dimestop

Really nice collaboration. The outcome is of professional level to my ears. It is a very sensitive approach as it should, and that's truly appreciated. Thank you.

well man its def indie and indie i like your lyrics are good and in parts its pap on with the music the flow i mean great job you did me proud but most of all you do yourself proud well done.

on another note can you ping me another email see if i get this one please

DIMESTOP DELIVERS THE GOODS AGAIN....GREAT TRACK INDEED

chilled and dreamy top work guys

Always So unique!!!

Keep It Up!!!

Legendary!

Vocals are top tier. Never heard anything like this before. I fuck w this style heavy. Track sounds so professional. Hard to find any faults. Earned a new fan with this one

Hey, my friend, wow what a beautiful intro to this piece, hey mate liking your vocals perfect fit for this track for sure, nice voice wow many plays very impressive my friend, very professional sounding track I can see why it has the downloads and reviews it is has well deserved, nothing to fault with the whole piece, one of the better listens since my return back to the fold of the loop family...MUCH respect to you and Oli on this collab mate...favd big time...Peace n much Respect....mosaic...

Nice track. Good work, guys. The voice fits well and the music is nice. Good choice of instruments (I like the pads)...

Hi. High-quality work. The voice went well into the mix. The voice can be slightly louder by 1-2 dB and a little more reverberation. It will be a hit

More than 1000 views in almost just one week. That's quite something. For me, as a producer, it's also a small ray of hope that singing, chanting or rapping, together with the music and the message, can become more of a unit again. That both parts are on an equal footing and complement each other, instead of just putting a rhythm machine, a loop and 2 samples over a voice. We know from experience that when two people join forces, the success and attention not only simply doubles but can grow exponentially. Openness to something new is a prerequisite. The music universe is so vast, let's make something of it :-) Cheers, Oli

Nice work on the track dimestop, great collab.

Very good, hard to describe, very good music and nostalgic/sad vocals, I like the guitar melody

Good job paul! You're giving me 80s vibe with that beat. Amazing sound quality and amazing melody. Fistbump Critical90s.

Mr. Axel is just stopping by. Cheers mate, I hope all is good. Me, better now. So I see that you are still at it with some very top-notch producers. Again, you are a top guy, doing phenomenal work. You never disappoint.

Great delivery on an extraordinary track. I pray that you have continued success because you are a global superstar sensation!

All the best,
Axel

From Beautiful to just downright awesome sounds! Long time no see Dimestop! I did disappear for a while. When I got back on, you're the first person I went to, to see if you we're still uploading. And man have you improved. I really can tell.

The music is nice, a good bed to throw down some cool lyrics like you did Paul! Well told story.

Good collab to both of you!

Wayne

It's a great, artfully made track, congrats to you both. I like your voice sounding natural like this. I think it adds to the authentic human feel and gets your message over straight up. Top notch bro.

Just DMd the second part on soundcloud!

I did wind up going back to school. The hit happend way back in 2014. I just graduated with my Master's degree in December of 2023.

All love brother!

I got hit too... When I was 18 playing ice hockey. I like to think it knocked some sense into me. I was 3 weeks in to my freshman year of college. I decided I had to take a break and recover. On the way home from school after deciding I was not going to go back, I was talking to my mother about my hopes and dreams. When I got home I went into my back yard and smoked a big bowl of Marijuana. I head inside go up to my room. A feeling like ecstasy comes over my body. My ears ringing. Wiz Khalifa pops in on my left shoulder. Says, I'm Wiz. Then Drake pops in on my right shoulder. Says "I'm Drake". Wiz says "Make music.", then I say "I'm writing lyrics" after that they were gone. Later that night I'm thinking about what it could all mean and my left eye was forced to wink six times. So that's why I record. But here is a podcast I started like 2.5 years ago. Send me a message on soundcloud I'll link you to Part 2. It's all still private as I only have the first two parts recorded. It's a story from my childhood. I played the piano on the intro then freestyled the introduction, punching in and out. I think you'll laugh hearing it. Anyway... Hope all is well, lmk what you think.
Listen to S1 - T.S.a.A. Blackjack: Ep 1 - Part 1: The Blue Glow - Part 1 by Johnnie Smoke on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/Dz44VCxifsqtn3pa9

Many thanks to everyone for the nice feedback so far. I find it difficult to categorise the song into a clear musical genre. Hip Hop sounds too American. UK Rap? UK groove? or British Groove Rap? UK Dream Rap? :-)

Truly great Paul! No need to say too much as long as your punching through with the truth. No rush in the delivery! Just some harmonies if you really want to get into "singing" try writing some rhmyes too "oooo's" and "eeeee's" they are magical. You are progressing the forum here for yourself, and others. The most important thing a song can do is progress the forum, I do not care how bad your voice is, or how good. Does your song compliment the day? Does it inspire others? Sometimes showing empathy or describing a bad situation ragging on something a little bit is great. You took a hit to make a play when you were a kid. That's some Ice Hockey Terminology for being a team player. "Take a hit to make a play." Got one coming for looperman.

Sounds really good. Congratulations.

Now thats how a collab should sound like brilliant. lyrics are deep and very cool
sound quality is brillliant and i like it when the bass comes in and out good work from both of you

great job paul - loving what Im hearing from Robin and you seem to be getting stronger and stronger as a lyricists, vocal performer and producer - well done my friend