haha my man great track.. glad to this one to come to lifre with a rap.. gotta love this chicks flow and your awesome beat. a perfect match man.. great one 10/10 brah haha congrats to the both of ya man
dude this track is awesome. i knew it its got hand to the sun in it.. dude nice man.. your girl is lucky to have ya brah and like you said it is a really nice and fresh track, but i dig hand to the sun so i am going to dig this to haha.. great track.. praying for a few more uploads from ya.. and dude it would be awesome to just drive to this track man.. mad skills
Yo Scythe, Always willing to help spice up your drums if you wanna send me a version without I'd be glad to cook up a few loops for ya. Or if you just want some more specific tips on wha tot add where (or what to take away) drums are about the only think I feel confident giving actual advice on...
Yes a 5th and 7th semitone drop is like a pitch thing. I "semitone" is music talk for essentially one note on the keyboard... including black and white keys. So in other words. If you count back 5 keys on the keyboard (without skipping any!) you'd be going back 5 semitones. I still need to get nanostudio... So I'm not sure how pitch adjustment works on it...
Ok brother, I'm reppin late, apologies. I kind of went into a rough cut with college.
Right so, percussion wise I feel you, It isnt my strong suit lol. You know if you want me to try and work over a beat Ill handle and you can flip that as youd like. Call it BrokenThanx Tracks lol(bad I know haha)
I think I understand the semitonal thing now, it switches up the melody.
Im actually FINALLY going to take Time In Reverse right and proper with that new drum variation. Ill let you know where I take it.
Ima return feed on ya right now bro, thanks for listening.
dude i love it.. this a bad ass rap.. hard to think this was one of your first time. haha.. well just awesome.. i love it bro. good flow and a phat beat.. no sh!t brah.. good one. you got a better start than me.. you even spit sum lines to the beat most epic. when i come back out to so-cal we should smash on a song haha.. sadly i am out in lake elsinore about 60 miles out of LA..
greatness to be had man
hope you had a fun smashing on the lines. once you find your self haveing fun with it you never wanna quit the spitting haha
LoL bro you used so many Hahas im not sure if youre complimenting or being sarcastic :P
Ill be positive an assume your complimenting lol
Thanks man, just simple punchlines you know?
lol you wanted to give it a go? lol we still want to add to it actually, another verse or two
LoL well yeah bro, if you want lets get it going! What do you have in mind?
Holy crap.. When you hear the rain in this perspective, it does sound damn good...
I have been giving a lot more thought to do that.. I love ... like on NPR, how they have some dude with a HUGE boom microphone just recording market places and such lol.
Man, This is giving me chills.
I got yer e-mail, and I had... have?.. something in mind.. I ended up just working a ton on it, and kinda overdid it lol...
But anyway, I would definitely dig the opportunity to work with you!
Damn man.. That's beautiful.
Great job.
... Haha
Just a quick thought.. should we collab on this?!
lol
Yeah Livid, thats actually a GOOD idea. Capturing life in sound is amazing. I remember reading CM mag a while back and I forgot who it was...but he said that nature is naturally the sound that inspires us. its our roots in music regardless of what genre. To me, nature can include the habitat we have created, society.
Lol you Id really dig collabing on this! Im unsure how we'd pull it off though? I used a program called NanoStudio on my iTouch to create it...I could export the melody loops I made as wavs and send them to you, with an arrangement chart? (I think I just came up with something new and primitive lol)
Like this,
piano=1 percussion main=2 perc mix=3 piano switch=4
1 1 1 -
- 2 2 -
- - - 3
- - - 4
Haha thanks Dave, maybe when we chill you can show me what youd do with the vox?
Yes! bro im so down, lol Ive been trying to FB chat you but I think you go idle. And you I always tell you bro, even if you just want someone to listen in, send me that link bro. Im always down to listen to some Yesh heat haha.
Sunday bro, im thinking sunday. You open for that?
dude it sounds a bit more like a rap rather than an echo but i love em both my man haha and to DBL thanks my buddy. i hope your right about me getting better i say broken here kicked sum @ss haha on the mixing of this track
Heya guys, I love this one, saw your name of broken scythe and Ive been on to lucky's pellas for a few days now, and this one has all the feel to it i expected and wanted. cheers, im glad its out here. Very curious which way it will improve if you continue! as for a few tips i thought could be useful: the city street effect, or something which gives me that feel through reverb, its totally awesome, only I wish the voice would come out clearer/louder. Also around 3.05 it becomes a bit floaty, its not bad in general but I would love to have something vivid breaking through it at some point, sort of a flashback into the common kinda thing. What happens at 4.10, but more breaking and slashing. I hope this vague impressionistic feedback helps a tiny bit, this is good cause. thnx for sharing
after song is finished, i can't playback the melody in my mind clearly anymore. I say if the melody would stand out a bit more and the bass would be tiny bit thinner, it would make the whole track lighter and exposed, but the bass is a beauty too, so it shouldn't get compressed away or sumthin either.
