TheFemiFactor

Really dig this one! super chill and relaxing.
great vocals!

this is a good track bro.
Well done.
Jamid

awesome work this is a crazy production i love it
-CAP

real nice track fam

Awesome vocals both your and female. Beat is simple, but what you've done with it is art. Nice work keep it.

You got a good formula, and the hunger. Keep improving, peace.

You left, saying that I wish you happiness, just like a thief stole all my money, and also said a message, congratulations to make a fortune.

Nice!

Awesome track and message, a fav for me, need more music like this, Larry

Your voice sounds fantastic man! I love the harmonies

Laidback soul, I love the female background singing. sounds great!

Great job on the track bro..the melody that you created over the track is excellent, yea, you rocked that beat, and turned something simple into something special..that alone gives you a heads up on alot of folks I have heard. Good work bro.

Sounds good man. Other than the vox mix, the track has a cool vibe and a nice beat.

TA

First off, good job on the song, it sounds good. As far as delivery goes some things that help with delivering vocals:

1. Memorize lyrics before recording
2. Rapping is a type of sport, do facial stretches to warm up.
3. It should sound like you trying to have a convo with someone a block away when you spit (loud voice).

Peace man, good luck to you.

So, generally I'm not in to rap all that much (I'm old), but I did like this track a lot. You've got a good voice and I particularly liked the sections where you were singing. I think that you could improve the track a lot by re-working the mix. It sounds a bit muddy in parts, especially where you have the auto-tuned vocals. Too much mid-range I think. The clarity of the rap sections was much better. The vocals stood out distinctly in the mix. I was taught that each instrument in the track needed to be set in its own area of the frequency spectrum. If you've boosted the mid range frequencies of the auto-tuned vocals, I'd roll that back in your equalizer and see how it works in the mix. If it's in the original audio file for the vocals, then cut the bass and mid-range and see how that sounds.

I'd just play around with the mix to see if you can get each element of the track to stand out clearly on its own. It's good and you should definitely keep at it.

dope bro
keep workin man i fuck with the vibe mixin only thin that i think u not on same level as
you got a dope style keep it up man
-CAP