Jó lett...a kérdéses rész is jól szól...szép telt az egész...asszem azok a Centrist loopok viszik az egészet...azok a pad szerű valamik...a basszusok brutál, genyó jók...azért hallani hogy foglalkozol az eqkkal...most hogy már tudom...:-)
még ebbe is benyomtál egy szaros loopomat? ember, te elképesztő vagy...trazp nótában egy loopom...sosem gondoltam volna...
na további szép nyarat baszki...:-(
Igen, tulajdonképpen arra épül az egész... eredetileg a szintiket meg az ilyesmiket nem terveztem bele, tulajdonképpen az egész háttérhangzás lett volna egy brutálzúzósan rezonáló dubstep alá, csak éppen nem találtam olyan loopokat ami ment volna alá szolid 128 bpm alatt. Így került képbe végül a zúzós basszus (ami egyébként valójában 2-3 együtt :D)
Hey man. Just heard your piece. Great work.
Personally i think it's a bit messy, with too many layers on it. Clean it up a bit, find a smooth line between your transitions and get some consistency - that would work wonders!
Think of it like a story you want to tell. You can't interrupt all the time - you need to give people a bit of comfort in knowing the progression.
You got a ton of good stuff in this mix - you just need to find a thin red line.
Despite that, i like your universe. As M2G said above, it's nature and peace. Exploit that! :-)
Thank you! :)
However, i think this is one of my most clear-out tracks ever... My style and ability simply won't fit for sophisticated tracks.
Chaotic, noisy and dissonant sounding and flappy transitions (especially the later) are lot more proper features for my universe. Actually, i find this one blissfully (pure luck, really :D) beautiful, but somehow boring to me too. :)
Wow, this is an ambitious song. My guitar parts sound a bit out of key though a bit flat.lol There are some very cool parts to this song, I really was digging the part about 55 sec where the strings come in, I replayed that part a dozen times.
There is a lot going on here and you seem to have been given some input. I recommend simplifying the song and just picking the best parts out and focusing on those parts. I have to hand it to you though, you used a lot of people's loops, pretty creative on that level alone.
Thanks, Wayne! Yeah, i see your point. Your guitar loop are really out of the tune a bit in this track, and that part are a bit "flat" or "rough" compared with the rest, this is because i find it interesting to leave that part a bit simple, made for a contrast against the more complex other parts.
I think i will make a shortened and "harmonized", less chaotic version of this somewhere the mid-range future, when it's already "out of my ears", but that will be another song i think (like an nitro and outro version for something).
Somethings were just never meant to go together...
Like trying to fit a round peg into a square hole, you can
try to do it all you want but it will still be wrong...
In this case sounding wrong, I use to play a tune with My Friend
George and the Parliament Funkadelic, it was called "If it don't
fit don't force it" a lot of stuff sounds forced here...
Never the less it's a Mammoth project you've taken on here, hope
to hear it again when it's completed...
Thanks for sharing your opinion!
I did not think as a mammoth project for this one, but im happy, because i especially like those tracks where i get contrary opinions (however, i'm always just hope that the positive comments are honest, and not just an gentle "a bit lame song, but why make him sad?" :D).
I think this means that the track is really "craggy", someone can hate or love it too because its features, can generate feelings - which means a lot to me.
Hey, dude, this is very cool! I'm enjoying it very much, and I'm happy to have a loop of mine as a part of it. Silverman's comment seems to stem from a lack of listening to jazz, as often in jazz the different instruments will have their moments throughout a song, which is also a characteristic of much fusion. You're right, those guitar parts are quite cool! Such an upbeat pleasing track! I really like it. Definitely a fave and download (thank you for the DL)!
I think there's to much going on.
Plus a lack of structure which you can get away with often but I don't think you have in this piece.
It seems to go from one instrument to another like every instrument is going to get it's individual turn.
Sorr to be a little negative on this one.
Lol, you dont need to apologise for your opinion. :)
Im always be glad to get any critics (with concretums ofcourse, because i cant do anything with "this is shit" likewise posts), because from those i can learn other people's thoughts about what i made, and sometimes i can learn from them. When i post sometimes for other people's tracks, me too trying to point to the "errors" of the track from my aspect.
And this time I even don't feel your post as a negative one, despite that i don't feel like you about the structure (but true, its very loose even with my standards too :D).
As i write in the track's description, i made this one under the influence of a really cool japanese anime called "Durarara!!" - i finish with the full first season (25 episodes! :D) over the weekend, then start to make this one at the night instead sleep. :)
I can't really explain without the knowledge of the serie but i try. Its all about atmosphere. In this anime, there is not a single lead character, it's about several (about a dozen) very different and really weird people as protagonist, both of them with own individuality and stories (a lot times crossed, ofcourse). I find it simply sensational.
