I like how you've arranged the loops, definitely a pleasing sound. I've tried a few times to make songs entirely out of loops but can never get the cohesiveness I desire, so well done for that. Would be cool to hear what you could come up with by adding some of your own elements. Only thing I would say is the bit at 3:06 is a bit abrupt and I'm not sure I like how you dropped the volume all the way at 3:22, before bringing it back in again. Could've been done a bit smoother. Overall nice track! :)
Thank you! I must admit, the second half of the track is not really good. I must ensure you about "my own elements" : you really-really don't want to hear it. I made only one track with lead of my own creations, and the result was so horrible, even had some nightmare with it. Not because so scary but simply so awful. Despite some efforts in the past almost 3 years, i came to realize the sad fact : i don't have the least talent or/and patience to create melodies. My lame little midi keyboard is crying when i try to make anything with him, and i'm going to savage after about a hour when can't makeup even three simple note. :( :D
Ez nagyon tetszetős lett...2.43-ig gyönyörű...:-) utána a hangulat váltást még szoknom kell, kicsit idegen az akkord menetből való kilépés de a szaxi elviszi...
szenzációs a belassulás a végén...elég eredeti ötlet...nem sokat hallottam itt ilyet...
Szó mi szó, most letöltöm, hallgatom hogy megszokjam a kérdéses részt...
Köszi... Sajnos nem igen sikerült összehoznom a váltást, pedig próbálkoztam nagyon. :S Egyszerűen nem találtam megfelelő hangulatú loopokat hozzá, az pedig nyilvánvaló volt hogy egyetlen dallam - legyen akármilyen szép is - akárhogyan is díszítem mint a karácsonyfát, nem visz el egy számot anélkül hogy unalmassá ne válna... A vicces hogy akármivel próbálkoztam, csak szarabb lett, így hát végül addig hallgattam az elmúlt hetekben hogy végül meggyőztem magam hogy "jó ez így is" és maradt ez. :D
Egyébként eredetileg még úgy a 2. perc környékén is benne volt majdnem ugyanez a váltás, de ott valahogy még jobban elütött ezért kivágtam onnan és kicsit átszerveztem. Sajnos összességében nem sikerült túl jól ez a szám, pedig tényleg szépek ezek a gitárhangok, több volt benne.
A vége meg tudod, mondhatni a védjegyem, már többször alkalmaztam ezt. :)
I remember listening to one of your tracks few months ago and it also must have been a loop merger for sure haha! Really nice combination here.
I like Slap's solo at 1:55, it is nicely placed. 2:43 point is interesting. There are some other sudden mood changes on the last section of the track, but overall it is very gentle and coherent composition. I like that the main theme returns finally, slowing it down at the very end was really a fine concept. Very effective.
I enjoyed listening to this one. Good work with the loops!
Even if it is quite busy, I don't think it's that horrible. Quite entertaining to listen to haha. The only thing that I find that sounds too out of place - as others have mentioned - is the guitar haha. But besides that, it was a very entertaining listen :)
Tudom hogy majdnem mindig ezt írom de most tényleg óriási gratula!!!
Abszolut pozitív nóta Nightingalellel egyetértve mozi zenés érzéssel...minden a helyén, nekem egy kicsit ilyen 'happy-fusion' genre besorolással, és ez jó mert akár lehetne a saját stílusod is...:-)
Martin gitár mintái azonban nem eredeti hangszerből érkező hangok, ezt remélem tudod...csak úgy...nem mintha szarok lennének ezek (mert nyilván nem töltenék le több ezren) csak én a Tumblewwed, Nightingale, Shortbusmusic, EpicRecord vonalat jobban csípem...
Köszi. Szerintem is jól sikerült - talán az egyik legjobban -, rám is fért mert elég sok elcseszett félkész projectem van már az utóbbi időkből...
Őszintén szólva nem tudtam - nekem nagyon igazi hangzásúnak tűntek -, de számomra ez semmit nem számít - ha valaki egy tölcsért dugna a seggébe és úgy fingana ilyen loopokat, akkor is ugyanúgy felhasználnám. :)
Én igazából minden vonalat csípek, most egyszerűen így esett hogy az ő loopjai voltak ahol "kinyílott" a könyvtáram és találtam olyat ami megfogott (tulajdonképpen az ő loopjaira épült az egész).
