larrywiggles1

Hello Larry!

This song is floating away...professional chill out...from 2.20 is outstanding...that electric, acoustic, brass triumph is out of control...:-) fabulous piece...

Your best heartwork...

Danke

Finaly!:) I was waiting for this one to appear here...was impressed when listening to it on the loopradio!Pleasing chill out ambience we have here! There can't be much to change...if anything, maybe the very beggining is a bit shaky and it needs smoother fade-in and perhaps (but that's just personal preference)the bird's sounds could possibly be leveled a bit lower in the mix, but all in all great job Mark!
I think you should have no major doubts when it comes to sharing some earlier material...may there be many more.:)

Best wishes and take care___Orlando

Some very nice ambiance in the intro! I know you said you would change a few things but it sounds pretty damn good to me! Has an almost morcheeba vibe at time which i like a lot! I love it when it kicks in at 1:40 very cool. Maybe the transition from there into the next bit could be a tad smoother but its not really that bad. This one is getting faved for sure! :)

Theres not much to say that hasnt already been said, so I'll just say this... Cool track man, I enjoyed listening! :)

Hello Mark & LarrY both & many thnX for sharing this beautifull & heartY music .I enjoyed all elements & materials.
lyriX was cool & in the same time strenuous & imagery especially according to considered ping_pong of male & female vocals.a pleasurable package & welldone. best wishes.___Behnam

Hello again! I really like this track. Would agree on a few adjustments that can be made on par with what's already been said, however, I think every track can always use something. I like the idea is what I am saying. I would listen to this on the regular. Kudos!!

in the begining i was like ummmmmmm ok lol but then listenning to it probly i really liked it , nice work ^_^

there is alot potential with this track, you have alot of different elements to play with, the tansition are nice also. I think if you re arrange this correctly and reprogram some of the structure you could have a hit song

I like this one. The song is experimental and surprise the listener through the whole song. Long time since I've heard something as good as this one. Nice arrangement and i really hope to here more like this from you!

Cheers, Anders.

Hello Mark

The concept is nice and neat .... There is much diversity in the composition, indicating a high perception of harmonies .... and the work of search performed. Congratulations.
I would not go back on all that has been written here about wishes or reviews of each, sincerely it's a bit secondary, because the listening time is nice .... You are on the right way, keep it up.

Dan

First thing I want to know, is when this hits the big time, who do they write out the check to.....Mark or Larry, hahaha.

Like the others have said, a few minor tweaks to the mix would take this one over the top. Just a suggestion, but maybe bring the acoustic/vocals up to the level of synths, etc. in the mix. While the acoustic and vocals in the beginning are nice and soft....and sitting a bit to the right in the mix (at least in my headphones), I think they are missing that stereo picture that would really benefit them. They seem a bit flat and mono compared to the rest of the piece.

Anyway, I'm simply nitpicking here. It really is a great tune even if you leave it the way it is right now. Great job Mark...er Larry, haha. I hope all is well.

Bear

OK - everyone has an opinion and I'm not anything more than a listener. My tracks have huge coherence issues so I'm not one to be throwing stones. I think you have to commit to one dominant genre or another. There are brilliant bits to this and in my opinion the dance or techno bits are better than the acoustic bits. I think you can cut the vocals and expand the bridges to complement them. I like this a lot but it has great potential if you kill some of the babies and strip it to its essence which in my opinion is a dance/techno track.
-clindsay

Awesome Work there Mister. Conceptually it's COOL :)

Simple, elaborate and vibrant with Energy.

To the TOP!!! BBBbbuuuoooyyyy!!!

Some minor mixing and balanced cohesion would draw people to this. The idea and where you are going with it is GREAT!

Good Job :)

I like the acoustics. Not a fan of auto tune. This one was impressive. Liked it more and more as it went on. Vocal outro is awesome!!!

Evan

I was entertained.Very dynamic approach, I love the variety. Simple to the point lyrics with a heart-full groove dadio yea.

I really enjoyed this!

Loved the vocals

Great beats n strings n keys.!

Yeah mate bloody nice track!

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Basicaly nothing wrong with this piece...on the contrary..It's pretty good work again, Mark! But yes, mix needs a proper balance and everything should be just fine...so cheer up, my friend.:)

To new musical challenges___Orlando

geeez...here I am calling you larry again mark...its early out here...haha...keep on...Ed

Hey Larry...you`ve good a nice poppy "Now: sounding mix going here...I`m biased of course so I particularly like the little acoustic rhythm guitar bits (haha)..the whole thing is really well constructed so kudos to you on the composing...Guess I am another who is not a fan of autotune when its been used to the point that you can hear it...however, you used it as an effect here and thats a different story...I just read an article on autotune where the writer was comparing its current prevalance to that gated reverb drum sound that was the rage for a while in the 80s...but for now its a common part of whats happening in pop music etc...There was one little part at .20 sec in to the mix where I thought that high synth line was a bit distracting...maybe it could be pulled waaay back there...works better where it is in the mix with more compant....Anyway...you`re off to a good start...keep it going...Ed

I like some of the auto tune elements, but get rid of them at 1:45 on and keep the mix clean there. Also Maybe a defined chorus somewhere, all in all it has good potential as a song. I agree with the others about the mixing and volumes but i understand this is a rough mix. Look forward to hearing the progress on this one!
Ciao
Steve

Refreshing pop song, really like the vocals, was fun to listen! :)

Hey Mark, I like the tune a lot, the vocals, instruments and arrangement is all real good but as mentioned the volumes are a bit off especially on the vocals.
Nothing that a bit of eq adjustment couldn't fix.

it a great track but the volumes need looking at ithink but awesome tune mate

Steve

Hey Larry...

Overall, it's a good song, but in my opinion there are some small mistakes...(for me)...2.12 the short synth is too harsh...the vocs is too low in the whole number...agree with SN, autotune is not my friend, too...
Though,it easily could be a top hit with a little more worh on it...

Danke

I quite like it though, again, you've said nothing about how it was made, who's doing the vocals (it could be you for all I know) whether it's all loops etc

I definitely don't like the autotune on the vocals and would remove all of that (it's used as an effect here, not as a correctional tool). But I'll give a better review once you've given me some idea of what I'm listening to.

1:03 I like the busy change and rapid guitar and maybe also arpeggiated synth.