ImproveWithError

I think that you have a very good voice, and I'm amazed at your playing. I tried that once in 1990, but computers really weren't working all that well yet, and there wasn't good software like we have today, so I was doing it on multi-track Cassette Tape and over dubbing. by the time I got finished, it sounded like a wind tunnel from going across a dirty head so many times.

This is good enough to be finished and put on the radio. I play bass guitar, 12-string, and many others if you ever wanted to hit the studio, and the road. I've done both for many years, and know how entertainment goes.

Just a thought, if you can produce songs like this, what's holding you back?

Thanks for sharing!

Hey, this is good stuff! If you ever want me to make some sample music for your class to toy with, I am more than happy to make some basic songs for them to work with. :)

Brado

Good work bro...

this is awesome. would it be okay if i used this in some of my online videos and I will put you in the credits.

Nice track!
You have a traditional Country ton of voice that fits perfectly to the song.
Thx for sharing!

Regards
NFMaster

Hey Kyle, vox improved quite a bit on this one. Your moving forward as well on the production side as well. Keep that up and you'll be doing this for a living!
Cru

Brilliantly written song. Not usually my genre of music, but I totally believed what I was listening to, I can still hear the tune in my head as I write this. Thanks for sharing :)

Very nice, Kyle. We don't get much country here, so it's a nice change. Hey, not a thing wrong with your voice, my friend. It fits the genre well. Playing is very good as well as the mix. All in all, great job!

Ciao,
M.

Usually I don't live vocal music but I could say your voice fits pretty well with your work. Nice job

Also I have maybe 2 thing to ask you,

First, could you put the lyric ? For a non English person, like me, who would like to understand the real meaning of your work lyrics is the best friend.

Second, could you make an instrumental version of this track. this would be cool.

Anyway nice track.

Peace from master Byleth.

Very nice listen.
Very well put together.
Nice and easy on the ear and the mind without being simplistic.
Pro sounding band.

Hey, i dont like stuff like this.. but this was good.

Not a country fan, but I really enjoyed this track. Easy to get into, great melody!

This is top notch Kyle...a bigger mix this time with the electric gtr...nice job on the recording by the way...We tend to be our own worse critics at times but you really do have the vocal chops Kyle..I don`t know how to explain it but its a voice character thing ...this would fit very nicely in today`s country radio....a big well done to you...fav from this ol boy...Ed

Hi Klye

Mate good to be back, had to check out your works, mate have said before you have a vocal that is easy on the ear, could listen to it and not get bored, great work...this sounds like a piece that you would get playing a country radio station, very enjoyable my friend, nothing to fault here, sounding great through headset, fav'd peace mosaic.

You might be a bit hard on yourself, this is a good track. guitars sound spot on ! Keep up the great work brother!

What an uplifting, superb track Kyle...the chorus got some grunge feeling and the whole track is full of groovy...fav, dl...:-)

Handshake, Danke

Rather a good thing.

I didn't know you were from down here in Dixie, you sound born and bred in the south land. Vocals are sounding pretty good and so is the mix. Electric guitar sound is perfect for this style of music.

Nice job Kyle!

Wayne

Wide stereo sound that I really love. I've been trying to make a video for you to show you what I do to get bigger vocals but it's not recording my audio!! :( I'm still trying though! Your music is getting better and better everytime, man. Keep at it, you're quickly becoming a serious contender on this site. Even though you don't think you're the best at singing, your voice works perfectly for this track. Fun-lovin', raw and relatable. Great job!

Brado

Wow, I like this one a lot. Your voice is definitely better suited for the lower register as cru mentioned. Nothing wrong with your other works, since this is a hobby for you, its not that important that you train since I would think its more of an outlet for you than anything. Seriously, your mixing has improved so much. Sounds super wide and professional. The vocal could been bigger in my opinion, even though it still cuts through the mix nicely. All the instruments and recording are flawless, I have no critiques there. Good stuff, buddy. Your music is constantly improving and I'm very happy to witness that. All the best,

Brado

Hey Kyle, this has a big sound to it, almost like a U2 song(Rattle and Hum period) with the keys/pad rolling in the background as the drums pound away and the singer wails! All the elements are there.

I know what you mean about uploading because you are tired of mixing it, lol!! We must listen to bits and pieces of songs hundreds of times, at least. I usually try to have 3 or 4 songs going at once so I don't get too bored with one project.

Take care!

Wayne

Probably one of your better tracks. Mostly because you stay in the lower ranges of your vocal stratus. When you go higher you get very "Pitchy" Flat, which is in most of your songs that you sing in in a higher plateau. That being said, you have some fundamentals of singing. Why not invest in a vocal coach. Listen; it takes balls to sing on any track, and share it with the whole wide world (I give you a million credits for doing it) . Believe me I am my worst critic of my own voice which is why you don't hear me very often sing. But you have to solve those pitch issues if your gonna demo your songs or else no one will bite when it could be an amazing song underneath. Find a vocal coach and practice..you will get better at it. I believe in you.
Cru

Hi. Good track. Simpl. ;))

Nice track.. Very impressed.

Oh yeah...that guitar lick does stick in the head...classic kind of rock lick I recall well from days gone by...I really like this one Kyle..Your vocal is, as always, top notch and I definitely like that country-rock accompaniment you`ve got going...I`m just using some old Sony MDV600 cans & they are terrible on the low end (great for checking highs) so the bass sounds fine...if you need to unmuddy it a bit just try scooping our between 200-400 and bump it a tiny bit at 80...great track Kyle...rea;;y did enjoy it....Ed.