high pitched (bat sonar high pitch) when it kicks in, it could do with being cleaned up or re recorded.
Keep pumping out the choons.