Lol wow, thanks Neon. i didnt know I had a small rep lol. Yeah I think the reverb fits well. Im actually implementing your advice, the vox is going up, Im going to try and rework the break, thin the bass just a tad and raise the main guitar melody. Ill let you know when im done! thanks for the great rev! im hitting one of your tracks in a sec!
Peace to you.
dude this song is awesome. dude it is really a really good amount of poetry mixed into it with out words even being said. id love to try and write a rap for it.. i already got some awesome ideas. this time ill record my voice at 95 BPM so you dont have re that haha
dude i love it. haha this song is awesome. i love every thing about it. it is really huanting. i am always down to do new track. just point out a track id ill try my best to right a rap that can suit the song at hand.. btw can i upload this to my page or no. up to you bro
dude let me hit you up with some lyrics here. i still have to rap' em
but here ya go
out in the world on the other side my bedroom wall
leaf's change in a solid orange hue ,as the sky fills with gray
it is the end of fall.
so time to reinstall my faith and make way
for these lonely days
since you gone and depart
i lay alone in the white snow
with my broken heart
bought by the a pain from years ago
no ones here not even the crows
that stood behind after the murder of our lost love
i where this sadness like a glove
-------
its winter ice
i fall victim to its device
its winter ice
this false salvation will have to suffice
i am covered from my head to my feet
in this brick of concrete like winter ice
------
i can't walk out my front door
the field in front of my face is white
with a gray moonlit sky
this color i once adored
but it don't feel right with out you to hold each night
that frosty hand of good-bye clutched my heart
i got to make my stand on this earth but i don't where to start
it was like the river of my will has become frozen
any other time a year i am glad your not heart
when December rolls around i remember
my heart has chosen to tear it self apart
---------------
its winter ice
i fall victim to its device
its winter ice
this false salvation will have to suffice
i am covered from my head to my feet
in this brick of concrete like winter ice
its winter ice
i fall victim to its device
its winter ice
this false salvation will have to suffice
i am covered from my head to my feet
in this brick of concrete like winter ice
---------------------
the cold winds beat on my walls to my humble abode
as my heart corrodes and implodes
i demand an escape from this fate
run away from this emotional rape
this death like dictate, left behind by the lost ex roommate
that made a home in my bed, in my head
so i fall to the floor not praying any more
quiver and quake
shiver and shake
ignore all the gore left my that trouble some w-h-o-r-e
i do all i can to restore my faith
-------------------------
its winter ice
i fall victim to its device
its winter ice
this false salvation will have to suffice
i am covered from my head to my feet
in this brick of concrete like winter ice
Yeah man, there you go! sounds good. Hit me with the pella on my email when youre set! and Ill even try and add some FX to that breakdown repeat of the hook, make it roll with the track in a "icy" way.
Great man, Its great to see you put in the work, thanks again bro
Btw, you need me to tweak it? shorten it maybe? or youre solid?
haha dude i could hear some old school gangsta rap to this. i mean i dont have the skills like alot of people on here do, but it sounds just like a phat track they would use.. haha. like tupac or something.. haha i love it brah. good mixing it even has a goth feel to it in the back ground. haha type of music where you blast it in your care just droping your head up and down haha. just ride it out bra haha
aww man i wanted to download this. i find it odd you been only doing this a year but it sounds like you got years of exp ( nerd insert joke here ) haha dude i did get the feeling of rain in this song. dude yes. nice track. very nice and soothing.. 10/10 nothing i could think of to fix it
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Yes a 5th and 7th semitone drop is like a pitch thing. I "semitone" is music talk for essentially one note on the keyboard... including black and white keys. So in other words. If you count back 5 keys on the keyboard (without skipping any!) you'd be going back 5 semitones. I still need to get nanostudio... So I'm not sure how pitch adjustment works on it...
Oh and if you're unfamiliar with sidechaining here's a link:
https://www.looperman.com/forum/thread/110316
btw I got an alternative version with a drum variation and the cello parts for time in reverse on the way...
Right so, percussion wise I feel you, It isnt my strong suit lol. You know if you want me to try and work over a beat Ill handle and you can flip that as youd like. Call it BrokenThanx Tracks lol(bad I know haha)
I think I understand the semitonal thing now, it switches up the melody.
