Shall receive.
Round 1, the master volume needs to be turned up just a little (it was barely audible at first). Unless you made this with a lengthy fade in and in that case nevermind.
Round 2, I dunno if the genre fits, because even though this has a laidback vibe it still seems upbeat, because of the bass & drums. Not that I'm an expert on genres, but I'm thinkin this is kind of a mix between Trip-Hop, Synth Pop (like newer Madonna, and a little House.
Though it is cool and is kinda remindin me of the song Boomerang by Cirrus mixed with Bjork and the end kinda sounds a little like the stuff found on Fanny Pack's album.
Round 3, I agree with Aiden above about adding extra stuff in the background to provide static filler. In relation to the vocals and the artist Green Velvet you could do something similar to what he did in his track Flash and have various sounds of Cameras thrown in (like shutter when a picture is snapped, the clicks of the flash, the sound it makes on older ones when the film is advanced, the sound it makes when the film is loaded, the sound of the lens' movement as it auto-focuses on newer ones, etc).
Round 4, maybe add some more synths near the end of the song. Like that part where there's a lull in the drums, before the they come back with the Bongos (between 4:00 and 4:30). Dunno what though- some pads, some leads, some of what's already there copied and with effects, shrugs.
Anyways, I really dig what you've got so far. I'd say that you're about 70-90 percent done with this (depending on your end goal for it). Looking forward to hearing the finished result. Later on!
Certainly very ambient, but kinda dark aswell, I really like the bit at 1:30 ish. You've put a very different spin on a very good acapella, I like it a lot.
Not that you care, but this is banging man. If I could do changeups like you, I would probably induce less vomit. I like the breathy, echoed vocal sample you used too. Fusion is definitely the right genre but the hip-hop is strong in you, master gizzard.
This song is the opposite of wackness.
As for the levels, they are good to go from head to toe. Nice track, bro.
when i say "i made the rest" i mean i arranged it. because you are new here, i will not snap at your rudeness. you will no doubt see your loops used here and there with no credit...such is the sad life of royalty free loops...and for you to tell me "not to take credit for something i didnt do"---you are mistaken..go back through my descrips..i say this alot. if i had to mention everyones name ive [loops]used in my tracks[excluding acapellas] well, i wouldnt get anything done. please dont spew shit from your mouth at me or any other member, especially in such a public way, if you knew anything about me, you would know i do not play [live] instruments.
then you private message me saying sorry i was so rude....
stick it in your ass.
think...then do..PRIVATE MESSAGE CAN CLEAR ALOT UP WITHOUT YOU TALKING TO ME LIKE A RETARD>
Yeah!...I think you might have succeeded in encapsulating the MrRobot essence in this track..which by the way is a feat in itself....He's had a rocky ride lately but apparently things are on the up with him..so here's hoping for his speedy return.....Bloody good work going down here Gizz!...thumpin' pro sound!..cheers mate :)
very brooding. seriously heavy (emotionally) sound.
nice little hardstyle-ish bassline in there. love the synth riff that kicked in at like :35.
nice job gizz.
Robot will be pleased
wow this is great, love the sounds love the feel. a great master. i don't know how you do it but this is great stuff! a professional sound. i can see you've spent tie on the form and can can hear how much effort you put in, great stuff!
Hey man...this is a cracker!...I like that echo delay on the swipes.....haha the vocals at one stage sound like a revving engine...there's enough subtle changes to keep the beat constantly fresh..it sounds like a great track for a rave (not that I'd know..I can just imagine a whole warehouse full of people getting off on this at maxed out volume levels!)..cheers Dave
Make a Full CD and sell it i would buy it... awsome song can be something to chill to or even part of a movie... great control over the entire thing... Mp2
Hi Gizz
thanks 4 pointing this one out to me......mighty groovy......loved the twangy bits......a bit like Jamiroquai in parts.......Well done bro
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Round 1, the master volume needs to be turned up just a little (it was barely audible at first). Unless you made this with a lengthy fade in and in that case nevermind.
Round 2, I dunno if the genre fits, because even though this has a laidback vibe it still seems upbeat, because of the bass & drums. Not that I'm an expert on genres, but I'm thinkin this is kind of a mix between Trip-Hop, Synth Pop (like newer Madonna, and a little House.
Though it is cool and is kinda remindin me of the song Boomerang by Cirrus mixed with Bjork and the end kinda sounds a little like the stuff found on Fanny Pack's album.
Round 3, I agree with Aiden above about adding extra stuff in the background to provide static filler. In relation to the vocals and the artist Green Velvet you could do something similar to what he did in his track Flash and have various sounds of Cameras thrown in (like shutter when a picture is snapped, the clicks of the flash, the sound it makes on older ones when the film is advanced, the sound it makes when the film is loaded, the sound of the lens' movement as it auto-focuses on newer ones, etc).
Round 4, maybe add some more synths near the end of the song. Like that part where there's a lull in the drums, before the they come back with the Bongos (between 4:00 and 4:30). Dunno what though- some pads, some leads, some of what's already there copied and with effects, shrugs.
Anyways, I really dig what you've got so far. I'd say that you're about 70-90 percent done with this (depending on your end goal for it). Looking forward to hearing the finished result. Later on!
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on soul of Apollon Musagetes [ft. holly][take control by Sector7even
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/20890
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ps: In my intro's there's always a background SFX(soft wind, rain ,thunder,...) for creating more sphere ;)
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Now I'm going to bed. It's 1am over here.
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love those vox, you are a master bro!
this sounds absolutely mad! love it, great melodies, beats and of course arrangement!
PEACE!
Butcha d-_-b
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very good production, pretty hypnotic track!!
great ...
peace, rei
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neil
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and i want to learn scratch things like that.
Superb!
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This song is the opposite of wackness.
As for the levels, they are good to go from head to toe. Nice track, bro.
thanks jackR. and thank you on the level check bro. nice to hear from you again.
gizzard
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Well done
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eh, are you getting in on the comp? love to see you in it my friend.
talk soon
g
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:)
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thank You for this fantastic track!
i really love it!
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Grtz Aidan
then you private message me saying sorry i was so rude....
stick it in your ass.
think...then do..PRIVATE MESSAGE CAN CLEAR ALOT UP WITHOUT YOU TALKING TO ME LIKE A RETARD>
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but anyway. great job
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and it has that warped warble sound too
yikes sounds kind of emo too.... :P
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cool stuff tho!!!
wow... really cool.. love the tension you got in the piano..
wow.. yah lotsa pops and crackles..
hmmmm
(not loud enough to be clipping...)
check your cables? turn off your anti-virus or anything hogging your memory when you export this from your daw... That might help?
I would also defrag, and delete your temp files, and use ccleaner. get it from google. recommended...
I hope you get that worked out!
It's smoothed out a bit near the end..
Ummm I also thought the drums could be a bit more focal in the mix.. but that's just me...
Love it!
Can't wait to hear the shiny version...
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nice little hardstyle-ish bassline in there. love the synth riff that kicked in at like :35.
nice job gizz.
Robot will be pleased
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loved it
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just being honest.
I like it. but i had to up the levels on my monitors.?
I don't want to sound rude... I hate being rude.
BUT why? why are you normalizing to -15db?
WHY? WHY?
0 is the point.
The beat is fantastic the lyrics are awesome.
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ya, id have to cut mr.doll in seeing how this one is his acapella..lol
thanks for the great review
g
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thanks 4 pointing this one out to me......mighty groovy......loved the twangy bits......a bit like Jamiroquai in parts.......Well done bro
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