Sounds pretty good so far and you could easily change the tempo and throw in some dubstep or orchestration or just continue this with some variation like a key change.
Thanks for listening....
I was thinking of adding Orchestral elements but then i decided not to...Kinda wanted it to be pure DnB...
I think i would add some Wobbles near the end(It would be awesome...!!)
Going to add some new synths and piano variations or even a chilled electric guitar part in the middle where everything fades away and take the new synths and guitar part upto the sudden pause at 3.10....
And is the sudden pause good or should I make it more intense..??
This could develop in many directions, so it's hard to suggest anything in particular. The basis is well done and produced and I think you don't need a new intro, because this fadein with raising brightness in the sound works extremely well and could be considered as a sort of an intro. For the rest of the track maybe some pads would come handy and perhaps an addition of a more distinctive solo instrument (like sax for example). All in all you have a good platform for further development...wish you successful continuation of your work!
Going to add some new synthsor pads and piano variations or even a chilled electric guitar part in the middle where everything fades away and take the new synths and guitar part upto the sudden pause at 3.10....
And is the sudden pause good or should I make it more intense..??
I like the fadein, where things are indistinct and then become a lot clearer.
Maybe have some sort of pad sound on top of that? Or some other lead so that the d'n'b fades in underneath.
Simple main keyboard line that works just fine and the drums sit well. Tiny bit of something like guiro there panned to the right.
Build and break just before 1:01 is a nice subtle touch and the track takes off a little bit more after that.
Good delayed piano (?) right at the end. Use more of that during the full track and let the delayed note spill out over the beat.
It's hard to know how to suggest you take this further.
But you could change to a different, maybe bigger bass later and move the drums more to the ride/crash. Those are just obvious things so not much real help there.
Good luck with it as it all sounds well produced so no criticism there.
Thanks for listening....
I have improved the fadein intro a little bit.
Going to add some new synths and piano variations or even a chilled electric guitar part in the middle where everything fades away and take the new synths and guitar part upto the sudden pause at 3.10....
And is the sudden pause good or should I make it more intense..??
it is a hot mix of percussion and you get all of the sounds coming through clearly in their proper place. no easy task. it is a subtle energy that you achieve - but there is great energy for sure. great start! don't let it go! all the best.
Actually once you listen to Drum and Bass you get addicted to it and it never leaves you...Same thing happened to me and I decided to make a classic DnB song....
And its pretty much hard to program beats and manage the the arrangement.
This track has a lot of potential. I really like the idea and you should keep working on this. The strings are nice but the volume can be turned down a little. I really like it overall.
Well you asked for my analysis and suggestions on this so here they are:
The guiro is quite good fun and I don't hear it used much in electronic music.
Build up intro is good and the riff is simple but quite infectious.
0:50 good little delayed break.
Then we have the main beat, with everything sitting well and the infectious main riff continuing plus some extra percussive elements.
1:37 removal of main riff. Not quite got the transition right there. Probably should go into something bigger and better.
1:50 very nice, haunting little pad sound and the guiro is back and sounding cool.
Then you bring the main riff back and return to the sea for a conclusion.
It's well produced and I can't really fault any aspect of the production, which is a very good thing! You could play this right now as it is on a dancefloor and people would enjoy it.
But it's also definitely lacking some top level elements such as melodies and/or vocals. It doesn't sound finished and not like a full track, even though it's long enough to be a full track. But it is catchy so it would appeal to someone who likes providing vocals for this sort of style.
"can you please check this track and give me some hints about adding Guitar or vocals"
I don't know how to suggest you add guitar. Do you play guitar?
I'm sure I could play some guitar along to this though I'm not planning to.
Hope you can add the missing elements to make this a really excellent house track.
YO !
amazing track you have here ,
nice vibes and real catchy synths .
in my opinion , i miss some breaks and spacy female vocals.
but overal its a very very good track
dancable and spacy , i love that !
Yeah nice track bro.
I have to say I pretty much agree with everything DJSLTUK said. I don't think its deep house either but certainly good and well worth a bit more polish. The seagulls and ocean waves are definitely a bit too prominent and are you aware of the wave sound coming back in for a nano second there just before the stop?
