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Dont think like this man
who doesnt hate his voice?
its normal, cuz everyone think their voice are so bad
and they hate their voice
and I truely say
I liked your vocie
and I think your voice is beautiful
Kindest regards
J_*

Greetings
the song is great and...
are you the singer of this song?
Kind regards
J_*

I`m diggin this one big time Kyle...it has a nice loose live feel...and I think that comes from just playing & singing the way you do....actually the production is pretty well done...(I`m listening on my studio headphones ..ATM-M50s)...nice job on the lyrics...I like the deep bass (I go for it often) so don`t tame it too much..You have a style I always enjoy.....well done...hope all is well down your way....Ed

Hi, its great to hear some slide guitar on here.
I only listened to your song with my laptop speakers so no critique from me.
I feel like playing some slide myself now.
Cheers
DB

Sound pretty good, tho vocals are flat in some areas. Production wis every good as well

hello again

I had a chance to listen on better system and I really liked the overall message and your vision.

However, my observation and complain is that there is no realistic separation between instruments (regarding to the arrangement and the actual placing the layers/players within a composition). This happened to me many times when making everything myself so do not worry.
For example: there are uncontrolled frequencies coming from the bass guitar clashing with other layers - especially with middle frequency range of the electric 'rhythm guitar' section. So as a result it sounds as if there were at least 2 different chord progressions played simultaneously but in fact those are only 4 simple chords basically.

Just my opinion. Not sure if the problem is in actual playing or mixing. Maybe both or somewhere in between.

Apart of all that the vocals are cool and I truly appreciate the work you did with songwriting as well as the fact that you performed and mixed everything alone. Didgeridoo teaser was nice as well as stereo illusion on it and I really liked all slide guitar additions throughout.

Greetings, Alex

Nice one! The resonating bass is a really killer one! :)
Btw, thanks for the quality loops you uploaded until now too!

regards, traz

hello

this is very fine and very bluesy. I am listening on poor laptop speakers now so there is not much to say in details.
I really liked what you did with EZ patterns - the slow tempo off beat sort of drumming works nicely. Interesting that you have both acoustic and electric guitars within the same composition - it is quite unusual but it really seem to work. I am going to download your song and will take a listen again later on headphones.

Congratulations on songwriting and production.
Alex

Great recording and production ! The overall feel reminds me alot on REM's song "Drive! ! Excellent!

Compliments______Orlando

Hi

Such a lazy feel this - it works very well. Love your vocals and the additonal harmonies. Nice slide acoustic too. Great track. Love it.

Richie

Super slow western acoustic rock with those stunning choruses...first 35 seconds I thought it would be a Bon Jovi cover but fortunatelly not...:-)

Great track Kyle, hats off and handshake, Danke

Musically the song is awesome. (Neil young like). Mixing wise it could use a slightly different touch. The guitars are well panned, but I think there could be a bit more stereo seperation or widening. I agree with static about the kick. (maybe eq the kick by lowering the mid range) I think with the vocals I would double them with a bit of chorus for strength. But as a song this song is beautiful.
Cru

This is done really nicely with lots of good taste....thanks for sharing!

Compliments______Orlando

i really eff with this

Hi. This isn't really my type of vocal song but the music is well made and arranged so I'll focus on that instead.

The drums are good and effective but I'm not that keen on your kick drum. Not that big a deal - I'd just swap it out for another. Maybe it's a bit "too rock", just not quite a suitable timbre for this track.

Nice little fading in intro with some harmonic beauty before the gently strummed guitar arrives. Then lead electric work is effective before the first verse. Piano also sounds and I think there's probably also a cello so quite a full arrangement within 20 or so seconds.

Left panning on the hat adds a good stereo spectrum.

The lead guitar breaks work really and then the same sort of playing is sat well behind your vocal. No clash at all. The whole thing seems well mixed. Acoustic guitar well recorded.

Good length and a gentle end with a bit more high string work.

Overall: fine work and my only gripe is with that kick drum. But keep it if you really like it.

Glad you got around to doing this one Kyle...nice job on the lyrics & delivery...love the acoustic accompaniment & the little electric guitar bit work a treat in support...fantastic bit of musical work...fav....Ed

Kyle,
Fav'd. This could be a classic dude! You have a gift with your voice and I can hear you have really been practising that guitar. I am sharing this to my Facebook page if it works from Looperman.
Mark.

P.S. You should be very happy with this one brother.
M.

You always have great stuff, IWE. I like the emotion you carry in your words man. Beautiful piece of art here, no critiques I can offer at the moment.

ER

I smell real music here...very cool and moody track Kyle...the small. lead guitar's harmonies like Frusciante's from RHCP...grilliant...awesome melodies with a bit Tom Petty feeling...hope, it's no problem, I mentioned these names...:-)

Thanx for sharing, instant fav!

Danke

the acoustics sound amazing. Such a touching, atmospheric song. Awesome! :)

Bet you love playing that mando! Banjo too? Well it looks like you have been having some fun the months you've been gone. Good to hear a new one Kyle, love the song. It has all my favorite instruments and packaged just like I like 'em!

Great job singing. The mix sounds pretty good here in my studio set up. The instruments are well recorded. Well done man!

Wayne

I have almost finished remixing and mastering your track! Keep an eye for it tomorrow evening or the Friday :P

Hey man loved the acoustic vibes from this track! Great work man it's the one of the best that I've heard on Looperman!

Rico L.

Sent you an email just a few moments ago, let me know if you recieved it!

Wow, I actually really dig the way those acoustics came through. Honestly, this sounds really good man. This sounds like something I'd hear in a romance movie or something :P Great job on this one man. I can hear the effort you put into the mixing. Though I feel the cymbals at 1:42 could be pulled back just a hair, as they stand out a little harshly from the rest of your mix. Just lowering their volume a bit will fix this problem. This is a great song. I really dig your instrumentation. Favorited for sure. :P