JohnSmokey

nice story Johnnie as always, they obviously dont know your voice and delivery like we do, this is you. keep on with the uploads bro, you know what you want :))

Beat is dope and yes you need to mix and master your vocals. Nice track.

i was just giving recommendations not being mean

you need autotune, mix your vocals better, sing on beat PLEASE, make better lyrics, im sorry but its uhh ...

Thank you for sharing
Enjoy & Love how the bass comes in
So smooth
Don't have any issue with the focus point
Hop all is well as is with your hip!
Much love -EazyBeatz
:)

Man you're producing skills are on point though man I like the way you be sampling s*** man!nice one doggie!

Love it. Straight up awesome!

Oh, I highly recommend doing open mic nights. I've learned so much both about playing and writing, and the atmosphere is always supportive.

Btw I see my comment may have come across as quite rude, but there's a perfectly good reason for that: I'm a total dickhead.

What I mean to say is: I always enjoy your tracks! But somehow I seem to have forgotten to write that, my apologies!!

100% Smokey John! And you used a great beat!
See if you can either use a bit more tone in your vocal, or else, do it more as a rap. I think that will add a bit of dynamic to it.
Good luck man, every track you make is better than the previous!

Mellow vibes Mr Smokey. Enjoyed this layed out on my back with eyes closed. Sweet track.

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Appreciate that homie I love remixing man so I had fun with this man I got to do more of you

great intro John build straight into to your flow another good written piece and delivered in the Johnnie Smoke style, another good job bro, had a few from you of late

I got you it's my day in the rain is what I'm doing but I'll be done today I'll send it to you

Actually I'm working on one right now so I'm good I can't remember what it's called but it's one of yours though lol

I was wondering homie if it's cool if I remix one of your tracks and post it up on here

this one dope!
I like your style of rapping on this one

3 on the bounce bro, nice flow, slow mo, nice story, paradise with a hotty, king of the world woo, thought you was rapping about me fam :))))) go get 'em bro

Hey John, I have to agree with you it was more about the story telling in this instance which you did well. liked the opening and ending as well.

Peace

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goooood

Not bad homie it's pretty good I think your lacking a hook though. From another voice. That's just my opinion

that should have been Johnnie, typo bro :))

nice intro, this is a different vibe from you bro, got a rock edge, that guitar is fire, slightly different fx on the vocal, and it is a little quieter so the muusic shines too good lines as always Jonnie

That's how I look at it homie I create for me not for anybody else. Nice flow homie I just feel like you're a little bit off beat. You came out on point and then all of a sudden I don't know for some reason maybe just it's just my ears.

nice intro bro, i know that flow anywhere now bro, top job as usual great bars and story, well written, i always concentrate on the script we are lyricist its important to get the right lines as you know. its great to have you around, keep getting the groove back John

Hi and welcome back.
This is a very good return with this track.
sounds very good !!