Im actually FINALLY going to take Time In Reverse right and proper with that new drum variation. Ill let you know where I take it.
Ima return feed on ya right now bro, thanks for listening.
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greatness to be had man
hope you had a fun smashing on the lines. once you find your self haveing fun with it you never wanna quit the spitting haha
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you guys KILLED it
like your raps are pretty sick bro
you should have hit me up
ahahaha
let's make a beat
and you guys can rip it
up
ahahahha
Much Respect from LA
Ill be positive an assume your complimenting lol
Thanks man, just simple punchlines you know?
lol you wanted to give it a go? lol we still want to add to it actually, another verse or two
LoL well yeah bro, if you want lets get it going! What do you have in mind?
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Appreciate the listen.
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I have been giving a lot more thought to do that.. I love ... like on NPR, how they have some dude with a HUGE boom microphone just recording market places and such lol.
Man, This is giving me chills.
I got yer e-mail, and I had... have?.. something in mind.. I ended up just working a ton on it, and kinda overdid it lol...
But anyway, I would definitely dig the opportunity to work with you!
Damn man.. That's beautiful.
Great job.
... Haha
Just a quick thought.. should we collab on this?!
lol
Lol you Id really dig collabing on this! Im unsure how we'd pull it off though? I used a program called NanoStudio on my iTouch to create it...I could export the melody loops I made as wavs and send them to you, with an arrangement chart? (I think I just came up with something new and primitive lol)
Like this,
piano=1 percussion main=2 perc mix=3 piano switch=4
1 1 1 -
- 2 2 -
- - - 3
- - - 4
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THIS BEAT SOUNDS EPIC WITH THE VOX!!
luv all the effects you've got goin' on
it sounds epic, you just need to EQ the vox
a bit.
Delay works nicely too!
keep it up fam!
let's kick it soon bro
i've got so many tracks on me desktop
that i haven't finished
maybe i'll send you one and see what we can cook
up ahahaha
Much Respect from LA
Yes! bro im so down, lol Ive been trying to FB chat you but I think you go idle. And you I always tell you bro, even if you just want someone to listen in, send me that link bro. Im always down to listen to some Yesh heat haha.
Sunday bro, im thinking sunday. You open for that?
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after song is finished, i can't playback the melody in my mind clearly anymore. I say if the melody would stand out a bit more and the bass would be tiny bit thinner, it would make the whole track lighter and exposed, but the bass is a beauty too, so it shouldn't get compressed away or sumthin either.
Peace to you.
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10/10 haha
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Seriously simple and hard.
With the right song and vocals u got a hit.
HOLLA!!!!
KEVONE
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but here ya go
out in the world on the other side my bedroom wall
leaf's change in a solid orange hue ,as the sky fills with gray
it is the end of fall.
so time to reinstall my faith and make way
for these lonely days
since you gone and depart
i lay alone in the white snow
with my broken heart
bought by the a pain from years ago
no ones here not even the crows
that stood behind after the murder of our lost love
i where this sadness like a glove
-------
its winter ice
i fall victim to its device
its winter ice
this false salvation will have to suffice
i am covered from my head to my feet
in this brick of concrete like winter ice
------
i can't walk out my front door
the field in front of my face is white
with a gray moonlit sky
this color i once adored
but it don't feel right with out you to hold each night
that frosty hand of good-bye clutched my heart
i got to make my stand on this earth but i don't where to start
it was like the river of my will has become frozen
any other time a year i am glad your not heart
when December rolls around i remember
my heart has chosen to tear it self apart
---------------
its winter ice
i fall victim to its device
its winter ice
this false salvation will have to suffice
i am covered from my head to my feet
in this brick of concrete like winter ice
its winter ice
i fall victim to its device
its winter ice
this false salvation will have to suffice
i am covered from my head to my feet
in this brick of concrete like winter ice
---------------------
the cold winds beat on my walls to my humble abode
as my heart corrodes and implodes
i demand an escape from this fate
run away from this emotional rape
this death like dictate, left behind by the lost ex roommate
that made a home in my bed, in my head
so i fall to the floor not praying any more
quiver and quake
shiver and shake
ignore all the gore left my that trouble some w-h-o-r-e
i do all i can to restore my faith
-------------------------
its winter ice
i fall victim to its device
its winter ice
this false salvation will have to suffice
i am covered from my head to my feet
in this brick of concrete like winter ice
Great man, Its great to see you put in the work, thanks again bro
Btw, you need me to tweak it? shorten it maybe? or youre solid?
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