Just having a second listen.
This is put together really well.
In the last half of it I swear I was off to a bullfight.
Surprised this has so few comments to be honest.
Very enjoyable track you got here. I was expecting this to be metal full through, but liked the little change ups. I'm not exactly sure of the other genres you expressed in this track but I know its not metal. Anyways well done!
Hey traz that is a real nice intro and i like the concept of working only with loops i know that must be a lot of work to stitch that all up and make an entire track come together but it really works here. More power to you peace out. Robbie.
Thank you, however, this is exactly the first track where i use some live instruments (electric guitar) - so made by not loops only. :)
Btw, sorry for the late reply...
Neat how you found so many loops in the same key and made them work. I agree with silverman; there's something about this mix that could stand out more. Perhaps LIGHTLY sidechain the instruments to the drums? Then the transients would snap just a bit more.
Man, you are awesome! Looked after it, and found an "error" : one of the main drum loops were not 120 but some 119.958 bpm. As i used as loop, it means some really minimal slide - you (at least, me) cannot really hear the difference, but maybe there is some different feeling. Wonder if it's do the trick.
Thousand thanks for the feedback!
Pretty cool chilled out track, nice composition overall, enjoyed it! There are some cool dynamics in the song, building it up and bringing it back down adds depth and dimension to it. I really like the change around 2:25, some cool changes in that section towards the end.
Good to see you adding some live electric guitar, too. Keep doing that man!!
Well, that "live" word is not really true - played on guitar, but what you hear is a looped and edited thing. I play it dozen times then get the most acceptable one and upgraded it to get a few loops. You don't want to hear the worst tries, i sweat blood with the editing of the best ones too and the result is still crap if you hear it standalone. :D
There's a great little something going on here being let down a little with the mastering side of things .... I think.
I'm still learning this stuff myself so can't always with confidence say what's wrong.
Something isn't quite right.
If this were mine I'd keep working on it because there is a great little something going on but not quite making it through.
Thanks for the feedback!
I think i know the problem : it's simply me. Specifically, my guitar play. I made it just for fun, because bored my daily training. I want to do something more entertainining thing, so tryed if can make something with my actual skills. With a cheap Epiphone stratocaster, 3 months old strings, i just tried to make some basic melodies just for fun. The pickups are cheap single coils and within a few meters, there is my computer and several power cables and connectors nearby - the result is a lot of noise.
Even forgot to tune my instrument before recording, and playing with bare hands, hehe. :)
And a sad fact : after 10 months, i still can't play on guitar. What you hear is under any quality. With the other loops, you can't hear them cleanly so it sounds a bit weird, but alone... it's terrible guitarplay (way too bad for upload). :D
Because that, i think no man in the world who can save it, so this tune is such as is it. :)
Olyan mintha a Delta (tudományos-fantasztikus ismeretterjesztő műsor volt, Kudlik Júliával) főcim zenéjét hallanám a 22. századból...istentelenül tetszik...komolyan...a 2 'betét' rész még inkább elviszi a soundtrack irányába...a 2. olyan mintha egy Depeche Mode B oldalas bakelitjéről szólna...ez kiba jó lett...
Emlékszem rá (tudod, én is öreg vagyok. :D), de engem egyáltalán nem emlékeztet rá. Igazából még csak hasonlónak sem találom. :)
Sőt, eléggé szeretem a DM-ot, de olyan beütést sem hallok rajta... Egy-két loopnak köszönhetően inkább olyan Jarre-os beütést érzek rajta itt-ott.
Ami a gitározást illeti, hagyjuk azt a pár hónapot... az nekem pár év lesz. Ritka fakezű vagyok, mint az valamennyire hallható is. :)
Tíz hónap alatt jutottam idáig hogy nagy nehezen összedobtam ezt egy félnapi szenvedéssel. :D
Üdv!
Amazing production! I'd never be able to put so many loops together and make it sound good, and good job crediting everyone that's mad respect. Keep it up man!
Thank you!
However, its my normal method, i work with loops only - relative easy thing i think, you need a lot of time and patience. What is really different in this tune and were gives a lot of headache to me, my first ever guitarplay, lol. :D
Regards, traz
Thank you! However, i feel i'm failed this time, because the lack of creativity. Somehow it does not add up enough... Made from very nice loops just an acceptable track, not so good work. :)
Regards, traz
This song is interesting, primarily because of the abrupt changes between sections. I realize that this is part of working with loops, and I can't fault it at all. Regardless, the song seems to flow well, and everything fits together. That theremin sounding lead synth around the 2 minute mark sounds really good in this context! It's no surprise that this song received so many plays, since it just sounds good and comforting. A bit sad in spots, but hopeful in feeling. I like it a lot!
