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thanks Joe appreciate the listen and comment bro

thanks Wayne, putting the world to rights is me all over. i aint got a bad life tbf roof over my head, good health close family tight friends, Robin' return invigorated me and got me writing outside the rapping box. thanks for the stop off and comment mate

thankyou bro, its nice to see you around, hope your well too. yeah Robin' had a good return, i jumped on a couple of his similar theme about the struggles of life and the politics involved

Robin it was a great track, i was singing feel held back say we on the right path immediately on listening and had it wrote in half hour. i was a little worried it was to vocal heavy, i tend to write too much tbf, my son has said it before he says you give them too much, Manuela has pointed that out above too, so will take some backing out to give the listener a breather, so check back later, i love this music so will make the changes as ive been advised, its always a good idea to listen to your listeners especially if you sort of agree too

i like your comment a lot levas thankyou :)

i understood ya bro, i only provided the vocal Morash provided the beat, im ok but as long as its non commercial, im sure he'll be fine too just gives us both credit, its more exposure, not that we wanna steal the limelight, we would be pleased to part of YOUR story, good luck

look up

cheers Robin its in a little better shape than the first upload still searching for the best result

thanks dub hope your bless bro, ive never ever done loops or acapellas really as they can be a nightmare if someone uses your stuff, you may have a use for it somewhere else in your work and sometimes you get hit with copyright strikes for your own work, yeah you can sort it but its still hassle i dont want so i dont really bother. but the truth is i never thought my vocals were good enough to be fair :)) maybe i judge myself to critically at times and forget the best engineers can make anyone sound good even me :))

thanks Johnnie appreciate your time and kind words, trying to get your words heard is always a challenge to any writer in any genre, thats were i put most of my effort and its so rewarding when you here a track that you you think can help spread the message, the last 15 years the so called leaders have destroyed a generation of youth and left lots of us older ones feeling more uncomfortable too, war and destruction everywhere i go after these two faced f#ckers with all my heart

cheers Robin, yeah chilled out protest, sometimes its better not to shout, it can carry as much weight being delicate and choosing the right words

cheers bro appreciate the comment, im having great fun, changing up the styles, i'll never be great but i'll always enjoy it :)

thanks Michael i'll take that all day long creator :)) yeah i was unsure on the genre, as i explained to Wayne i wanted to put commercial but its not an option so i have changed it to R&B that was Morash' genre and you suggest it too :)

hi Wayne, i get you on the genre thing, it was the only thing i wasn't sure about. it is a protest sort of thing but as it was soft and delicate, i googled it and the 3 options were as i put in description just went with folk cos it was first but possibly more commercial than folk. and thanks for the nod on the panning. after mixing it yesterday, i had three vocal layers routed to the vocal buss all different, i sang it 3 times and didn't use panning, just stereo separation and volume levels, so i thought, until i checked this morning after reading your comment. i had vocal on track 3, 6, 7, the latter 2 had stereo separation 3 had panning instead of separation, ive corrected that now, 7 was the main vox and i did try panning 3 to the left and 6 to the right, i didnt like it at all so went for separation so big thanks on that, minor errors can make or break a track. is it just me but i put so much in to writing and layout structure, full concentration, yet become sloppy and rush the finishing touches which should be the most important, i just find it incredibly boring:))

ive dm'd you bro, thanks for your kind words. as long as you keep providing great beats, i'll continue to write something worthy for them, your a great talent to have in our community your tracks inspire me and together we dont do bad for comments and listens, long may it continue
your truly appreciated by me for sure

thanks for the kind words dean, never ever feel obliged to comment bro, its always nice to get them but not to be expected, i try to encourage and always try give feedback like alot of others and its good for community spirit too but some are not good with writing, i just try to grow or community of which you play your part and comment too, you have nothing to say sorry for mate

hows it going V thanks for the stop off, and yeah its all in good fun, a looper track Morash, a looper vocal (me) and another looper a so called target, he's not really, just a little fun for the community and the fact people think its believable is great inspiration for mee personally, it does make me smile :)

thank you for your kind words Mykael, i really had fun on this and thought the delivery was good and keeping the humour in music is what i enjoy most

thanks for the positives Steven Canada is really relaxed about its use, seen lots of documentaries on the subject and i think you got it right. i understand its not for everyone but when people can go out drink copious amounts of alcohol cause a disturbance fight and damage property fight and insult police throw up all over the streets get locked up overnight and released when your sober with a talking to, no charge, but you could be sent to prison for smoking a JOINT, its stupidity. they tie everything together and think cannabis is the gateway to stronger things like heroin or crack. its just an excuse and ignorant, they been saying the same thing for 50 years theres no substance to these claims theres far stronger and more damaging prescribed drugs that do more damaged including smoking cigarettes

it was just a bit of fun the Cinco reference, he's a great guy in our community, no beef from me, just my funny side. keep listening mate :))

thanks dean, i had good fun with this, vocal processing is a bloody nightmare tho but i keep trying :)

cheers Wayne, yeah me too, i listen and think were the hell did that come from, i like to keep the fun in it

bro i'll be watching out for it, i will repeat nothing wrong with loopers we are all part of the musical family :)) but you sing too bro you have an identity, your own, push that fact because your good, keep chopping and bringing us your creativity

BCV great comment, i got nothing against loop jockeys really bro, i started as one even though i play drums and keys, and i like Slimm we have good contact when he's around im listening to yours as i write :))

thanks for the check bro, thats such a true statement, i used a lot of processing on this one and i was really happy with how it came out, i try new found skills a lot more now everything on different bus channels stereo enhancing and separation sidechaining the engineering takes the longest but you have to put the time in to get the best results

Cinco i dont want you to stay away bro, you are fully justified in giving your opinion, i like you. seriously.
all im asking for is what am i missing, your comment had no feedback as to what you thought was wrong.
as you can see ive explained to everyone that it was just fun, and i tell you what, you've gone up 100% in my opinion for coming on here and explaining your side. you have commented plenty times with critique as ive been learning and ive always accepted everything from everyone. im not hurt or afraid by critique thats what i want to improve, this was just me doing what ive done all my life taking the piss, im a funny guy and disguise my own insecurities by being outspoken and flamboyant,
i was listening to you last night bro, i always listen to you, i dont comment on all of yours because ive got nothing to add and i hate just putting nice track, i really dont mind people telling me its not their thing but if there's no substance, thats my time to respond with words im quick witted.
ive been sharing with you since day one bro, i have no reason to stop doing that, you said your bit, i said my bit in my way thats all, the lines were good bro and flowed with the music. if you read the lyric sheet bro its me again having a go at rappers, you don't sing, i listened to this track and 20 mins later i had it wrote 2 mins later i read your comment and thought why not :))
its just fun bro accept my explanation and dont ever think i dont value you as a member of our community because i do and will continue to do so, ive been telling beatmaker for time this place needs shaking up a bit, i try to create talking points and this has certainly got people talking :))