Stunning intro. Leon this is such a beautiful piece of work. 3:08 kicks in some power, but you pull it back. nice use of power and restraint, adds emotional value. Well done, you are one of the best composers on this site and I enjoy listening to your Work.
Ciao
Steven
Hey Steve my friend...always a pleasure to hear from you ! AS you probably noticed I'm not much around here lately, but I'm still kicking..:) Thank you so much for this generous feedback...means alot !
This comment is probably going to take at a minimum, 4 listen-throughs.
I've listened to many of your songs. All of which I absolutely love. They all have so much depth and feeling. They always capture the beauty of life. Even in the more melancholic ones. But this one, my friend, in this one you go to a place that I haven't heard from you, but I always knew was there. However, you do it with absolute authority.
The piano in the opening is by far the most important moment of this song. They tell the entire story, in just those 7 chords. Everything before, and after that is just an explanation.
This is a very introspective piece, but it's also a perfect social commentary on the world today. Especially from the perspective of those of us who were here before the massive influx of technology. The beginning being a distorted memory of a peaceful, natural world. Those pivotal piano chords being the moment when you realize that all of that is gone. Overshadowed by what's to come. It could be health, age, or what I'm guessing it to be, the technological machine that has brought a darkness over us all.
But you know, even in the midst of the darkness, and the aggression of the lower guitars, and the chugs, (which I absolutely love!) There's still a level of determination and refusal to be consumed.
Dystopian.
That's how I would describe this track. I know you said that you used "Industrial" more out of necessity than reality, but I would certainly go with Dystopian.
Up until the drums come in, it's like standing in one point just taking in the surroundings. Looking at everything and how it's become a charred shadow of it's former self. Whether that's literal, or symbolic. But when the drums start, it brings a new level of determination and an acceptance of the fact that you need to just carry on regardless. The clean guitars, and the piano that's sprinkled in throughout this part accompanied by the guitars harmonics deliver a feeling of peacefulness that says you will still find the beauty even in an ugly world, and you will not be broken.
Leon, this one is by far my favorite of yours, and not just because it's a darker theme. I mean, that helps, but this one seems to tell a much more poignant story. It has a level of vulnerability that your other work doesn't have. I would even go as far to bet that you felt you were in a moment of weakness when you wrote this one. But let me assure you, this is your strongest piece yet, and it reflects your own personal strength and drive.
As an artist and a person, I have tremendous respect for you, so hopefully, I didn't cross any lines in my assumptions on a personal level.
Oh, it was a grand total of 8 listen-throughs.
Leon, as always, take care my friend.
Aaron.
Wow wow wow Aaron...I really don't remember if I ever received such a comprehensive feedback !I had kind of a sixth sense that you might be interested in checking this one, so I shared the link, but frankly I didn't expect so overwhelmingly positive and enthusiastic response.This really means alot to me so I can only say big thank you my friend for this generous review !:)
Leon! Hello my friend! Damn. I knew I dropped by The Loop today for a reason. It's been quite awhile. I hope all is well with you and yours.
The intro in this has no specific realm. Meaning, it leaves it open to go in any direction. My imagination was already starting to go one way, and then you came in from a completely different direction with the beautiful guitar arpeggios, accompanied by the spacious piano.
When the strings come in they sound as if they're Celtic strings that have been kissed by the middle east.
A nice simple drum beat. But that's what it needs to be. Any more and they would overstep their boundaries. The other percussive elements fill in the spaces perfectly.
Leon, I have always been a fan of your layering and overlapping transitions. You do not disappoint here.
But, then again, you never do.
Beautiful work as always, sir. Once again, I find myself wishing I could tap into the peaceful part of myself and create something that isn't so...aggressive.
Until next time, my friend, as always...Take care.
Aaron.
Hey Aaron my friend...so nice to meet you again...it's been awhile. I'm not much around here in recent times for a number of reasons, but I still jump in from time to time.
Thank you so kindly for your positive feedback which as always means alot...but wait...my previous upload could be much closer to your musical preferences...and in case you would like to check it out, here it is: https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/227964#1223585
Hey Leon! Hope things are going well for you and yours.
Beautiful track, acoustic guitar and piano make such a nice sound together. Then add some strings and a few sound effects, pads and such and the song blossoms into an expansive soundscape for the ears to swallow up, digest and enjoy!
Hey Wayne...how's going? In terms of these weird times things are going relatively (and surprisingly) well over here...catching some more composing time lately..:))
Thank you so much for your supportive feedback and a 'fav'...always a pleasure !
absolutely your style ... recognizable from afar ... and it's good ... art at the highest level ... I'm glad it's only a few hundred kilometers away from you ... :-)
thanx for the upload, dl, fav and hail instantly ...
handshake, Danke
Hi my dear neighbour...always a pleasure to hear from you !
