This is some tough stuff, solid vocal using some tasty notes, it needs
something to run with it though to bring the message home, only because
of it's importance...Very to the point and very well done...
Could've had just a touch, more vocal, when stuff starts moving to give it more control of the front line...But that's my taste...
Adding other instruments though, may mean dropping them deeper, in the mix
so they don't get in the way of the vocal...
But for now this is very cool, and very NOW...With all this stupid stuff
going on...
nice work with the vocals - I really enjoyed what you did already with starring creeps but here the overall arrangemet is just excellent. It's really funky! My only criticism would be that you might fade out the song properly. It doesn't mean that there's some 'proper' ending for a song at all. Other than I much enjoyed it! Alex
I like it RPS...and house isn`t even on my regular listening menu...but this is a cut above...has a nice laid-back kind of feel (almost a touch of R&B)....haven`t listened to the original yet...those hits at 1;21 and 2:31 are really effective....well done......(PS: apologies for not getting back some comments on your last post...I always like to return review when someone takes the time to leave a few words on one of my tracks..but for some reason I just couldn`t get it to play on any of my browsers....)
R.P.S., you are a force of nature. I still cannot believe you aren't some experienced 35 year old producer who has been at this for a long time. I had no idea what moombahton is, so I'm glad I stopped by - got to hear a great song, and also a lesson on genres. I like the structure on this one, well thought out, and well delivered. I think the length is just fine, especially since it is a tune that could be playing in clubs.
Well done young Jedi, really well done. Man, by the time you get into your 20's you are going to be dangerous. Outstanding effort. I hope you and your family have a great holiday season.
I like it so far. It's got a sort of fidget house groove for the opening then it goes into more of a big room kind of sound. That bassline is pretty messed up but it works and then the tune really gets going. Like the progression of the piece and the way you've added variety to keep it interesting.
This is a good piece of dance music.
FR
I didn't want this song to be some song that just flows and elements just pop out at you, I wanted it to have structure and variety and I think I achieved that.
Seems like a cool idea for a track so far. I like the bass line quite a bit. I felt like the first 2 and a half minutes were a bit static or repetitive, but after that things were a bit more deep. I think if taken a bit further, the theme will be successful. Nice one.
Very enjoyable tune here! Like TheHumps, some of this reminded me of Depeche Mode, which is cool as they are one of my faves. Could definitely shine brighter with some adjustments in the mix, but it sounds very cool as is. I'm thinking that some more atmosphere could really spice up the track, like either some ambient sounds in the background or some effects added like reverb or delays. All in all I liked the song a lot!
Sounding cool R.P.S. That opening bassline is sweet. What did you do that with? Anyway, digging the rhythm of this and the samples are nice as well.
Nice electro type bassline you've done for the second part and nicely back in with the original lick.
I like the way it keeps chopping and changing. It keeps the tune interesting.
I think this deserves a fav.
FR
Sort of like..how can I put this eloquently. Restrained insanity.
So put together sounds with that subtly mixed screaming vox is so perfect that perfection has overtook the bounds of the sane. Creating an Insanatriptasticlymodalthang.
Cru
Very Nice - especially the vocal part - I think there is something wrong with the way Looperman displays it - shows 4:19 but runs longer and cuts off. Think the piano parts are really great especially against the synth- don't love the intro as much as others here - drums are a little hot at parts. This is really creative and compelling- think it may need some tightening but really first rate.
-clindsay
This is a really enjoyable piece. Like the big dark intro and like what you've done with the vocals. The piano is excellent and i like the female voice as well.
I had no idea you were only eleven years old until i read some of the comments and that makes it even better.
Never stop making music because you've got talent.
Well done.
This would translate really niceley into a house track as well.
FR
So are you really 11 years old? Pretty nice stuff I've heard uploaded from you. Keep it up, you already have great talent. I like the steady beat and vocals to this, really relaxing. peace
Really nice stuff. Starts like some orchestra song but with that pad at 0:30 it's clearly electronic. Vocals really fit nice there along with piano which follow vocals in key. I was positive surprised when dubstep beat started around 1:49. All in all, very good work here!
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something to run with it though to bring the message home, only because
of it's importance...Very to the point and very well done...
Could've had just a touch, more vocal, when stuff starts moving to give it more control of the front line...But that's my taste...
Adding other instruments though, may mean dropping them deeper, in the mix
so they don't get in the way of the vocal...
But for now this is very cool, and very NOW...With all this stupid stuff
going on...
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/Anders
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Btw no problem :)
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Well done young Jedi, really well done. Man, by the time you get into your 20's you are going to be dangerous. Outstanding effort. I hope you and your family have a great holiday season.
Bear
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Ciao,
M.
Glad I could help :)
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This is a good piece of dance music.
FR
I didn't want this song to be some song that just flows and elements just pop out at you, I wanted it to have structure and variety and I think I achieved that.
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About the 'staticness,' i see what you mean and I may go and work on that if its requested by popular demand.
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Peace...TG.
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Nice electro type bassline you've done for the second part and nicely back in with the original lick.
I like the way it keeps chopping and changing. It keeps the tune interesting.
I think this deserves a fav.
FR
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So put together sounds with that subtly mixed screaming vox is so perfect that perfection has overtook the bounds of the sane. Creating an Insanatriptasticlymodalthang.
Cru
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I must check out more hardcore.....
Simon
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-clindsay
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But even they are done well...
Overall solid piece of work, nicely done...
Peace...TG.
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I had no idea you were only eleven years old until i read some of the comments and that makes it even better.
Never stop making music because you've got talent.
Well done.
This would translate really niceley into a house track as well.
FR
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Congrats, Alex
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Gramo/Neo
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