Livingsoulsdie

soo nice :D

Hey L,
cool dark ds mate,enjoyed the listen,keep on the good work,
DRO

This is really nice! I totally agree with #Aviat and #ValVedriVer! They said everything! Keep up the great work ;)

THIS IS AWESOME...!!!

The darker intro was really something...Superb!

The melodies are really crafted well.Loved the different soft synths used.

The structure of the song is nice and variations keep coming up.

The drops are awesome and loved those sqare/harsh synths.LFO Rates are synced nicely.Awesome!
Its one of the hardest thing to modulate them in Dubstep genre.

About the drops and buildup they can be made more intense with percussive elements and different FX.Search them up.

Beats are nice but can be more punchier.Do add more percussion.

Mastering and Mixing is really nice.Liked it!

And you already got an awesome detailed feedback from ValVedriVer which pretty much explains everything.

Good Job!

This is pretty good. I like the fact that it starts out with a darker, heavier intro. Not that cheesy ass chipmunk bubblegum synth business. I also like the melodic nature. It actually has purpose. The drops are nicely pieced together, and the melodies between are actually melody driven. Good work.
There are only three things that stand out to me in regards to room for improvement.

1) The different synth levels in the drop. Some come across as much louder, or quieter than others, which kind of disrupt the smooth flow and give it a "pieced together" feel, taking away from the smooth flow. Pretty simple fix. Just a little tweaking in the mixer.

2)The drums get lost in the drop. During the rest of it, they're fine. I think if you take care of the levels from the first suggestion, this one would probably work itself out with very minimal work afterwards.

3) A lack of impacts on the initial drop start. Your builds are good, they lead up to the drop with the anticipation needed, but then kind of just stumble into the rest of it. If you added an impact, or some big hits right at the beginning of the drop, it would slam that badboy into your face! This, also, a very simple fix.

Aside from those simple technicalities... "Sick drops, bro!"
This is a good piece. With a little fine tuning, I think you can make it better.

But, this is just my opinion. Take it for what it's worth.
Good work, keep it up!
Take care.
V.

I view this track as cinematica. Weird Crazy, but good. I waiting for an iRobot to pop out of the screen. good stuff

This sounds really cool. Loving the atmosphere's at the beginning and the melody is superb. Nice lazer effects and swooshing noises followed by some splendid wubbyness.
Everything about this track is excellent. the ideas are good, the mix is nice and clean and the arrangement is wicked.
Now i'm just going to kick back and listen to the rest of it.
Top tune!!
FR

the intro is very rich, lots of interest. paints a picture. cinematic. it is a cool surprise when the dubstep elements come in. totally enjoying it.

Great dubstep track! I'm not a dubstep producer by any means but I would have to agree with D3RELICT & StylesBM that maybe adding a bit of bass would tie it together. Other than that I really like this track, the title "Serenity" certainly fits because that's how I feel when I listen to it!

Nice Atmospheric dubstep, now i don't know much about the creation of dubstep nor your style of music production but the drop may need some more bass here and there. But damm this is nice man i was lost in an atmosphere while listening to this is was really nice and calming in a way, a very good back ground song. Keep it up, I am always learn from your sounds because i am trying to make dubstep my self bad at it too but will see. I will stay tuned for Your next work. Keep it up!

peace

I've noticed you're good at creating an atmosphere. :D Have you tried adding some sub bass to the drop. For this style of drop I think there needs to be a wall of bass under the talking bass; something to rattle the floorboards during the drop. The bass drone that you have there would be good but it just needs more in the 5Hz-20Hz-ish range Also, the plucks from 1:06 to about 1:23 are ever so slightly behind the beat. I don't know if this is just the instrument or if you intended it to be this way, but that sort of just-slightly-off squirrelyness just bugs the everliving F%#@ out of me when it happens in my own tracks. That's just my $.02. I hope this helps.

--DPS--

that's a pretty solid track man! It's a little bit on the heavy side for my taste, but from start to finish I liked the flow, the drums were solid, and I thought the transition synth was pretty dope as well as the second transition. Nice production ;)

This sounds pretty good. I like the stereo play with that synth. If I were you though I'd scale it back a little so that if someone only has a left or right channel and not both they can still hear all of it. That's just one of my pet peeves when song is completely split between left and right so you can't get the full picture on one side. Other than that, I'd maybe boost the low end but that's just personal preference. I really like the ominous vibe in this track. Nice work!

Very nice choice of synths. Intro is so relaxing, really beautiful... Also love that UK dubstep drop... Very good work here!

nice track. this is more like dubstep producing mid 00s. i like it.

This has to be good cause I liked it, lol. What I mean by that is I am not a dubstep guy. Nothing against it, just not my thing. But you have some really great sounds going on here with some excellent melodic lines.

I can see why you are proud of this track. You should be. I even like the little note you threw in at the end,lol. Intended or not ;]

Great work man. Keep 'em coming!
RW

yoo Nice one the drop hit me like out of no where. I think is more dubstep or a bit of chillstep at the beginning before the sweet drop.

Cool job !) Listen to my new track

I really like the background synths and pads. I think the wobble bass could either be tweaked or exchanged for a more heavy bass. Something more dirty sounding. But you did say it was going to be upbeat, but it still works. Almost trance sounding at parts. Great track, after listening again it does sound cinematic almost, has a epic feeling. peace

Gramo/Neo

Your percussion needs more punch, especially the snare, but everything else is pretty good. There's nothing wrong with upbeat, lol :p

This is very good if this is your first attempt. I agree that kick should be harder, but other parts sounds nice.

Well this is sounding pretty good so far. For a first track it's excellent. I notice though that the kick drum is drowned out a little by the bass but the melodies and arpegios are all good. I think you just need a punchier kick drum and this would be a blinder.
I enjoyed listening to this.
FR

So i guess you must be saying this is one your first house tracks? Or first track ever? Even so, this is actually pretty good work for a "first practice track." It's little inconsistent and some of the arrangement shows it's your first time. However, I do like the vibe of this very much. It has potential, if you would expand on the guitar like melody it would sound even better. Just come back to it over time, that's what I do with some of my tracks now. Keep it up bro. peace

Gramo/Neo