RealProblemShuckers

that is so cool that tweak that lowers the voice. "bass in your face" great new color when you bring in chord hits and lovin the harmonies. smart ending! nice work!

Cool track....

I like the classic sounds! The real house chords u know. But I'm missing some frequencies here. The percussion could use some high end boost, add some reverb to the sounds. The part at 1:11 is my favorite. Overal good job mate1

Hey, I'm enjoying this one! Really found the minimal groove to be intoxicating around 2:10 or so, those drums were nice and punchy. I'm guessing that maybe you were going for a very quiet low end in most parts... I won't judge you for that, as the parts that do have more bass have a lot of impact comparatively. The vocals aren't really my cup of espresso, but I like that you've used them in an inventive way. Fine work!

Regreetings, Mr Shuckers.

I don't have that much to say after my last review but thought I'd drop in to say that your new string part is much more suitable now. There's no jarring clash with that bassline.

I can't listen to the previous version so what have you done to the strings since first upload?

It's not a perfect fit with the flute part (strings+flute) but I guess that's OK. A bit odd can be cool and helps a track stand out from others.

I'd quite like that string part to be bigger and fatter, certainly at times. Try to add some stereo widening effect to it as that will help. I use various stereo widening effects (or collection of effects) a great deal. Helps a lot on guitar parts which sound a bit weedy. Also useful to try out on anything else that needs to be more powerful. Doesn't always work but it's often worth at least trying.

This is quite a simple little tune but it's a bit of fun that people will definitely groove to on the dancefloor.

Congrats!

Hey buddy, this is interesting for sure. I guess I've read the few comments, and I think I'm still hearing a sour interval or two between notes of the bass and whatever the synth is. I think the timing and arrangement is cool, and it's got your signature all over the mix. Some more expressive sounds would really take the progression to the next level. Enjoyed listening!

now you`re getting somewhere! now it`s a working track. not much happening as Nomad said, but fits nice in deep-house genre, but i see that you made some intro, some outro won`t hurt. that was the artistic part. technically needs some mixing and mastering plus that fx is way up than the other part of the track plus it clips a little so it`s too loud. anyway needs some work, but it builds nicely. worth the work because you won`t do the same mistakes again! Cheers!

I'm really feeling the creativity here. This is rather a simple track, which is easy for all listeners. The loops are timed perfectly, and mostly everything goes together well. The orchestra section is a bit conflicting, but that's just personal opinion. I like how you have the track in a metaphor, comparing it to advances of mankind itself. I encourage you to continue to make your tracks in the most creative manner. Cheers, my friend!

~GO

Word up, Mr Shuckers.

Strings here have a positive, bright, kind of triumphant sound. Gotta say I agree with previous comment that the bassline doesn't go with them. Are they each in a different key or something? That or their rhythms clash. So, not a comfortable fit though they're only heard together for a relatively short period of time. But it's still long enough to be a problem.

Bassline is good and a classic sort of house one. But then those strings return so things get awkward again.

I do quite like the flute part. Quite a seductive sort of melody.

Otherwise, this is a pretty damn minimal track - not much else happening to comment on. Try to make those strings somehow fit better with the bassline. If they're both just straight samples, you'll probably never make them work together. But, if you're programming them, you can always find a way to alter them to make them work better together.

Some good ideas though more work required. But don't give up - it's worth pursuing.

the start is good those orchestral sounds fits in, but not the bassline, those both are sound wierd together and some fade in or something would be nice to be the 1:00 mark "drop" more powerful and that effect @1:00 and around 2:00 needs some mixing or at least a low freq. cut to not stay above all (visible in the waveform). From 1:30-2:15 the kick is kicking something, but not rhythm, the flute is a little but loud, but its allright.
The ideas are nice and this track could be more better with a little more work. Cheers!

Not teel but tell XD

sorry for this reply but i hate that kind if error !

You should don't reply this a bit useless comment...

-ant4505

Maybe chill out is not my favorite genre but I really really like our work.

I saw your request collab but is for what this tune seems already finish.

thanks to teel me what kind of colab you want maybeI will like to work with you

-ant4505

This is a cool and straightforward downtempo track to my ears. It would be interesting to know what the lyrics are referring to in the case of this song, though I know they are not yours. This is minimal in a good way, where nothing gets in the way of hearing what is there. Not necessarily my preferred listening style, but I appreciate the effort and skill involved. Nicely done.

I like this a lot! very chill

I really get the feeling you're ahead of your time, and not just your age. I was sceptical when clicking on an industrial track, as I find a lot of them in recent years give the impression of someone never having heard industrial music before... but in this case I think you've put your own spin on fusing industrial with other styles. Really enjoying the subtle power of the mix too! I can tell you are giving good attention to the mix, and not just smashing a poor mix to death with mastering plugins like is so common. Enjoyed the melodies and percussion very much! Have a good year! Faved!

your very talented for your age, keep making those tracks man :)

YO yo !

Nice xmas track!

happy new year !

greetz !

Has a very new world music sort of feel to it, carefree and a light mood. The transition at 1:27 seemed like too much of an abrupt change happening there. Maybe slowly dropping some things along the way and a smoother transition into the percussion part like maybe adding of a pad or something. Pretty cool idea though, liked the overall feel to it.

Look out, next year you will be a teenager!

Wayne

Really nice, even for a much older person. You're off to a good start. Hell, when I was your age, I had been studying music for a couple of years and computers were the size of large refridgerators!

This genre sounds to me like new age or world, but I realize we don't have those options in our genre selection.

Anyway...Good job!

Ciao,
M.

Haha really cool to see someone so young be so talented. Really like how the industrial noises are subtly in the background, you can still hear them yet they are not overpowering in the mix. Great job! From 1:28 where you are just playing rhythms on that note I do think that it would be really cool to have something else going on in the background or maybe play with the dynamics of the note to really change it.

You're very talented, especially for your age, keep it up man you have all the time in the world to become the best producer you could ever be!

Great track,
Rico L.

Really nice melodies throughout the track.Dreamy it may be but its a very interesting track indeed.
Would be really cool if you could add an rising automated reverb on the bass synth from the 01:28 mark to 02:12 and end the track with a fade out or with the main melody.

Well done kid(considering you are only 12 years-old).

Nelson

Excellent work...very inventive and full of style!:)

Compliments____Orlando

CG5 here! GO to my Soundcloud to hear the actual song.
https://soundcloud.com/charlie-green-53/i-dont-despise

The vocals sound so great, lovely lyrics. The song is very chilled, almost an ethereal quality to it. Love the kicks. Well done! :)

Storming effort! The way you've layered the vocal is bang on the money and you've built around it with some solid grooves. I especially like that fat sounding bassline. Not sure i'd class it as house as it's down tempo enough to be chill out. Not that that takes anything away from the track.
A real solid tune.
FR