ImproveWithError

Nice song

needs room to breath.. "improvewitherror" ..."improvewithinsight"

Very cool. I like your singing and they way you wrote the lyrics to flow with your guitar playing. A bit overdone in my opinion. Just a bit repetitive. Reminds me of U2 and Bon Jovi having a baby. Was hoping for a nice change up to separate a lot of the repetition.

Nice!! As a married man, it's nice to hear a song that honors women. Good job!!

real nice,reminds me of simple minds!!

very clear, sinless rock music here Kyle...I like your attitude and the lyrics...the groovy is lively enough to headband a bit...great track...

handshake, Danke

I think that you have a very good voice, and I'm amazed at your playing. I tried that once in 1990, but computers really weren't working all that well yet, and there wasn't good software like we have today, so I was doing it on multi-track Cassette Tape and over dubbing. by the time I got finished, it sounded like a wind tunnel from going across a dirty head so many times.

This is good enough to be finished and put on the radio. I play bass guitar, 12-string, and many others if you ever wanted to hit the studio, and the road. I've done both for many years, and know how entertainment goes.

Just a thought, if you can produce songs like this, what's holding you back?

Thanks for sharing!

Hey, this is good stuff! If you ever want me to make some sample music for your class to toy with, I am more than happy to make some basic songs for them to work with. :)

Brado

Good work bro...

this is awesome. would it be okay if i used this in some of my online videos and I will put you in the credits.

Nice track!
You have a traditional Country ton of voice that fits perfectly to the song.
Thx for sharing!

Regards
NFMaster

Hey Kyle, vox improved quite a bit on this one. Your moving forward as well on the production side as well. Keep that up and you'll be doing this for a living!
Cru

Brilliantly written song. Not usually my genre of music, but I totally believed what I was listening to, I can still hear the tune in my head as I write this. Thanks for sharing :)

Very nice, Kyle. We don't get much country here, so it's a nice change. Hey, not a thing wrong with your voice, my friend. It fits the genre well. Playing is very good as well as the mix. All in all, great job!

Ciao,
M.

Usually I don't live vocal music but I could say your voice fits pretty well with your work. Nice job

Also I have maybe 2 thing to ask you,

First, could you put the lyric ? For a non English person, like me, who would like to understand the real meaning of your work lyrics is the best friend.

Second, could you make an instrumental version of this track. this would be cool.

Anyway nice track.

Peace from master Byleth.

Very nice listen.
Very well put together.
Nice and easy on the ear and the mind without being simplistic.
Pro sounding band.

Hey, i dont like stuff like this.. but this was good.

Not a country fan, but I really enjoyed this track. Easy to get into, great melody!

This is top notch Kyle...a bigger mix this time with the electric gtr...nice job on the recording by the way...We tend to be our own worse critics at times but you really do have the vocal chops Kyle..I don`t know how to explain it but its a voice character thing ...this would fit very nicely in today`s country radio....a big well done to you...fav from this ol boy...Ed

Hi Klye

Mate good to be back, had to check out your works, mate have said before you have a vocal that is easy on the ear, could listen to it and not get bored, great work...this sounds like a piece that you would get playing a country radio station, very enjoyable my friend, nothing to fault here, sounding great through headset, fav'd peace mosaic.

You might be a bit hard on yourself, this is a good track. guitars sound spot on ! Keep up the great work brother!

What an uplifting, superb track Kyle...the chorus got some grunge feeling and the whole track is full of groovy...fav, dl...:-)

Handshake, Danke

Rather a good thing.

I didn't know you were from down here in Dixie, you sound born and bred in the south land. Vocals are sounding pretty good and so is the mix. Electric guitar sound is perfect for this style of music.

Nice job Kyle!

Wayne

Wide stereo sound that I really love. I've been trying to make a video for you to show you what I do to get bigger vocals but it's not recording my audio!! :( I'm still trying though! Your music is getting better and better everytime, man. Keep at it, you're quickly becoming a serious contender on this site. Even though you don't think you're the best at singing, your voice works perfectly for this track. Fun-lovin', raw and relatable. Great job!

Brado