Thank you! And sorry for the late reply...
Yeah, i think this is one of my luckiest one ever... Wonder if i can made another one like this ever. :)
Dunno if i made another one with similarly strong atmosphere.
Regards, traz
Dang, this was a cool one! Listened to it while I finished the dishes, and it worked well for getting things done. I liked the acid stylings in the early part very much! After that, things seem to go a bit more on the rock side, yet it stayed in a cohesive state... all in all, the song works great! Cool to hear some of those older loops getting used! Sorry it took a while to find this piece! Have a good day!
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This is put together really well.
In the last half of it I swear I was off to a bullfight.
Surprised this has so few comments to be honest.
I were lucky with this one, it's very rare when i can get almost exactly that what i wants to hear.
Btw, sorry for the late reply...
Regards, traz
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Thanks for sharing!
You are not alone - i never know where to categorize what i made. :)
Sorry for the late reply, for long time now just chasing myself...
Regards, traz
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Sorry for the late reply. :(
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Thank you, however, this is exactly the first track where i use some live instruments (electric guitar) - so made by not loops only. :)
Btw, sorry for the late reply...
Regards, traz
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the track is really good too, nice choice of loops. The melt between these and your guitar riffs give us a cool render
nice work!
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My guitarplay still sounds like a lame, horrible mash standalone, but somehow works here - more or less. :)
Regards, traz
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Cool vibe though, definitely keep working on it!!
Man, you are awesome! Looked after it, and found an "error" : one of the main drum loops were not 120 but some 119.958 bpm. As i used as loop, it means some really minimal slide - you (at least, me) cannot really hear the difference, but maybe there is some different feeling. Wonder if it's do the trick.
Thousand thanks for the feedback!
Regards, traz
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Good to see you adding some live electric guitar, too. Keep doing that man!!
Take care!
Wayne
Well, that "live" word is not really true - played on guitar, but what you hear is a looped and edited thing. I play it dozen times then get the most acceptable one and upgraded it to get a few loops. You don't want to hear the worst tries, i sweat blood with the editing of the best ones too and the result is still crap if you hear it standalone. :D
Regards, traz
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I'm still learning this stuff myself so can't always with confidence say what's wrong.
Something isn't quite right.
If this were mine I'd keep working on it because there is a great little something going on but not quite making it through.
Thanks for the feedback!
I think i know the problem : it's simply me. Specifically, my guitar play. I made it just for fun, because bored my daily training. I want to do something more entertainining thing, so tryed if can make something with my actual skills. With a cheap Epiphone stratocaster, 3 months old strings, i just tried to make some basic melodies just for fun. The pickups are cheap single coils and within a few meters, there is my computer and several power cables and connectors nearby - the result is a lot of noise.
Even forgot to tune my instrument before recording, and playing with bare hands, hehe. :)
And a sad fact : after 10 months, i still can't play on guitar. What you hear is under any quality. With the other loops, you can't hear them cleanly so it sounds a bit weird, but alone... it's terrible guitarplay (way too bad for upload). :D
Because that, i think no man in the world who can save it, so this tune is such as is it. :)
Regards, traz
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(a gitározásról majd egy pár hónap múlva...:-)
Danke
Emlékszem rá (tudod, én is öreg vagyok. :D), de engem egyáltalán nem emlékeztet rá. Igazából még csak hasonlónak sem találom. :)
Sőt, eléggé szeretem a DM-ot, de olyan beütést sem hallok rajta... Egy-két loopnak köszönhetően inkább olyan Jarre-os beütést érzek rajta itt-ott.
Ami a gitározást illeti, hagyjuk azt a pár hónapot... az nekem pár év lesz. Ritka fakezű vagyok, mint az valamennyire hallható is. :)
Tíz hónap alatt jutottam idáig hogy nagy nehezen összedobtam ezt egy félnapi szenvedéssel. :D
Üdv!
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However, its my normal method, i work with loops only - relative easy thing i think, you need a lot of time and patience. What is really different in this tune and were gives a lot of headache to me, my first ever guitarplay, lol. :D
Regards, traz
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Yeah, i think this is one of my luckiest one ever... Wonder if i can made another one like this ever. :)
Dunno if i made another one with similarly strong atmosphere.
Regards, traz
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Thank you!
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I never care a loop's age, the question is always what i can use actually. :)
Regards, traz
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Great track track anyway! :)
Thanks. :)