Eighteen

This pretty cool and definitely Funky. Reminds me of Funk that just drank an Espresso.

Nice job.

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I like the japanese pop feel a lot. my x was a big anime fan and this track reminds me of some of the opening songs to the anime productions - like kenshin, gundam, dragonball, etc. when the vocal would be female. You did a great job creating a fresh style incorporating some of those japanese pop elements. congrats!

i love it, you have a really unique style, good stuff.

I loved this , nice beats and pads... really different .good job

That beat has a definite retro feel back from the latin sound in the late eighties. The vocal treatments are awesome and the mix and production is top notch. great job!
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Cru

Holy s..t!

Is it Japanese??? or what???
Brilliant track...bit like retro felt but at the meantime super new...what I'm talkin about??? :-)

Creativity from the top league...hats off...

sudden dl and fav...

handshake, Danke

Love this its different but really got me hooked in there :)

Steve

Love the vocoder sounds and the flow going from the synth to the vocals, the beat feels a little disco-ish at parts with the vocoded vocals and style of drums, great track, keep it up man

AMAZING BETWEEN CLEAR AND DIRTY BLOOPS , WELL DONE

Greetings.

Stutter intro is decent but then you drop a fat beat and bassline on 0:08. That really caught my attention.

0:26 right panned distorted lead is cool and there's another droning synth sound going on plus fun effects on the vocals. Vocaloid processing? Sounds like a vocoder.

1:10 an accordion?

This is good fun and pretty unusual. You've done a lot of different creative stuff in just the first minute.

Creative synth work all sits nicely with the vocals, doesn't interfere.

This could be a pumping track in a club.

Definitely some leftfield rap. Can't really say it's hip hop. More of a dance music vibe than that.

Slowdown at the end is more fun.

Overall: really well produced, creative stuff.

Congrats.

Wow, this sounds amazing!

That's something I've never heard, I really like it.

Keep up the good work fella :3

HaNez

Dude this is good! Reminds if the stuff I used to do ages agO!

Still loving it, thanks for this track!

muhaha this is awesome good track nice and groovy !!

Hello there.

The vocal in this really stands out to me.

Vocaloid sounds like pretty cool software. I've just had a look at the relevant website.

Far out, trippy, dreamy intro with that fluttering synth. Something a bit 70s prog rock about it but more modern and electro. Also kind of dirty cool, slightly vocally bassline.

0:35 cool noise in that drum fill.

Then into a very sparse and simple drum groove and those magical vocals. The panning stands out. Maybe it's a little odd or maybe it's just different. One voice in the left ear, another in the right but not panned as far to the right.

Again: very distinctive vocals. I wonder if most Vocaloid stuff sounds like this. I'm sure I could make good use of such software so will have a think about getting it.

You keep your instrument lineup pretty much the same throughout the track but they're good sounds. Maybe you could add some reverb to the drums to make things go a bit bigger in the second half?

Congrats on an unusual track.

Okay
try to unwide your loud part
then turn the volume of your effected part down and wide it
Kind regards
J_*

My personal opinion is to not split your vocal line
you can sidechain if you want to be have 2 vocals with different effects
but man, why you dont use effects on your first vocal line? thats crazy
every vocal line should be have mastering
roll off and compression is necessary for vocals

its ok if you want to split your vocal lines but dont leave your first vocal line unaffected

Kindest regards
J_*

Okay so i will glad to write something to help you:
we have three phases of mastering:
roll off
compresion
2nd equlize for brighting (EQ)
widing
harmonic exciter (tube-tape-retro)
reverb
maximize
overview

first, what you need to be have a great vocal line is certainly "Roll Off"

Roll off means removing some additional frequencies
for example for male singer you should remove frequencies above 15000Hz and lower than 90Hz (its variable for each singer)
you can easily use a parametric equalizer for this
and some of them has a box which can show you which range of frequencies are additional like Fruity loops parametric EQ2
(which i use)

second thing you need for vocal line is compression
for example if singer shouts a lot in the vocal line
you should be have compression
it makes your vocal line's volume fixed
but sometimes for example you have a rock vocal line which has a lot of shouting and up and down
so you have to limit your vocal line with a limiter
but be careful, cuz limiting and compression should be average, not much and not low
if you have a loud vocal line after limiting, i suggest you to turn the volume down

and the last thing you should do, (except effects like delay, reverb, chorus and etc ) is widing
lemme give you an example,
if a guitar player play guitar in front of you in about 1 meters distance, you hear the guitar sounds loud
but if he goes far about 10 meters, you hear sounds lower

so the widing is same distance
its effective on volume, "but its not the volume"
I dont know what is the plugin in your daw for widing
and if you dont have one, I will be glad to send you one

but the only thing you should do for this track
is to "unwide" your vocal line with a widing plugin

Kind regards
J_*

Its so simple
just tell me what DAW you use
then I can give you some advice to solve that

Like
its a great track
and I think your vocal line is wide a bit
not loud
Kindest regards
J_

Nice sound here my friend, gets going around 1:05 then back to chillout. I think it would sound equally as good as an ambient chillout type track!? Anyways well done.

Really love the melodic tone and vocal instrumentation.
If you don't mind, I put up a remix to this and wanted your thoughts on it.

https://soundcloud.com/ythejoshuatreey/on-n-on-jwilson-remix

Great job! I like the chill vibe i'm getting!

I like ! good work :)

Fun track, like that sub end and its a happy/chirpy tune, decent mixdown overall and everything sounds nice and clear, good work..

While I like the idea of the song, aside from it's overly pop influences, I do not think that this is live. Since your description does not state where or how it was recorded, then I think this sort of negates the L I V E in the title. No part of it sounds live, and the crowd sounds seem contrived to give the impression of live. I know that this is not easy to make believable, so you should be proud of that aspect. I just couldn't help but call BS. If I am entirely wrong, you can feel free to correct me.