I'm really glad you approve my new stuff which is ofcouese in very classic orlandesque style. As much as I like to try different things sometimes (previous track for example) there is also a nice feeling of coming back to my more obvious self...:)) Thank you so much for your positive thoughts and a 'fav' ! Also accept my apologize for late reply...:)
Stunning my friend, what a warm empathetic soundtrack, the keys are beautiful, the accoustic guitar adds the gentle touch, the strings heighten the feeling, the drum beat adds an urgency in the second phase, really good listen and fav
You've come along way on these songs [loops]. This was magnificent and filled with empathy and pain, in living colors. Way to go 'Man' Keep em' comin' Orlando51 Peace and good health DDC
Sound is amazing - every instrument is crisp and crystal clear. The guitar arpeggio is dominant but somehow reminds me of a harpsichord (or maybe that is in there too)and the violin (?) is beautiful. Quite forlorn and very atmospheric. Chill out chamber music : )
What a cool trip I went on as I listened. I loved all the effects/sounds you created and the atmosphere becomes dark and menacing. Seems like you have stepped slightly away from your expansive, beautiful creations you usually post. It's an interesting track, progresses nicely, cool dynamics. It starts off rather peaceful though, a little mother nature then some nice piano chords then it goes slightly awry. ;)
Yeah Wayne...I think it's healthy to step out of the usual
sometimes, and so I did...and I'm surely glad that you approve it...thank you most kindly my friend !:)
Yes, Pete my friend...it's you ! So sorry for not recognizing you sooner but later on I checked some of your tracks and instantly recognized your incredible vocals. So nice we meet again and I hope I will be more around here in the future...
Oh Leon, it's so good to hear from you. You are missed my friend. Incredible piece , I would love to hear it with vocals, I bet it would sound incredible. As always, stellar production. glad to see you back my friend, can't waut to hear more of your music. Until next time my friend.
First of all many thanks for this positive feedback and kind words...but, oh my...I don't know exactly who you are,
because I don't remember you by that nickname (so sorry), but I would like to know...:))
Wow Wow Wow - this is so smooth and beautiful - this the 3rd track of yours Ive heard and Im going to slowly work my way through your catalogue - really nice - thanks
Nice track - somehow I missed this - some of those transitions as not quite as smooth as others but at least (unlike some of my own efforts) there are transitions and I think you have a really nice production/ sound
Many thanks for listening and comment...ah, those damn transitions...tell you what...they're mostly deliberately made that way (non-smooth) to better fit the subject matter of the track...:)
Greetings Orlando, If this genre is industrial i would say no. Still it has some elements in it though. But this sounds a bit rocky and more metal like than idustrial. Still it was a interesting piece to listen to. It sure has a lot of different elements and nuances in it. But it seems all to fit in this song. So it was definately something different than your other works i heard before. But still a job well done. Have a good one, Verdi
Thanks for stopping by mate ! Well, I think I already told in the description that it's not really industrial, only some ingredients, as it's not heavy metal in the same way, but I had to pick a genre (unfortunately Looperman doesn't provide a 'custom genre') and I think I picked it more on the basis of the title than the actual music...anyways thanks alot for your honest feedback !
Like an awesome film score. Awesome transitions and a fantastic mix. 1:34 we change it up in tone and key.
The build-up is fantastic. It reminds me a little bit of Suduaya. great job Leaon.
incredible work Leon ... prog/rock, if I could define it ... kinda movie soundtrack ... transformers or so :-)
in any case it doesn't sound like an ordinary sound of yours ... after a lot of chill it's a big refreshment ... :-)
more please ...
ValveDriver will love it, if he pays your respects here more often and catch this masterpiece ...
in the meantime, let's listen a lot ...
You might be damn right my friend...I surely share your opinion that this doesn't sound like usual Orlando stuff. From time to time I really feel a need for something different It's not always easy to do it, because nobody can
get rid completely of oneself, but sometimes could be a success...I'm really glad you're supportive of this one...thank you so much !:)
on The Birdlands Edge by Orlando51
Ciao
Steven
With much appreciation_____Leon
on March Of The Machines by Orlando51
This comment is probably going to take at a minimum, 4 listen-throughs.
I've listened to many of your songs. All of which I absolutely love. They all have so much depth and feeling. They always capture the beauty of life. Even in the more melancholic ones. But this one, my friend, in this one you go to a place that I haven't heard from you, but I always knew was there. However, you do it with absolute authority.
The piano in the opening is by far the most important moment of this song. They tell the entire story, in just those 7 chords. Everything before, and after that is just an explanation.
This is a very introspective piece, but it's also a perfect social commentary on the world today. Especially from the perspective of those of us who were here before the massive influx of technology. The beginning being a distorted memory of a peaceful, natural world. Those pivotal piano chords being the moment when you realize that all of that is gone. Overshadowed by what's to come. It could be health, age, or what I'm guessing it to be, the technological machine that has brought a darkness over us all.
But you know, even in the midst of the darkness, and the aggression of the lower guitars, and the chugs, (which I absolutely love!) There's still a level of determination and refusal to be consumed.
Dystopian.
That's how I would describe this track. I know you said that you used "Industrial" more out of necessity than reality, but I would certainly go with Dystopian.
