I agree with another comment on here, you could try an add a higher pitched instrument, whether it guitar lead or synth, just to give it an added dynamic. It has a very hard rock, traditional metal feel to it. All in all, its a great track, you just need another instrument to progress the sound during the verses, otherwise they'd just sound samey and repeptive
Great beat, I really like your style, it sounds really professional and club ready. I'm a rapper and producer myself and I'd really like to work with you
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on Caribbean Summer by ScottB55
The vocals are loops I found online somewhere. They were in the same key as the song and seemed to fit well, so I included them.
Cheers,
Scott
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TJ