JohnSmokey

v deep emotional lyrics and the tune carries the sombre tone of the track v well

Yes, very interesting lyrics, with many thoughts gathered in a song.
I sure liked the music that supported the lyrics and I think that your voice is adequate for this form of rapping.
Overall pretty nice work, I only missed a better ending.
Well done.
My regards, Anthony

You have chosen nice music for your rap. I liked it.

Hey that's a nice combination of spoken lyrics and bluesy track, not sure if this is americana type of style but that's not important. Thanks for sharing.

Howzit? Yoy know I like your stuff, you have a distinctive and unique style and delivery, plus your lyrics often resonate.

I know what you mean with going back and reworking stuff. I've been going back to some old tracks that I think are worthwhile or mean something to me too, remixing and remastering... It's a catch 22, rather be working on something new but hearing what can be better with a bit more know how. Anyhow, have a good day man and keep at it. Zoot.

This track has a dope! beat and you have added a very unique and interesting twist GREAT! vocals very laid back! Kudos!

A very interesting opening. I like the rhythm and it is a bright, upbeat piece. Vocals need some work but this is a promising framework. Kay

This beat is real piece of music . I like it and the vocals as well .

thumbs up. Seen the bluesy tag and expected an harmonica or slide guitar ... and then trap drums yay. super sound well put together

Great outro I like how you ended it

SMOKEY! This beat matches your swag big time! These guitar tracks match u the best! Numero uno part flow is dope

nice track Johnnie, good vibe and lines great beat and guitar is sic

idk if you're kidding or not but i'm cracking up

nice work Johnnie, nice story and good lines spreading the love bro, reminiscing, yep i listened to all 5.27 thought you should of played out with the music but thats just my personal choice, it really didn't spoil it, loved the slow vibe, keep em coming

Nice one! Good sound, I find this a great and unusual mix of blues and hip hop. Good guitar and bass sound

Nice! Love the attitude you created, mean, badass feel to the track. Music and the vocal delivery work so well each other, great job John!

Wayne

I like it i also think it works well its different and thats what stands out cool track.

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All right here we go doggy I hope you like it life's a trip remix

Life's a trip I got the remix I'll be back but let's listen to this.
Some roadhouse music that's right! I can definitely see some strippers getting down on this lol
It's that guitar 2+2 is quarto dope

Cool, I like your guitar work, great track!

Sweet dark tones and powerful - blues dirge with hip hop overtones. I can understand CC's comment about the beat and the vocal competing at little but for sure its 'pretty dope'.

Nice one homie I just think that the beat and your vocals are competing with each other but that's about it man nice flow the part where you go out on your own terms those bars right there pretty dope!

Lovely work Johnnie

Roll it up! Nice club track! Beat is dope

nice flow homie, good vibe, big up Johnnie