Up until the drums come in, it's like standing in one point just taking in the surroundings. Looking at everything and how it's become a charred shadow of it's former self. Whether that's literal, or symbolic. But when the drums start, it brings a new level of determination and an acceptance of the fact that you need to just carry on regardless. The clean guitars, and the piano that's sprinkled in throughout this part accompanied by the guitars harmonics deliver a feeling of peacefulness that says you will still find the beauty even in an ugly world, and you will not be broken.
Leon, this one is by far my favorite of yours, and not just because it's a darker theme. I mean, that helps, but this one seems to tell a much more poignant story. It has a level of vulnerability that your other work doesn't have. I would even go as far to bet that you felt you were in a moment of weakness when you wrote this one. But let me assure you, this is your strongest piece yet, and it reflects your own personal strength and drive.
As an artist and a person, I have tremendous respect for you, so hopefully, I didn't cross any lines in my assumptions on a personal level.
Oh, it was a grand total of 8 listen-throughs.
Leon, as always, take care my friend.
Aaron.
With maximum appreciation_____Leon
on The Birdlands Edge by Orlando51
The intro in this has no specific realm. Meaning, it leaves it open to go in any direction. My imagination was already starting to go one way, and then you came in from a completely different direction with the beautiful guitar arpeggios, accompanied by the spacious piano.
When the strings come in they sound as if they're Celtic strings that have been kissed by the middle east.
A nice simple drum beat. But that's what it needs to be. Any more and they would overstep their boundaries. The other percussive elements fill in the spaces perfectly.
Leon, I have always been a fan of your layering and overlapping transitions. You do not disappoint here.
But, then again, you never do.
Beautiful work as always, sir. Once again, I find myself wishing I could tap into the peaceful part of myself and create something that isn't so...aggressive.
Until next time, my friend, as always...Take care.
Aaron.
Thank you so kindly for your positive feedback which as always means alot...but wait...my previous upload could be much closer to your musical preferences...and in case you would like to check it out, here it is: https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/227964#1223585
Cheers my friend...stay safe.
Leon
on The Birdlands Edge by Orlando51
Beautiful track, acoustic guitar and piano make such a nice sound together. Then add some strings and a few sound effects, pads and such and the song blossoms into an expansive soundscape for the ears to swallow up, digest and enjoy!
Great mix as usual. Take care!
Wayne
Thank you so much for your supportive feedback and a 'fav'...always a pleasure !
With much appreciation____Leon
on The Birdlands Edge by Orlando51
absolutely your style ... recognizable from afar ... and it's good ... art at the highest level ... I'm glad it's only a few hundred kilometers away from you ... :-)
thanx for the upload, dl, fav and hail instantly ...
handshake, Danke
I'm really glad you approve my new stuff which is ofcouese in very classic orlandesque style. As much as I like to try different things sometimes (previous track for example) there is also a nice feeling of coming back to my more obvious self...:)) Thank you so much for your positive thoughts and a 'fav' ! Also accept my apologize for late reply...:)
With much appreciation______Leon
on The Birdlands Edge by Orlando51
Leon
on The Birdlands Edge by Orlando51
Wow, just beautiful my friend.
This is a walk in the park for you mate.
Well done.
Maj
With much appreciation____Orrie
on The Birdlands Edge by Orlando51
With much appreciation____Leon
on The Birdlands Edge by Orlando51
With appreciation____Leon
on The Birdlands Edge by Orlando51
Leon
on March Of The Machines by Orlando51
Leon
on Exodus by Orlando51
on March Of The Machines by Orlando51
Take care Leon!
Wayne
sometimes, and so I did...and I'm surely glad that you approve it...thank you most kindly my friend !:)
With much appreciation____Leon
on March Of The Machines by Orlando51
on March Of The Machines by Orlando51
All the best____Leon
on March Of The Machines by Orlando51
Regards,
Cara de Sol
because I don't remember you by that nickname (so sorry), but I would like to know...:))
With much appreciation____Leon
on At The Pond by Orlando51
All the best____Leon
on Mirjam Is Really Something by Orlando51
on March Of The Machines by Orlando51
With appreciation_____Leon
on March Of The Machines by Orlando51
With appreciation_____Leon
on March Of The Machines by Orlando51
With appreciation____Leon
on March Of The Machines by Orlando51
The build-up is fantastic. It reminds me a little bit of Suduaya. great job Leaon.
With much appreciation____Leon
on March Of The Machines by Orlando51
All the best____Leon
on March Of The Machines by Orlando51
in any case it doesn't sound like an ordinary sound of yours ... after a lot of chill it's a big refreshment ... :-)
more please ...
ValveDriver will love it, if he pays your respects here more often and catch this masterpiece ...
in the meantime, let's listen a lot ...
fistbump my friend, Danke
get rid completely of oneself, but sometimes could be a success...I'm really glad you're supportive of this one...thank you so much !:)
With much appreciation_____Leon
on March Of The Machines by Orlando51
With much appreciation___Leon