CalifKen

much better than the first time that i listened to this...by what i can remember...you are very talented and i agree with Donnie on what he said about the lazy azz people on here not wanting to write reviews. i really dig this track man nice job.
DJ SYNTHIZIZ

WOW... I love the mix. So many elements of dance electronica etc. In my opinion blended perfectly. Love this track. I think this track could rock the dance floors here in China. Again love the track man.

damn dude,u realli keep impressing me,ur veri versitile, if dey didn't use dis,u shuld letme try sumthng,i'll write wrdz 2it,ima gr8 song writer(not self proclaimed) i write sum wrdz,we get sum1 2sing it,an perhaps i'll do hip-hop 2it,but sutn frum d hart like i usually try!stay up,i wana c wut nu stuf u kum up wif,ima thro dis on my faves.peace...

~T.R.I-09~

im feeling this a lot, i love the organic feel my favorite. i appreciate the feedback by the way. i have nothing to say about this except fantastic work

I love how this trips over itself but always seems to pick it back up again! It got me bopping my head, nice job so far

(nice video ;))
i agree with the writer before me. very experimental, and your vocals getting better and better.

cheers Frank

Now this is what I want to hear! A frikin' song! Not some guy rapping about how cool he is or something. Great track with a wonderful voice working! Where can I get an acapella like this?

This track is so cool and out of the ordinary! Religious is an interesting genre choice too. The production on this track is very professional, it sounds great. Your vocals are really cool, I've never heard anything quite like it! Very nice drum work on this track too. I wish I could make tracks that are this engaging! Very enjoyable track!

Sounds like a very emotional track. Makes me want to hear the words. Cool track!

heck of a track i would love to hear some vocals on here keep it comin' hollA

Really like this track dude, loving the way it morphs as the track progress's. The beginning Almost sounds like some lost Quincy jones groove from the moog mad late 70's early 80's.

Nice work :)

Not standard at all.. and that's why I like it!! Great job man!

Very interesting here. In the beginning it sounds like hip hop almost. Interesting how it build into what it does. Good job switching it up. Makes the listener keep listening. Good job.

The vocoder vocals sound great, your tracks with lyrics get better and better.

Wow. This is one I've got to come back to. This is really interesting! (back when I'm not so non-verbal)

Very experimental vibe with this. The harmony intervals on some of the vocals (fourths )are an unusual and interesting choice. Nice vocoder sound too. very different - good work.

I especially like the warbliness of this track makes me kinda woozie, but i like it, Im digging the drum loop and the drum loop stutter at the cresendo of the first build up! I appeciate the layering as the song goes on, not your average repeatitive factory loop techno i hear more than i would like while surfin through tracks on this site, I also must state I definatly like the spooky accapella, & the guitar synth that backs it up! Overall the mixing sounds pretty clean, so I have to say this is a good track all around! As a whole, Definaly like it!

Wow! This is so cool and fun, utter happiness! Very cool synth work on this one! Definitely a departure from your recent work! You haven't lost a thing by trying new things, you seem to have actually gained some control over your signature sound. Great work!

Definitely a big improvement, this sounds really professional. Nice mix and mastering!

For me I'm feeling that the mix is too closed in...know wot i mean. It feels like the whole track is being played in a small box. I think that may be why you feel the vox are too thick. What I would do is I would take the vox out of the mix first. Then concentrate on getting a bigger sound on the instruments. So drums, bass, pianos etc...till they have more space in there. Then I would re introduce the vox, and play with a little thinning out on the eq side first. Then a touch of reverb, just a touch tho. Then drop the volume of the vox and bring it up ever so slowly in the mix until you feel its right. Burn a cd, play it in the car....go back, adjust the mix, burn a cd, etc..Of course you'll have a guide track you use..i would say maybe a James Morrison track should give u a good idea of how it COULD sound ...Best of luck mate. It's a great song and with the right mix it'll be brilliant! Hope that helps a wee bit!!

Crazy, the synth sounds like a voice?! I listend this track a few times and i heard a (synth) voice - or not?! *lol*

And yap, we do very similar things with the synths. Nice :)

I like this track (... i heard a voice *lol* thats cool). In the beginning a touch of .. mmh .. i will say Electro?

Oh, the Bassline with (Trance)gate, i haven't any more heard something like that, great ;)
Yap a smoothly thing, i really like it.

cheers Frank :)

instead of layering the vocals when you want them to sound smooth just add a little bit of reverb and your set

it may help to see it on my daw.. but ...
i think what you are really getting at is keeping all the dynamic range in order...

it sounds professional and great to me..

I would prefer a ... better piano.. and bass..

but vocally, i don't see a problem..

http://www.kvraudio.com/get/790.html
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dynamic_range_compression

Still...
I have to say, I don't see anything wrong with your mixing, that is really a GREAT mix...

what my thing is, is the quality of your instruments.. they sound too forced..
Can you add some velocity touch? or some reverb?

REGARDLESS!!!

FAVED
RECOMMENDED...
(wish i had a copy)

:)

great stuff
love the song.
i will add my 2 cents in your thread.
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Good track man very well put together something that I could suggest is maybe a lil reverb on the vocals to give it a full ambient sound. Play around with that maybe and see if it fills up the vocals more.