My concept here were especially what you wrote : to go from one instrument (like a person) to another, and bring them his individual turn (story) and to put them (somehow :D) to a loose structure. Originally i designed as a short track around 3 mins and without any repetition of parts (and for a bit more dinamyc sounding), but i find the guitar parts so cool that i can't resist to repeat them. :)
This chaotic style and discurvise structure is very close to me anyways (actually, i find the only difficulty with working loops is to fit very different cool full "parts" together for a structure), but this time i unleasheed it. :)
Still, i can't look at the song with "neutral eyes", to me, the track is really brings back the anime's atmosphere (despite the fact that the show's official music totally other styled - and lot more structured :D) and i'm very happy with the result. I feel it as a very addictive, sweet and easy song. :)
Maybe a few months later me too will find it less impressive (this occurs a lot times with me after 6-12 months) and will see the flaws too.
regards, traz
Ez valami elbaszott, kibaszott, kurva jó lett...de komolyan...ilyen egyben még nem volt nótád...sem zeneileg, sem technikailag...kellemes country feeling kis soundtrack feelinggel...állat...1.12 nél nyomtam be a likeot...csak azért olyan későn mert a fröccsömet készítettem...:-)
Köszönöm, bár szerintem a legjobb ötben - talán tízben - sincsen, bár tényleg eléggé egyben van köszönhetően annak hogy tulajdonképpen végig gyakorlatilag egyetlen kis dallamot cicomáztam. :)
A vicces az hogy így is pokoli nehezen állt össze, szanaszét kellett EQznom hogy szóljon valahogy. Azt hittem, belehülyülök...
Az eggyel korábban feltöltött számom szerintem majdnem minden téren egy (de inkább két) klasszissal jobb - az inkább ott van a szeren mint ez. :)
traz75
This track is brilliant, when you listen once it leaves you with lots of questions.
But when you listen again then you get it.
Great job well done
Jamid
neat use of a variety of loops. you really had some fun with this one! At 3:08 you bring in a new section that adds some nice new interest to the track. Nice work. Look forward to discovering more of your stuff. glad you found a home for a few of my loops! regards!
Never reviewed a track before of yours, so glad I have now, this is totally amazing work, excellent clarity and arrangement, brilliant choice for the instrumental, can not fault in anyway...Massive FAV...Looking forward to checking out your other works in the future, if anything like this one, you will have a new fan...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
Thank you!
Well, this one is one of (if not) the most harmonic track i made ever, normally i makes lot more dissonant and weird things. :)
If you like this and want to look after my other tracks in similar (or so) style, then i can propose "So many hurts", "Tripping around the Saturn", "All alone", "Paradise Noir", "Floods" or "Dankeid" from my tracks. :)
Sorry for not getting to this earlier. Pretty busy arrangement with a lot going on but in some way it all falls in place. I gave this a handful of listens to absorb it all. Sounds like a wrong piano not at the :19 and :23 sec mark that repeats throughout the song. Sounds a bit detuned almost like an effect but it sounds off to me. Nothing major.
Ambitious track for sure so I'll tip my hat in parting.
A bit weird, i must admit, but i especially like it in this weird track too. :)
I just feels similar like you, the track is somehow almost falls in the first half - but then in the 2nd half somehow simply... everything moves to his place.
Sorry for the late reply too, were inactive recently...
Regards, traz
Hey what a nice job, put together really well ( and that must of taken some doing) I don't think it is repetitive at all. Ok the arrangement could be sweetened but not a massive job and it didn't stop me enjoying it... in fact I keep humming it back!! Nice one.
Best wishes,
Mark
Thank you! I think the first half is a bit chaotic with that "adventuring", and the second half fits really well together and makes good impression overall. Without the first half's wandering, it sounds a lot more repetative i think. :)
Regards, traz
Hey Traz75, Your track is sick. I was wounding if I can have permission to use this track royalty free in a BASE jumping video I am producing to put on youtube. I think it would fit really nicely in spots. I would give proper music credit in the end of the video of course! Thanks so much!
Thank you! You are right, this one is really a bit chaotic track from several aspects, but when i made it, i can't do better. Despite this, i hope you still like it (i do). :)
Regards, traz
Hearing more loops I've used before over the years. Nice, I'm also a Sagittarius too. 2015 will be the year of the Sagittarius' completely. Count it. Great work here, reminds me of when I made tracks with nothing but loops. You blend them nicely. Like it. peace
Elképesztően hangulatos, szárnyaló tétel ez, leginkább egy filmzenében tudnám elképzelni...konkrétabban pedig a tegnap este m1-en vetített Sebastien and Belle mozi egyik betétdala simán lehetne...láttátok?
