BaoBou

real smooth Bou, love the guitar opening, well written vocal and a nice delivery too. it sometimes just works like that mate, i use to plan things and get frustrated not getting the results, something then clicks and i go in another totally different dimension and get a surprising result.
now i just put some music anything really, open my daw blank and get creative from nothing. good job as always playing and singing

Very smooth jazz track. Nicely done!

Excellent song writing, and musicianship too yes. Dreamy track, very well done and am enjoyable last listen before sleep!

I really like the lyrics, nice.

It's great we can use this technology to record our ideas, change them at a keystroke and capture our musical thoughts at any given moment. It's a great tool for the creative music maker.

As far as songwriting, I can come up with more than 10 song ideas in as many minutes with changes and lyrics. Im not bragging but literally, song ideas just pop up in my head once I put that guitar in my hands and I get to work. Freaky in a way but kinda cool how the creative part of the brain works.

Always a good listen!

Wayne

Good work as usual BaoBou

love everything about this one. the structure is reminiscent of music I don't really hear getting made much anymore. however it feels so original. I'm also a sucker for the type of lyrics your singing, to me -its perfect poetry. great job.

Ahh the mysteries of creativity, I have learned a long time ago, that sometimes when it doesn't work, another approach with no criteria or design unlocks the creative mind. I always liked Brian Eno's Oblique strategies can also unglue a stuck muse. Cards that will say write a song with the color blue in mind, can really make you reach deep into your creative mind without added pressure of results. So nice tune my friend.

BaoBou. We’re getting there. The next round will have more rounded edges sound wise with the overall mix. This has awesome bone’s. Peace.

Mark

I did watch some of Blake's vids. Quite an earful, production was varied and different on each of the tracks I listened to. I can see why you find his music interesting, at least.

I once wrote a song called Black Clouds Complaining. It was about storm clouds being described as having human traits and comparing the thunder and such like people complaining. I made the musical arrangement on the drums not normal meaning I had 2 chorus's in a row, the change 2 or 3 times n a row... as an exercise to make a sensible song out of the weird drum arrangement. Song came out good, my production and mixing were shite at the time.

"Look outside, it's raining, the black clouds, complaining"

Cheers!

Nice song, I love the chord structures. As I love Bowie and Ferry even more, this reminds me of a Japan tune
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wEdX0veLihM
I agree with Manuela, the synths get pushed back too far.
I would love to hear how this one evolves. I just ordered a cheap Stratocaster knockoff from Japan to get my guitar chops back in line. Will go from there.
Steven

We zijn weer terug en de eerste track die ik hier beluister is van jou.
Je probeerde iets uit en kijk hoe geweldig het is geworden.
Ik beluister het niet op de manier als Manuela met haar ervaring maar in mijn oren klinkt het geweldig.
Ik vind trouwens de outro ook helemaal geweldig.
Je stem klinkt goed en duidelijk.
De tekst moet ik nog even vertalen maar voor dit geheel een groot compliment.

love that intro Bou, great track well written great vocal too you sound like your enjoying yourself lots here, great 80's vibe James Blake eh, great artist but this reminds me of roxy music, heaven seventeen bowie that era its sounds so authentic mate like others have said drums guitar synth and the vocal tone and range a fantastic era of music to right i was bopping my head and shufflin my feet great job

So will you reveal the artist you are trying to emulate? To me I hear some Bowie in it but there is too many electronic tidbits. Bryan Ferry will be my guess then.

Big reverb on the vox. All the instruments sound fine, well placed, well mixed. I like songs that reference clouds in their lyrics, so many ways to express feelings, emotions, actions with cloud descriptions.

We have so limited genre options as real music makers here, there's not enough genres crossed with rock. But dance?!?! lol just kidding!

Wayne

Dance huh? Alright!
That main sound with guitar in beginning what instrument was that? Hey I like this you know something's good when your head is nodding! Very 80s which is my favorite era of all music!
Good work man everything sounds great you sound good

Hey Bao, not a genre I do much even though I have done one or two over the years, think I have one still up on profile, great vibe to the overall sound of the track, you on vocals? cant say I could pick up anything that is out of place, been out of music action for many years, enjoyable listen my friend fav'd Peace n much Respect mosaic...

Hey Baobou.
Gezien mijn reactie destijds vond ik het toen al een goeie track al vond je het zelf een zooitje.
Ik kan mij niet meer herinneren wat het verschil is met toen maar in ieder geval is het een goed nummer die met goeie stem gezongen is .

Groetjes,
Rita

This has a nice little groove to it the lyrics sound good! also. Very well done here GREAT! Work!

Hi there Baobou, been too long since I've listened to one of your creations. Great upbeat tune, you slipped some pretty nice harmonies in there in a couple of places. Solid guitars and keys too, though no surprise there. All the best from Down Under.

this is right up there with Adele for me, :) great lyrics , you have a great tone to your vocals the music sort of reminds a bit of Stevie Wonder.

there is much joy in this tune! yes!! it made me smile from the first note, love the words and singing. great job!

Great example of some retro old school funk. Clean, professional sounding mix. Great job.

GREAT FN WORK. THAT'S REALLY GOOD MUSIC.

Very clean, professional sounding mix. Great job.

Ha ha Ja het werkt goed!!
Als dit even een test is dan is het wel een fcking goede test lol.
Je stem klinkt heel goed op deze beat.
Goed gedaan hoor!!

BaoBou. So my current situation……. I’m listening as I’m on my way to kick it with my mom who is 91 and lives 2 hours away and she’s sharp as a tack. Something about your track and driving through the countryside is making my day! I’m really digging this because it’s uniquely you. Plus at the risk of sounding redundant, I still cannot unhear Donald Fagan! Nothing technical is interfering with what you have shared musically. Great job Buddy:). Also I’ve got the .als project files and will be jumping on them soon. Peace.

Mark