LittleRailTrouble

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The random:
The way ya had the intro on this I had no idea which direction you were gonna take it. I also dig the strange numeric title (did the same thing on one of my first few songs as a way to abbreviate sayin- "A $20 for a 40 ounce" = 8-20-48-40, dropped down to 8:20)

The good:
I really love the bassline on this along with the way you cut the beat in and out (a mixing style/technique that I love doing too). And the hydraulic effect you've got here and there was pretty sweet as well.

The bad & suggestions:
Dunno really what the gun cocking & blast have to do with the song (though they were cool for the different intro). If it were my mix I'd think about swappin 'em out for a CD loading or putting the needle on the record sound bytes (to go better with the hydraulic lift SFX you have on the track (might wanna ditch the broken glass SFX, because it began to have a 'canned sound' quality to it- ie, you could tell it was a loop). I'd also consider fading out the end (possibly touching back on what you did at the intro) and also work on extending the mix out about a minute or so more. Beyond that decently done. Lates!

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The random:
The beat on this reminds me of the way I arranged the stuff on my track Rip It (the spray can like shaker is what actually inspired the name).

The good:
This is a cool lil sample you've got goin on here. I could easily see you doubling or even tripling it's length if you were to go back and mix this more. Like I was sayin above, the beats on this are really catchy. As are the bass parts.

The bad & suggestions:
Dunno why, but I'm not that keen on dub & dubstep stuff. So naturally I'm not really diggin the voc-sams ya used on here. Without 'em I'm thinkin that you'd have a pretty bangin Glitch tune in the works. Later on!

I like what you've done here. Sounded D&B to me at first. I agree with djcodex as far as the classification. Nice work on the tune!

its not drum and bass more r and b or slow electro mate try those genres ok but well done an this yeah

ok.. so I'm guessing your pretty new at all this music making stuff and your enjoying it... this for ME ain't dubstep.. wheres the wobbles? wheres the sub? everything is abit mono tone.. samey.. your levels are abit off too cause the track is quiet but that might just be the looperman player..

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dont but disheartened... there's definitely some promise.. keep 'em coming