Thanks for such awesome comment.Actually I was confused between the House and Deep House Genre for this song.I was waiting for the replies for it.Nice feedback,will surely work on it and improvise and finish the track....!!
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I was thinking of adding Orchestral elements but then i decided not to...Kinda wanted it to be pure DnB...
I think i would add some Wobbles near the end(It would be awesome...!!)
Going to add some new synths and piano variations or even a chilled electric guitar part in the middle where everything fades away and take the new synths and guitar part upto the sudden pause at 3.10....
And is the sudden pause good or should I make it more intense..??
Thanks for the feedback..!!
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All the best____Orlando
Going to add some new synthsor pads and piano variations or even a chilled electric guitar part in the middle where everything fades away and take the new synths and guitar part upto the sudden pause at 3.10....
And is the sudden pause good or should I make it more intense..??
Thanks for the feedback..!!
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Maybe have some sort of pad sound on top of that? Or some other lead so that the d'n'b fades in underneath.
Simple main keyboard line that works just fine and the drums sit well. Tiny bit of something like guiro there panned to the right.
Build and break just before 1:01 is a nice subtle touch and the track takes off a little bit more after that.
Good delayed piano (?) right at the end. Use more of that during the full track and let the delayed note spill out over the beat.
It's hard to know how to suggest you take this further.
But you could change to a different, maybe bigger bass later and move the drums more to the ride/crash. Those are just obvious things so not much real help there.
Good luck with it as it all sounds well produced so no criticism there.
I have improved the fadein intro a little bit.
Going to add some new synths and piano variations or even a chilled electric guitar part in the middle where everything fades away and take the new synths and guitar part upto the sudden pause at 3.10....
And is the sudden pause good or should I make it more intense..??
Thanks for the feedback..!!
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Will surely wait for your feedbacks....
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Actually once you listen to Drum and Bass you get addicted to it and it never leaves you...Same thing happened to me and I decided to make a classic DnB song....
And its pretty much hard to program beats and manage the the arrangement.
Thanks for feedback...BPM....
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Cheers bro!!
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The guiro is quite good fun and I don't hear it used much in electronic music.
Build up intro is good and the riff is simple but quite infectious.
0:50 good little delayed break.
Then we have the main beat, with everything sitting well and the infectious main riff continuing plus some extra percussive elements.
1:37 removal of main riff. Not quite got the transition right there. Probably should go into something bigger and better.
1:50 very nice, haunting little pad sound and the guiro is back and sounding cool.
Then you bring the main riff back and return to the sea for a conclusion.
It's well produced and I can't really fault any aspect of the production, which is a very good thing! You could play this right now as it is on a dancefloor and people would enjoy it.
But it's also definitely lacking some top level elements such as melodies and/or vocals. It doesn't sound finished and not like a full track, even though it's long enough to be a full track. But it is catchy so it would appeal to someone who likes providing vocals for this sort of style.
"can you please check this track and give me some hints about adding Guitar or vocals"
I don't know how to suggest you add guitar. Do you play guitar?
I'm sure I could play some guitar along to this though I'm not planning to.
Hope you can add the missing elements to make this a really excellent house track.
Finally - interesting-looking waveform!
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amazing track you have here ,
nice vibes and real catchy synths .
in my opinion , i miss some breaks and spacy female vocals.
but overal its a very very good track
dancable and spacy , i love that !
greetzzz
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I have to say I pretty much agree with everything DJSLTUK said. I don't think its deep house either but certainly good and well worth a bit more polish. The seagulls and ocean waves are definitely a bit too prominent and are you aware of the wave sound coming back in for a nano second there just before the stop?
Massive thanks for enjoying my track...!!
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Thanks to Google Translate....!!
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Love & Light
Actually I was wrong about the FUNK elements in this track.
Massive thanks for enjoying my track...!!
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Tune D
Groove on this one really does feel Summer-ish.
Thanks for such awesome comment.Massive thanks for enjoying my track...
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Danke
I'm working on some new synths.Gonna extend the track.A massive thanks for listening and for your comments.
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