Általában jobban szeretem a kaotikus dolgokat, de ez most ilyen kis letisztult lett, akár minimalistának is nevezhetném ha nem volna tulajdonképpen egész komplex. :)
A kategorizálással meg mindig bajban vagyok... A fusion ez esetben nagyon megtévesztő lett volna szerintem, a chillen gondolkodtam, de a hangzás miatt úgy gondoltam hogy még mindig az aku áll hozzá a legközelebb.
üdv, és a gratula mellett sok szerencsét otthon (is)! :)
The fact, i'm totally lame for any composing work... So instead to made huge efforts to make some very horrible "own" music, i'm work with loops only - this is a fight too to make something that really my own and not only loops together from a few people... Just can hope to improve with the times at least in this. :)
Thank you!
And you can count to use your loops on the future too - i like them, and think your loops are a bit underrated from utilization point of view... At least i find your loop's download rates surprisingly low against their quality. :)
That's a lot of loops used, I'll give ya credit for that. Take you a while to hunt them all down? This must have taken some time to construct.
Neat track you got here. There are some nice changes with a variety of instruments that I really like taking center stage. Matter of fact after a few listens I have decided to fav and dl this one so thanks for sharing!
Actually, i have downloaded some 20K+ loops from looperman. Yes, it take a while to download in the past 1.5 years+, but worth the efforts i think. Its a huge base to look thorough when have to choose loops for a track, but sometimes i find it desperately small too when can't find those what i wants...
Actually, this one were smooth work, the base construct is made by a few (2-3) hours only which is very fast from so many loops i think. The refine process were longer, and the really hard work were the EQ optimising. Just because im dumb for that, plus this time i wants to maxed it with my best. Worked on it about 10-15 hours i think... I know its laughable knowing the result (i bet a competent musician do those mostly basic changes by a hour), but i cant do any more with that - and im really happy with the outcome. :)
Igen...ez tényleg nice work...ez is vidám, laza, amolyan nyári fesztivál zene...ragával, tök jó groovival, nagyon tetszik ahogy a dubstep dobokat betoltad a nótába...jól szól bár munkahelyen vagyok egy 10 éves Samsung monitoron hallgattam saját hangszórón át...:-)
Majd otthon +1x...:-)
yo...
Köszi. Vannak hiányosságai, de azért aranyos... Ez csak olyan kis gyors project volt, egyszerűen semmi nem akart összeállni, többet is elkezdtem és töröltem is - aztán úgy voltam vele hogy jó, akkor próbáljunk meg csinálni valami nagyon egyszerűt az éjszakából hátralévő pár órában, ha már az egész napot a semmiért szerencsétlenkedtem végig... ez lett belőle. Nem egy nagy durranás de kedves - főleg a végével vagyok elégedett. A következő számom viszont ezek után igen dögös lett, érdemes lesz meghallgatni, azt ígérhetem. :)
Mate liking what I am hearing here, this has so much potential for sure, standout is the pads, nice pads, notice in review before mine, saying it has to much going on, personally don't really agree, listening with headset on, only thing I would say maybe separate some elements, as pad does seem to be little on sided, very cinematic type of track, prob reckon Cinematic would suit this more so then the trap genre, first piece listened too here for a little while, have to say really enjoy listening to this one, lots of feelings and emotions coming from the work...great work matey...fav...Peace n Respect... Mosaic...
Thank you, moved to cin. :)
I were not sure in this one, its far away from my style, i feel it as a bit outlandish and neutral to me... Just a try. :)
I find the pads are a bit too loud here and there.