Köszi... nem láttam a filmet, nem nagyon szoktam tévét nézni a reklámok miatt. Érdekes módon nekem nem tűnik annyira filmzenének, inkább reklámbetétként, vagy "sportbetétként" tudnám elképzelni, legalábbis egyes részeit. Az egy nappal korábban feltöltött számom szerintem sokkal inkább filmszerű (bár egy kicsit nehezebben emészthető stílusú, de szerintem majdnem olyan kellemes mint ez). Szerintem ez egy picit olyanra sikeredett mintha te csináltad volna, legalábbis abban a tekintetben hogy szokásommal ellentétben általában egyszerre csak max 3-4 csatorna szól, a 6-8-as "normámhoz" képest - nálam ez már szuper minimalistának számít. :)
Really nicely put together. When I initially looked at the description, I was expecting sounds to be all over the place but, here, it sounds like organized chaos... in a good way. lol
on Beyond the stars by traz75
Jó lett...a kérdéses rész is jól szól...szép telt az egész...asszem azok a Centrist loopok viszik az egészet...azok a pad szerű valamik...a basszusok brutál, genyó jók...azért hallani hogy foglalkozol az eqkkal...most hogy már tudom...:-)
még ebbe is benyomtál egy szaros loopomat? ember, te elképesztő vagy...trazp nótában egy loopom...sosem gondoltam volna...
na további szép nyarat baszki...:-(
Danke
Igen, tulajdonképpen arra épül az egész... eredetileg a szintiket meg az ilyesmiket nem terveztem bele, tulajdonképpen az egész háttérhangzás lett volna egy brutálzúzósan rezonáló dubstep alá, csak éppen nem találtam olyan loopokat ami ment volna alá szolid 128 bpm alatt. Így került képbe végül a zúzós basszus (ami egyébként valójában 2-3 együtt :D)
Üdv, izzadok és takarítok... egész héten. :-(
on In the forest of the past by traz75
Personally i think it's a bit messy, with too many layers on it. Clean it up a bit, find a smooth line between your transitions and get some consistency - that would work wonders!
Think of it like a story you want to tell. You can't interrupt all the time - you need to give people a bit of comfort in knowing the progression.
You got a ton of good stuff in this mix - you just need to find a thin red line.
Despite that, i like your universe. As M2G said above, it's nature and peace. Exploit that! :-)
Take care man!
Thank you! :)
However, i think this is one of my most clear-out tracks ever... My style and ability simply won't fit for sophisticated tracks.
Chaotic, noisy and dissonant sounding and flappy transitions (especially the later) are lot more proper features for my universe. Actually, i find this one blissfully (pure luck, really :D) beautiful, but somehow boring to me too. :)
Regards, traz
on The day after by traz75
Cheers,
Scott
on DuRaRaRum by traz75
There is a lot going on here and you seem to have been given some input. I recommend simplifying the song and just picking the best parts out and focusing on those parts. I have to hand it to you though, you used a lot of people's loops, pretty creative on that level alone.
Wayne
I think i will make a shortened and "harmonized", less chaotic version of this somewhere the mid-range future, when it's already "out of my ears", but that will be another song i think (like an nitro and outro version for something).
Regards, traz
on DuRaRaRum by traz75
Like trying to fit a round peg into a square hole, you can
try to do it all you want but it will still be wrong...
In this case sounding wrong, I use to play a tune with My Friend
George and the Parliament Funkadelic, it was called "If it don't
fit don't force it" a lot of stuff sounds forced here...
Never the less it's a Mammoth project you've taken on here, hope
to hear it again when it's completed...
Peace...TG.
Thanks for sharing your opinion!
I did not think as a mammoth project for this one, but im happy, because i especially like those tracks where i get contrary opinions (however, i'm always just hope that the positive comments are honest, and not just an gentle "a bit lame song, but why make him sad?" :D).
I think this means that the track is really "craggy", someone can hate or love it too because its features, can generate feelings - which means a lot to me.
regards, traz
on DuRaRaRum by traz75
This is a very good track with a hint of jazzy feel.
Very good
Well done.
Jamid
on DuRaRaRum by traz75
My only heartache is that, one of the guitar loops are mono...
on So many hurts by traz75
on DuRaRaRum by traz75
Plus a lack of structure which you can get away with often but I don't think you have in this piece.
It seems to go from one instrument to another like every instrument is going to get it's individual turn.
Sorr to be a little negative on this one.
Lol, you dont need to apologise for your opinion. :)
Im always be glad to get any critics (with concretums ofcourse, because i cant do anything with "this is shit" likewise posts), because from those i can learn other people's thoughts about what i made, and sometimes i can learn from them. When i post sometimes for other people's tracks, me too trying to point to the "errors" of the track from my aspect.
And this time I even don't feel your post as a negative one, despite that i don't feel like you about the structure (but true, its very loose even with my standards too :D).
