Silenttwilight

you ever do anything with this? i think ive got some lines that would fit pretty well.

At the very end I like that you bring it back down again. I am sure you could continue and do another build. I like the synth choices and effects - especially the bit of glide I heard (forget the term right now). Best of luck with more development! Dan

The more I listen to this the more I like it. I have to agree with some points that skwishfish84 made. But I am looking forward the result of the track. Good work. :D :)

Hey dude! This track has serious potential. I do have some feedback that I need to get off of my chest though.

The intro seems really chaotic and out of control. Although there are only 2 main synths that I can hear, it seems as though they are not in sync with eachother.

Second, opposed to popular opinion, I think the drop synth is very unique. The only thing I would change is the heaviness of the phaser as it takes away from the core sound itself.

Also, the drums are very drowned out until the bass comes in. I don't know if that's from a mastering malfunction or if there is a volume envelope, but either way I would change it. The track seems to be missing something until the drums come in and having them so underneath everything else is teasing the listener, which is (put bluntly) annoying.

I'm sure if you fix this up it will be ready as a nice release!

Check out my stuff if you can! There's a link to my latest EP in the forums as well!!

Best,
Skwish Fish

Really like the first part. The drop synth is not that appealing to "me" (personal point of view). anyways keep it up and also there's a huge space of improvement for that track.

ReonN

The track is pretty ok. Very nice drums and good use of percussion. Your choice of teh synths are nort my taste but that is just personal. Tryto extend it a little and Im interested what the result is.

This tune is very enjoyable. I think you should add a reverb on the vocals to give it a wider sound. The sounds you came up with is very nice and catchy too.

Overall, well done!

Sounds great from here.
Sod Etta and Nina it's your time.
You have a great Britpop voice .... London is calling.
Sticking samples of the famous and past wouldn't do your work any favours I feel.
Loads of people do that shit.
You've got what it takes to pump out some original material.
Not many can do that.
You have a great thing going on here and it's yours ... not Ettas or Ninas though I'm sure they'd be flattered.

hey there
liked the idea and vibes in the track
the bass riff works the drums seem solid in the mix
the lyrics and song sounds a bit example style
nice little london vibe gwarning
maybe a chord to run with the bass riff would fill out the track and help with a mini breakdown
but all a solid idea imo

Hi Silent

First off don't know much (well I no nothing of the genre)about the genre trap...All I can say I am enjoying this catchy piece...Really look forward to you finishing this so can check it out again in the future...Fav...Peace n Respect...Mosaic..

Very promissing stuff...keep up good work!

Congrats______Orlando