JohnSmokey

yes bro, good to see you back around and here the flow, nice bars well written, hit the point, 'keep my parents awake' sic line and sheesh was fly bro nice work

This is such a sweet track & your flow/lyrics as always sounds dope! NICE! work.

Wish
Pattern recognition upon thee
Woah
What?
Know baby yoda
oh
Keeping you great is what screams of sunsets boulevard
Ayo
Know your
hour on rick n morty
Trends
Knot giving a fuck is what
Being Stagnant
Ends.then
the word that makes my world
Yours
Works by the hour
And I time travel
You could
Bet it On Green bay
Aye
Knot the gum drop buttons
Bro!
If I could believe a lie it be to believe a fairy tail life before your hour produces a new shade of lime green on my z6
Foh!
Cuh....
Remind me to buy you some paint
Might as well fall asleep
you already know you like me
Will understand your anonymity floats

Thank you for sharing
Much love
Many thanks-EB
;)

Did you freestyle on this homie kind of feel like you did sounds like it nothing wrong with that got to get your practice on still dope though

nice work as usual bro, you been dropping lots of late John you been finding time eh, im working on a couple but time is an issue at the moment, my daw aint been open for weeks stricyly listen as i pop in

Lovin the r&b vibe tracks your rapping on bro, nice slow flow, good bars yet again delivered as I expect

Hot Hip Hop. Nice choice for the backing track. Nothing wrong with a little LOOT!!! PEACE. T576 OUT.

Hey J,

You come with it! and that is best beats and lyrics, like I have said before, I like that nonchalant laid back style of yours, it's so coolio/chill...yea this is kosher! and your riding the beat like a champ. Keep doing your thing! Salute!

I can feel it JohnSmokey, nice job.

Very classy and great sound with good lyric and vocal : )

nice lyrics bro, delivered great in your unmistakable style, the music is great too, enjoyed the listen mate

good beat , good voice !
nice job my friend !
Michael

Hey mate - this sounds like it's clipping or is that just the lofi hip hop style? At any rate - another nice rap and good performance and love the horns - bit of an earworm

Good beat selection JohnSmokey, love the lyrics.
Nice work on the project.

nice flow and delivery John, great lyrics, well written, great beat and them keys are lovely, keep firing

Great voice great lyrics man. Shooting from the hip. Always enjoy your stuff. Have a good one.

love that soul bro, great female vox, slick vocal, i like your yankie accent, your on fire here, good pace and flow and gorgeous music, i might drop tmro

oh yeah nice intro - that 808 /kick sounds like its clipping a little to me but as Ive said before I love your voice and the lyric is good. Sweet. Great outro too : )

That female vocals is dope. With beat sounds original. Sometimes u remind me a lil of Aesop Rock

Love that beat, nice work.

This is superb. Keep it up, OK? ;)

- Shadow Trait

Hm, neither the compressor not the conversion to MP3 should have that effect, but I've used some (free) conversions tools in the past that were less than stellar.
Have you tried exporting from Pro Tools as MP3?
https://help.digitaldjpool.com/en/articles/3767247-exporting-mp3-files-from-avid-pro-tools

Good luck man, you know I always like your tracks!

Just a little rap but you didd a great job.
Beat and voice Sounds good to me

I like it, as usual, but I do note there's a lot of distortion. If that's intentional then great; else consider to dial a couple tracks back. It seems to me the master is in the red zone and the vocals may be clipping by themselves too.
Which again, if you intended that great; but I think this track would sound even better with a smoother production :)
Good luck man, it's a good track, as always!

Hey, good to hear your voice again, and flow and words that sound genuine.