Not sure about this one. At most parts there is too much going on! Even though it's a good try and certainly better than my first try. Maybe you should try Mastering samples if your using Fruity Loops. Peace
Jó lett...a kérdéses rész is jól szól...szép telt az egész...asszem azok a Centrist loopok viszik az egészet...azok a pad szerű valamik...a basszusok brutál, genyó jók...azért hallani hogy foglalkozol az eqkkal...most hogy már tudom...:-)
még ebbe is benyomtál egy szaros loopomat? ember, te elképesztő vagy...trazp nótában egy loopom...sosem gondoltam volna...
na további szép nyarat baszki...:-(
Igen, tulajdonképpen arra épül az egész... eredetileg a szintiket meg az ilyesmiket nem terveztem bele, tulajdonképpen az egész háttérhangzás lett volna egy brutálzúzósan rezonáló dubstep alá, csak éppen nem találtam olyan loopokat ami ment volna alá szolid 128 bpm alatt. Így került képbe végül a zúzós basszus (ami egyébként valójában 2-3 együtt :D)
Hey man. Just heard your piece. Great work.
Personally i think it's a bit messy, with too many layers on it. Clean it up a bit, find a smooth line between your transitions and get some consistency - that would work wonders!
Think of it like a story you want to tell. You can't interrupt all the time - you need to give people a bit of comfort in knowing the progression.
You got a ton of good stuff in this mix - you just need to find a thin red line.
Despite that, i like your universe. As M2G said above, it's nature and peace. Exploit that! :-)
Thank you! :)
However, i think this is one of my most clear-out tracks ever... My style and ability simply won't fit for sophisticated tracks.
Chaotic, noisy and dissonant sounding and flappy transitions (especially the later) are lot more proper features for my universe. Actually, i find this one blissfully (pure luck, really :D) beautiful, but somehow boring to me too. :)
Wow, this is an ambitious song. My guitar parts sound a bit out of key though a bit flat.lol There are some very cool parts to this song, I really was digging the part about 55 sec where the strings come in, I replayed that part a dozen times.
There is a lot going on here and you seem to have been given some input. I recommend simplifying the song and just picking the best parts out and focusing on those parts. I have to hand it to you though, you used a lot of people's loops, pretty creative on that level alone.
Thanks, Wayne! Yeah, i see your point. Your guitar loop are really out of the tune a bit in this track, and that part are a bit "flat" or "rough" compared with the rest, this is because i find it interesting to leave that part a bit simple, made for a contrast against the more complex other parts.
I think i will make a shortened and "harmonized", less chaotic version of this somewhere the mid-range future, when it's already "out of my ears", but that will be another song i think (like an nitro and outro version for something).
Somethings were just never meant to go together...
Like trying to fit a round peg into a square hole, you can
try to do it all you want but it will still be wrong...
In this case sounding wrong, I use to play a tune with My Friend
George and the Parliament Funkadelic, it was called "If it don't
fit don't force it" a lot of stuff sounds forced here...
Never the less it's a Mammoth project you've taken on here, hope
to hear it again when it's completed...
Thanks for sharing your opinion!
I did not think as a mammoth project for this one, but im happy, because i especially like those tracks where i get contrary opinions (however, i'm always just hope that the positive comments are honest, and not just an gentle "a bit lame song, but why make him sad?" :D).
I think this means that the track is really "craggy", someone can hate or love it too because its features, can generate feelings - which means a lot to me.
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Ez nagyon tetszetős lett...2.43-ig gyönyörű...:-) utána a hangulat váltást még szoknom kell, kicsit idegen az akkord menetből való kilépés de a szaxi elviszi...
szenzációs a belassulás a végén...elég eredeti ötlet...nem sokat hallottam itt ilyet...
Szó mi szó, most letöltöm, hallgatom hogy megszokjam a kérdéses részt...
Üdvözöllek, Danke
Köszi... Sajnos nem igen sikerült összehoznom a váltást, pedig próbálkoztam nagyon. :S Egyszerűen nem találtam megfelelő hangulatú loopokat hozzá, az pedig nyilvánvaló volt hogy egyetlen dallam - legyen akármilyen szép is - akárhogyan is díszítem mint a karácsonyfát, nem visz el egy számot anélkül hogy unalmassá ne válna... A vicces hogy akármivel próbálkoztam, csak szarabb lett, így hát végül addig hallgattam az elmúlt hetekben hogy végül meggyőztem magam hogy "jó ez így is" és maradt ez. :D
Egyébként eredetileg még úgy a 2. perc környékén is benne volt majdnem ugyanez a váltás, de ott valahogy még jobban elütött ezért kivágtam onnan és kicsit átszerveztem. Sajnos összességében nem sikerült túl jól ez a szám, pedig tényleg szépek ezek a gitárhangok, több volt benne.
