BrokenScythe

Hi Broken Scythe,
this is just so simple and yet so complicated, u compiled that various instruments so well, the guitar just sounds great and it fits well with the piano...
ayou mixed a violin, that sounds just outstanding 9/10
so i faved it, sounds very great man

keep on working like that, u make nice hip hop beats

halla,
respect

Gabz

You got some great tracks man, lovin the way you cut up the piano melody here.
All the best!

Sure, Broken, put a new track up and don't tell me :-)

This is a very sweet piece, my friend. Fade out the end is all the advice I have to offer.

Faved

John

Hey man..a Rhodes always gets that blue note...quite a sensitive vibe you've got going on here,I also like the sparseness within the composition,it gives a very real quality to the performance and sounds "Live"...my only quibble is the very last note,it just cuts off abruptly,if you extend it with some fading delay it'll sound better I think.....whimsically dark with a little sadness thrown in..sweet! cheers planet :)

Im gonna have to agree with dalis on this one. U need to give more into the delivery...a lil emotion maybe... it sounds monotone unless thts wat u intended it to be (eminems "difficult" and "beautiful" were monotone...maybe u shud check em out)....othr than tht its good.

Now the beat is sick...i love the piano and the songs u used, select lines from immortal tech. and shinoda to name a few, great work...

just need patience and it shud come out nicely

Glad to hear the samples you threw in there, but the timing is a bit off. (Glad to see someone else is into Grieves! =P) The lyrics are great, maybe throw a bit more in the delivery and play with the timing a bit.

Otherwise it sounds good! I think we're gonna have to kill a track soon together!

Beautiful piano sound you got here. Chill out, yet dramatic vibe to it. Like the violin pan for the hook -- as always great work! =)

Yeah, this is one moody piece, but with some hope included. I really dig the rhodes sound! Those choir sounds are great too! Very nice beats! Just so you know it cuts off at the end though, maybe from turning it into an mp3? Good work my friend!

way to set a mood.. when those strings kick in it's just great!

How can I put this.. It sounds as if someone is going through some sadness, but there's light at the end of the tunnel. Then, suddenly, our window on this chap is slammed shut.. Did he make out okay??

:bites nails:

beats are kickin' as always, D 2the Double E..

Toby

you had me four seconds in. Great Panning play and very catchy indeed..

In the Fave bin she goes!

Toby

5 seconds into the intro I loved it... I could imagine a million concepts. "Small" feedback..I would use a different snare

makes me reflect about life, and could be a bit more longer cause u just cut out my reflection thoughts ahaha just kidding bro.

the intro remembers me a bit of some music of kanye west - 808s & Heartbreak album, when u drop it, it's different but an awesome thing u made, the piano seems sad... the rest just stick outstandingly well...

very good job, and keep doing it

Regards, Gabz

hey man, nice song here but here are some things to think about fixing...

-the timing in your rap is off at some points, but JUST slightly
-when you have the other songs come in, cut your beat, or make it so that the other songs are in the same tempo as your beat, i found it hard to stay focused when i heard the other songs over top your beat. so you could just cut your beat out while you play those, then bring it back after and fade it out

thats about it man. i like the song, the piano melody is real nice. keep it up

Hey bro,u need to keep ur head up cause there aint many tracks out there that keep me interested from start to finish and the way u composed that,stopped me from clickn the close icon cause ur alwayz change n the scene of sound continue s lee.Good work

The piano fits the mood perfectly..(just my thoughts...) Everyone has the two voices we struggle with. Desperation can be a motivator. HOW- honesty, openmindedness, and willingness. Stand for something or by default fall for anything. We can't control others, (can u imagine if people could, lol) we just have to take personal responsibility for what we accept in life and for our own actions. :) Keep at the song, who knows, by the time you're done with it, maybe you will feel better from your accomplishments. :)peace man. Thanks for sharing by the way..:) :) :) :)

I go thru it too man.

I mean.. hah on the music side of things, I mean, if anything it's real as f8ck. Very real. There's no cellophane on this man.

Yeah.. Dude.. I have almost quit music ... so many times.

(btw if this is about a girl, I feel bad for you son, cause I got 99 problems and they all aboutabitch lol)

Stagnant flow of hip hop...
Man you know... that's the one line.. is there anyway you could reinterpret that?
That's the one metaphor that you need to sync to make this really solid.
What's a metaphor for hip-hop?

Hmn.. soliloquy? lol
I love that word.. I remember the first time I heard it, I was like hells yes.

feels a lot like how it feels to listen to this man.
hells yes
Good stuff.
I love the imperfections. Gives it character.

I of course could go thru my drivel about pads, and space in the mix, but I won't.. But man I really dug this.
I feel what you mean.

First let me say, I don't know squat about rap, so as far as the vox goes, I think you did yourself proud. As to the music, well, great piano work (and I'm a hack on the keys, so I'm somewhat qualified to give an opinion). The use of minor progressions is always a great idea when you want to impact your listener. So, musically I give this one a 10.

My uneducated opinion - this is great work. You can probably tweak the production a bit, but overall, this is really nice work. You definitely should be proud of it.

Well done.

Bear

Oh by the way the piano was sick as hell and I liked the beat overall so like I said, "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

Look li'l homie I'm not trying to bring you down anymore than you already are, but I think you have the voice but not the flow. It almost sounded as if you were forcing some of the words to fit into the beat as you were rapping. Maybe you need to sit down and take the time to find the words to express how you really feel about what ever situation you are in. Just a few words from the wise. So keep your head up and "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

Another very pretty piece my friend.

Great work, as always

John

Another sweet piano piece. This one also seems a bit on the sad side when it comes to overall feeling, but the bells or glass sounds offer some hope. I like the piece.

Faved

John

I like the piece. Seems to possess a lot of sadness and also loneliness.

Well done, my friend, as always

Allow me to be the first to fav

Heard Nuada's work with this beat, and had to come hear the original! I'm really digging the vibes on this beat! Great bass line! The instrumentation is really cool! This flows really well! Great instrumental! Faved for sure!

Yo man I like this track. Really beautiful melody line. I like the synth work on the upbeats... Personally I might have the high hats match it instead of playing a straight 16, but otherwise this is a really chill groove as always. Hows BM2?!

Yo......that chick has skills my man. I like the guitar too. Nice!!!!