As i write in the track's description, i made this one under the influence of a really cool japanese anime called "Durarara!!" - i finish with the full first season (25 episodes! :D) over the weekend, then start to make this one at the night instead sleep. :)
I can't really explain without the knowledge of the serie but i try. Its all about atmosphere. In this anime, there is not a single lead character, it's about several (about a dozen) very different and really weird people as protagonist, both of them with own individuality and stories (a lot times crossed, ofcourse). I find it simply sensational.
My concept here were especially what you wrote : to go from one instrument (like a person) to another, and bring them his individual turn (story) and to put them (somehow :D) to a loose structure. Originally i designed as a short track around 3 mins and without any repetition of parts (and for a bit more dinamyc sounding), but i find the guitar parts so cool that i can't resist to repeat them. :)
This chaotic style and discurvise structure is very close to me anyways (actually, i find the only difficulty with working loops is to fit very different cool full "parts" together for a structure), but this time i unleasheed it. :)
Still, i can't look at the song with "neutral eyes", to me, the track is really brings back the anime's atmosphere (despite the fact that the show's official music totally other styled - and lot more structured :D) and i'm very happy with the result. I feel it as a very addictive, sweet and easy song. :)
Maybe a few months later me too will find it less impressive (this occurs a lot times with me after 6-12 months) and will see the flaws too.
regards, traz
ps : sorry for the WOT. :)
on Cure power of the sea by traz75
on Cure power of the sea by traz75
Ez valami elbaszott, kibaszott, kurva jó lett...de komolyan...ilyen egyben még nem volt nótád...sem zeneileg, sem technikailag...kellemes country feeling kis soundtrack feelinggel...állat...1.12 nél nyomtam be a likeot...csak azért olyan későn mert a fröccsömet készítettem...:-)
Congrats and handshake, Danke
A vicces az hogy így is pokoli nehezen állt össze, szanaszét kellett EQznom hogy szóljon valahogy. Azt hittem, belehülyülök...
Az eggyel korábban feltöltött számom szerintem majdnem minden téren egy (de inkább két) klasszissal jobb - az inkább ott van a szeren mint ez. :)
üdv a pokolból (melegem van)
on The day after by traz75
This track is brilliant, when you listen once it leaves you with lots of questions.
But when you listen again then you get it.
Great job well done
Jamid
on The day after by traz75
on The day after by traz75
on In the forest of the past by traz75
Never reviewed a track before of yours, so glad I have now, this is totally amazing work, excellent clarity and arrangement, brilliant choice for the instrumental, can not fault in anyway...Massive FAV...Looking forward to checking out your other works in the future, if anything like this one, you will have a new fan...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
Thank you!
Well, this one is one of (if not) the most harmonic track i made ever, normally i makes lot more dissonant and weird things. :)
If you like this and want to look after my other tracks in similar (or so) style, then i can propose "So many hurts", "Tripping around the Saturn", "All alone", "Paradise Noir", "Floods" or "Dankeid" from my tracks. :)
on Book of the sagittarius by traz75
Ambitious track for sure so I'll tip my hat in parting.
Wayne
Thank you!
I think i know about witch is the mentioned piano loop. Anchor's http://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/1988/hungarian-piano-01-by-anchor-free-100bpm-acoustic-piano-loop
A bit weird, i must admit, but i especially like it in this weird track too. :)
I just feels similar like you, the track is somehow almost falls in the first half - but then in the 2nd half somehow simply... everything moves to his place.
Sorry for the late reply too, were inactive recently...
Regards, traz
on Twisted chix of Deling city by traz75
on Book of the sagittarius by traz75
Hey what a nice job, put together really well ( and that must of taken some doing) I don't think it is repetitive at all. Ok the arrangement could be sweetened but not a massive job and it didn't stop me enjoying it... in fact I keep humming it back!! Nice one.
Best wishes,
Mark
Thank you! I think the first half is a bit chaotic with that "adventuring", and the second half fits really well together and makes good impression overall. Without the first half's wandering, it sounds a lot more repetative i think. :)
Regards, traz
on All alone by traz75
Thank you! Ofcourse you can use it, its all free. Please post a link here after uploading the video, i'm curious. :)
Regards, traz
on Book of the sagittarius by traz75
Peace!
Regards, traz
on Book of the sagittarius by traz75
Gramo/Neo
on Floods by traz75
Elképesztően hangulatos, szárnyaló tétel ez, leginkább egy filmzenében tudnám elképzelni...konkrétabban pedig a tegnap este m1-en vetített Sebastien and Belle mozi egyik betétdala simán lehetne...láttátok?
Gratula, ez a szám nagyon jó!!!
Instant fav and dl!
Danke
on Floods by traz75
Cheers___Orlando
on Book of the sagittarius by traz75
on Pongo Pongo by traz75