Thanks bro, yeah it was intentionally done to be more poetic...like instead of the usual 1,2,1,2 I went 1,2,2,1 and stuff like that. But thanks for the feedback tho, much appreciated.
The quality, flow, and message really are all on point man, did you make this beat yourself as well? Well done sir. I have plenty of beats laying around for free by the way if you are interested o.o
Now this was prety pleasant to listen to. loved the melodie and also loved the lyrics to it as well. So yeah a prety solid track indeed. Next time try mixing it down a bit more to get a even more balanced like track. But yeah i digged it. So well done. Keep on creating & listening. And have a good one, Verdi
Yes, I didn't realize till a few years back how important mixing is to any record just to get it to sound right. Nowadays mixing is one thing I'm trying to focus on and trying to find engineers to get the right mix.
But glad to hear you liked it and thank you for the feedback.
lol bro, you're probably using in ear headphones right? If you're listening with something bigger that has more bass it might not be that sharp. But thanks tho.
Hey on paper I love the idea but you lost me at the flow and the lyrics are too harsh. I know the feeling cause on one of my songs I had release a few years back was a message about haterz but it crossed that line of too angry. So the first lyrics were alittle bit harsh
Michael! Thank you so much for bring up the content, that was the one thing I wrestled with the whole time.
That's why I intentionally put in lyrics like
"...that deserved an lol...I just be playing I'm sure you can tell..." then I ended the bridge on a softer note after that 2nd verse.
Like'if I made a budget with my schedule you won't get any days' lol, that's such a weak diss, if anything I was hoping it wasn't too mushy.
But again good observation, it really wasn't a "hater" message it was just a fun idea I came up as the name of the instrumental on YouTube is "Heart" so I thought Heart Emoji.
PS: this is just part 1 or a 2 part series I'm doing for valentines day, the 2nd one is much more all the way "mushy" but it's supposed to be for valentines day so it makes sense.
Sorry about the paragraphs and essays man, that question is something I legit thought about so I got excited when I saw your comment. Thanks for your feedback!
For sure bro, I'm looking for these kinds of beats that have a great melody to them cause I do the raps but I really really enjoy coming up with the melodies and the hooks just as much, if not more.
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love the vocals floating thru
dope work
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Now this was prety pleasant to listen to. loved the melodie and also loved the lyrics to it as well. So yeah a prety solid track indeed. Next time try mixing it down a bit more to get a even more balanced like track. But yeah i digged it. So well done. Keep on creating & listening. And have a good one, Verdi
But glad to hear you liked it and thank you for the feedback.
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That's why I intentionally put in lyrics like
"...that deserved an lol...I just be playing I'm sure you can tell..." then I ended the bridge on a softer note after that 2nd verse.
Like'if I made a budget with my schedule you won't get any days' lol, that's such a weak diss, if anything I was hoping it wasn't too mushy.
But again good observation, it really wasn't a "hater" message it was just a fun idea I came up as the name of the instrumental on YouTube is "Heart" so I thought Heart Emoji.
PS: this is just part 1 or a 2 part series I'm doing for valentines day, the 2nd one is much more all the way "mushy" but it's supposed to be for valentines day so it makes sense.
Sorry about the paragraphs and essays man, that question is something I legit thought about so I got excited when I saw your comment. Thanks for your feedback!
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