This sounds as a wonderful song to me, really wonderful, but you should put some more attention on production. Sound is distorted cause of too high volume levels. I hope you will correct those issues and if you do I will download this because I really like the song.:)
Overall nice track man! One thing to consider when mixing is 'dynamics' my friend. I can't fully appreciate the content of your song or lyrics because everything is so loud, it's distorting. A good indication that some thing(s) is/are too loud in your mix is the shape of the waveform in the player above. If it mostly just looks like a block with hard, straight edges then you know its too loud. The waveform should have a nice shape to it. Turn things down. You might be surprised with the clarity of everything after that. Peace.
Thank you for your tips. I appreciate all forms of feedback My recording is my biggest hurdle. Just do not have the right equipment. I will try to implement your suggestion however. Thank you!
Nice flow man! Only thing is that you might want to check the volume levels a bit. Through most of the the song i can hear the static of it being a bit too loud. Other than that, great work!
Thank you for your words and listening. My vocals lways have some issue it seems. My headset mic is not the greatest tool to use but it is all I have. THX!
How this freestyle starts up is really nice, has some suspense to it waiting for it to drop. The freestyle raw energy and delivery I liked but sounds like if you pushed the mid frequency up some it might make the vocals sound a little more clear. I get that it's a freestyle but the quality and effects takes some interest off. Dig the whole idea with the track still.
You did a lot better with this freestyle than the last one I've heard from you some time back. The instrumental and vocals matched up in a good way I though. Maybe the export bitrate is holding this one back. Nice work to you both. Hope you get some more collabs going, you have a sound I can hear making some good noise. Keep at it, Peace.
Thank you for your words. I appreciate your input . I really don't do enough producing to know how to adjust the mid frequency like you said. I use a headseat mic and blame my issues on that, lol. Thank you for listening and helping me with your suggestions. Much respect! www.soundcloud.com/fracasgrimm480
Tight track facasgrimm! Cnredagain came through with an ill beat and you dropped the dope flow. Hopefully you get someone on the second verse to finish the track. The mix is sounding good so far. Nice work.
Hey man. I saw that you did something with I beat I heard and used so I wanted to let you know about the song I did. Much love on your verse. I thought it was sick. Mine is at looperman .com/tracks/detail/153762. As i posted, the mix isn't the best and there's a better quality version on the way. Lemme know what you think. Peace and ease.
Loved that piano intro and the beat itself, think you did a great job on this with the vocals though making the vocals a little clearer would come in better for the track I think
Yo man, amazing track, the lyrics are real and really fit the beat, it makes a human think. I really love the beat too, its a masterpiece, really emotional thing going on. Its sad that the quality of your recording is some what poor, but thats something that can be easily improved so don't worry! Marvellousd and Fracasgrimm nice collab, eager to hear more from you guys!
I appreciate your words. I am glad I didnt ruin marvellosd's good work with my words, ha. I wish I had better equipment to make my recordings that much better, alas I only can work with what I have for now. Thanks again for listening.
I checked out your postd work and I like it. I downloaded one of your tracks breakthrough..gonna try and lace it unless you have something else in mind. Thanks for listening and anytime you wanna work on something hit me up.
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You did a lot better with this freestyle than the last one I've heard from you some time back. The instrumental and vocals matched up in a good way I though. Maybe the export bitrate is holding this one back. Nice work to you both. Hope you get some more collabs going, you have a sound I can hear making some good noise. Keep at it, Peace.
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