Man this is one helluva track. I mean aside from the mixing issues mentioned by other users, its really powerful. The guitar is great but those spacey waterdrop Bells really add to the emotion of this track. Lyrics were great, flow for the first two verses were fire, the third and fourth felt a bit off but they were cool as well. You guys really should clean up the mix a bit and this track will be up there commercial ready.
yes, it is extremely nice but there is a serious problem with volume levels and vocal mixing on this track, the instrumental sounds heavy overproduced to me. honestly it is too much. at least when compared with other music posted here. I understand that this is where overall radio music is still heading these days but truly this affects too much the genuine simplicity of the spoken word message and the listening experience itself. I do not listen to the modern mainstream popular music that much btw, I always preffer live played and recorded instruments so this is just a very subjective opinion of mine. see that others pointed similar things below too.
Thank you for your listen and constructive criticism. SJW put up this track with his verses and the space at the end for collab. I just tried to do my best to not fuck it up. I had a shitty mic at the time and realize it doesnt sound so good. Again thank you.
Hi bro , nice track man , like the flow you have. I saw you have download one of my song, doesn't matter gaffer sticks, and i'd like you do some vocals if you are inspire and i'l do the mastering if you want to. Give you my email: ceedyprod@gmail.com
hi bro like your style, and i see that you'd like one of my track and if you want to rap on it please want to see want happen…… just let me know if u do a remix…..
Cheers
very dope track. this is why music is the greatest thing on earth. the unhreard get heard, the unknown get a small moment of fame within their tribe of fellow musicians, you can move without physically touching anything.
Great song, but I think the vocals could use a little de-essing. A little harsh on the high end. But wow, I dig those vocals. Flows nicely and has a cool groove. The backtrack is pretty dope as well.
hey guys - would u mind if we used your track in our A Week In Open Mic documentary on YouTube? It's a monthly docco about comedians in London but i love finding unsigned acts and giving them a bit of exposure.
It's likely to be seen/heard by another 200 people that might not have heard you before; nothing massive i know. but still! :)
Wow man thank you for the honor. I can only speak for myself but that would be awesome. SJW should be contacted as well. I will try to message him but you should be able to find him here on looperman as well. Emial me at fracasgrimm480 at yahoo for further correspondence. Thank you again and RESPECT!
This sounds really professional. Well written lyrics, nice track and mixed down really well. Great atmosphere, cool efx and great all round vibe.
Really enjoyed listening to this piece.
FR
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Seeya bro
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Cheers
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you did a great job, kid. keep up the great work.
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Rico L.
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It's likely to be seen/heard by another 200 people that might not have heard you before; nothing massive i know. but still! :)
Let me know if thats ok?
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Really enjoyed listening to this piece.
FR
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I really logged on today just to download some beats, and then came across this.
Reason number one why I love looperman.
- ArtfulOne
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