A vége meg tudod, mondhatni a védjegyem, már többször alkalmaztam ezt. :)
üdv, traz
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I remember listening to one of your tracks few months ago and it also must have been a loop merger for sure haha! Really nice combination here.
I like Slap's solo at 1:55, it is nicely placed. 2:43 point is interesting. There are some other sudden mood changes on the last section of the track, but overall it is very gentle and coherent composition. I like that the main theme returns finally, slowing it down at the very end was really a fine concept. Very effective.
I enjoyed listening to this one. Good work with the loops!
Best, Alex
Thanks. I use loops only, so any track you will see from me will be like this. :)
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That guitar part is intentionally such as it, like a flick. :)
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Abszolut pozitív nóta Nightingalellel egyetértve mozi zenés érzéssel...minden a helyén, nekem egy kicsit ilyen 'happy-fusion' genre besorolással, és ez jó mert akár lehetne a saját stílusod is...:-)
Martin gitár mintái azonban nem eredeti hangszerből érkező hangok, ezt remélem tudod...csak úgy...nem mintha szarok lennének ezek (mert nyilván nem töltenék le több ezren) csak én a Tumblewwed, Nightingale, Shortbusmusic, EpicRecord vonalat jobban csípem...
Congrats and handshake, Danke
Őszintén szólva nem tudtam - nekem nagyon igazi hangzásúnak tűntek -, de számomra ez semmit nem számít - ha valaki egy tölcsért dugna a seggébe és úgy fingana ilyen loopokat, akkor is ugyanúgy felhasználnám. :)
Én igazából minden vonalat csípek, most egyszerűen így esett hogy az ő loopjai voltak ahol "kinyílott" a könyvtáram és találtam olyat ami megfogott (tulajdonképpen az ő loopjaira épült az egész).
Általában jobban szeretem a kaotikus dolgokat, de ez most ilyen kis letisztult lett, akár minimalistának is nevezhetném ha nem volna tulajdonképpen egész komplex. :)
A kategorizálással meg mindig bajban vagyok... A fusion ez esetben nagyon megtévesztő lett volna szerintem, a chillen gondolkodtam, de a hangzás miatt úgy gondoltam hogy még mindig az aku áll hozzá a legközelebb.
üdv, és a gratula mellett sok szerencsét otthon (is)! :)
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Keeps a very light atmosphere and fits together well.
Good job!
The fact, i'm totally lame for any composing work... So instead to made huge efforts to make some very horrible "own" music, i'm work with loops only - this is a fight too to make something that really my own and not only loops together from a few people... Just can hope to improve with the times at least in this. :)
regards, traz
on The Horse the Hat and the Bunny by traz75
And you can count to use your loops on the future too - i like them, and think your loops are a bit underrated from utilization point of view... At least i find your loop's download rates surprisingly low against their quality. :)
ragards, traz
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Neat track you got here. There are some nice changes with a variety of instruments that I really like taking center stage. Matter of fact after a few listens I have decided to fav and dl this one so thanks for sharing!
Well done!
Wayne
Actually, i have downloaded some 20K+ loops from looperman. Yes, it take a while to download in the past 1.5 years+, but worth the efforts i think. Its a huge base to look thorough when have to choose loops for a track, but sometimes i find it desperately small too when can't find those what i wants...
Actually, this one were smooth work, the base construct is made by a few (2-3) hours only which is very fast from so many loops i think. The refine process were longer, and the really hard work were the EQ optimising. Just because im dumb for that, plus this time i wants to maxed it with my best. Worked on it about 10-15 hours i think... I know its laughable knowing the result (i bet a competent musician do those mostly basic changes by a hour), but i cant do any more with that - and im really happy with the outcome. :)
regards, traz
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Majd otthon +1x...:-)
yo...
