that's a pretty solid track man! It's a little bit on the heavy side for my taste, but from start to finish I liked the flow, the drums were solid, and I thought the transition synth was pretty dope as well as the second transition. Nice production ;)
This has to be good cause I liked it, lol. What I mean by that is I am not a dubstep guy. Nothing against it, just not my thing. But you have some really great sounds going on here with some excellent melodic lines.
I can see why you are proud of this track. You should be. I even like the little note you threw in at the end,lol. Intended or not ;]
I really like the background synths and pads. I think the wobble bass could either be tweaked or exchanged for a more heavy bass. Something more dirty sounding. But you did say it was going to be upbeat, but it still works. Almost trance sounding at parts. Great track, after listening again it does sound cinematic almost, has a epic feeling. peace
This track is purely experimental at this point. Right now im working on another track that is a little more dubstepish but still upbeat I dont know lol I guess I just cant write orthodox stuff you know... I dont know I guess its just one of those things. I am still a noob so there is definitely lots and lots of room for improving. Thanks for the comments.
I will absolutely do something about my snare sound. Now that you mention it, it does sound very weak and almost non existent in parts. Thanks for the comment :)
Thanks. Yeah I just got into this stuff i really dont know anything about recording lol im trying my best because I would like to do more with it. I get lost in it you know I can just sit here for hours.
Well this is sounding pretty good so far. For a first track it's excellent. I notice though that the kick drum is drowned out a little by the bass but the melodies and arpegios are all good. I think you just need a punchier kick drum and this would be a blinder.
I enjoyed listening to this.
FR
Thanks man I appreciate the comment. I agree the kick is drowned out pretty bad by the bass. I obviously didn't notice as I was listening to it . Thanks for the comment :)
So i guess you must be saying this is one your first house tracks? Or first track ever? Even so, this is actually pretty good work for a "first practice track." It's little inconsistent and some of the arrangement shows it's your first time. However, I do like the vibe of this very much. It has potential, if you would expand on the guitar like melody it would sound even better. Just come back to it over time, that's what I do with some of my tracks now. Keep it up bro. peace
Yea its hard to add much on this as the ableton program i have only allows my 8 track which is pretty crappy. I know i'm a noob but thanks for the comments I will try to fine tune everything.
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I can see why you are proud of this track. You should be. I even like the little note you threw in at the end,lol. Intended or not ;]
Great work man. Keep 'em coming!
RW
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