Üdv:Danke
üdv, traz
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Good work, I enjoyed the tune....
Simon
Thank you!
You will find it, its under the long flute solo from around 1:10. As faint noise, but still there. :)
regards, traz
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This is by far I think your best work mate.
Very well done
Jamid
Lol, i think and honestly hope that you are not right, but thanks! :)
regards, traz
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Mate liking what I am hearing here, this has so much potential for sure, standout is the pads, nice pads, notice in review before mine, saying it has to much going on, personally don't really agree, listening with headset on, only thing I would say maybe separate some elements, as pad does seem to be little on sided, very cinematic type of track, prob reckon Cinematic would suit this more so then the trap genre, first piece listened too here for a little while, have to say really enjoy listening to this one, lots of feelings and emotions coming from the work...great work matey...fav...Peace n Respect... Mosaic...
Thank you, moved to cin. :)
I were not sure in this one, its far away from my style, i feel it as a bit outlandish and neutral to me... Just a try. :)
I find the pads are a bit too loud here and there.
regards, traz
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regards, traz
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Jó lett...a kérdéses rész is jól szól...szép telt az egész...asszem azok a Centrist loopok viszik az egészet...azok a pad szerű valamik...a basszusok brutál, genyó jók...azért hallani hogy foglalkozol az eqkkal...most hogy már tudom...:-)
még ebbe is benyomtál egy szaros loopomat? ember, te elképesztő vagy...trazp nótában egy loopom...sosem gondoltam volna...
na további szép nyarat baszki...:-(
Danke
Igen, tulajdonképpen arra épül az egész... eredetileg a szintiket meg az ilyesmiket nem terveztem bele, tulajdonképpen az egész háttérhangzás lett volna egy brutálzúzósan rezonáló dubstep alá, csak éppen nem találtam olyan loopokat ami ment volna alá szolid 128 bpm alatt. Így került képbe végül a zúzós basszus (ami egyébként valójában 2-3 együtt :D)
Üdv, izzadok és takarítok... egész héten. :-(
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Personally i think it's a bit messy, with too many layers on it. Clean it up a bit, find a smooth line between your transitions and get some consistency - that would work wonders!
Think of it like a story you want to tell. You can't interrupt all the time - you need to give people a bit of comfort in knowing the progression.
You got a ton of good stuff in this mix - you just need to find a thin red line.
Despite that, i like your universe. As M2G said above, it's nature and peace. Exploit that! :-)
Take care man!
Thank you! :)
However, i think this is one of my most clear-out tracks ever... My style and ability simply won't fit for sophisticated tracks.
Chaotic, noisy and dissonant sounding and flappy transitions (especially the later) are lot more proper features for my universe. Actually, i find this one blissfully (pure luck, really :D) beautiful, but somehow boring to me too. :)
Regards, traz
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Cheers,
Scott
on DuRaRaRum by traz75
There is a lot going on here and you seem to have been given some input. I recommend simplifying the song and just picking the best parts out and focusing on those parts. I have to hand it to you though, you used a lot of people's loops, pretty creative on that level alone.
Wayne
I think i will make a shortened and "harmonized", less chaotic version of this somewhere the mid-range future, when it's already "out of my ears", but that will be another song i think (like an nitro and outro version for something).
Regards, traz
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Like trying to fit a round peg into a square hole, you can
try to do it all you want but it will still be wrong...
In this case sounding wrong, I use to play a tune with My Friend
George and the Parliament Funkadelic, it was called "If it don't
fit don't force it" a lot of stuff sounds forced here...
Never the less it's a Mammoth project you've taken on here, hope
to hear it again when it's completed...
Peace...TG.
Thanks for sharing your opinion!
I did not think as a mammoth project for this one, but im happy, because i especially like those tracks where i get contrary opinions (however, i'm always just hope that the positive comments are honest, and not just an gentle "a bit lame song, but why make him sad?" :D).
I think this means that the track is really "craggy", someone can hate or love it too because its features, can generate feelings - which means a lot to me.
regards, traz
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This is a very good track with a hint of jazzy feel.
Very good
Well done.
Jamid