Well it's started off well and i like the riffs so far (i'm reviewing as i listen to see if i can figure out what the others are talking about)
I think this is a good headbanging piece of metal, nice work with the drums, good choice of riffs.
Well i made it all the way to the end of the track and i actually didn't notice any riffs that don't work with each other. I thought it was a bit muddy in places but that just gives it a nice live feel.
I enjoyed listening to your track.
FR
thank you much much FR :)
this is good if you think it works .
he doesn't talk about riffs , but i don't care what the others want to show about themselves.
this is very good to have your review .
thank you much much for dropping these words.
Elena :)
Hi again. I've tried to explain as clearly as I can that, at the time references I gave, there are very clear "wrong" sounds that would be normally be described in English as "clicks" or "pops". I think everyone who works with cutting up audio parts has to deal with these unwanted sounds. These can be removed very easily in probably all modern DAWs. As I said - I do it all the time. Not removing these noises means I can hear every time that you have joined one piece of audio to another so the listening experience is not as smooth as it should be.
I'm not sure I can explain any more simply what these small sounds are so maybe you're having trouble understanding my English. As I said before, search for something like 'crossfade audio' in the Help section or manual of the software you are using. I'm not sure what your first language is but if you can translate 'crossfade audio' into your language and then read what that means, I think you'll understand what the problem is. And how simple it is to fix.
"i'll underestand if you download it and correct it"
Sorry - I don't really want to but I don't mind writing out some things to help you (or anyone else). And this 'crossfading audio' technique is easy to learn about and easy to do.
Good luck...
Oh, and I still think is a good track and I still like the riffs.
okay so what are you looking for from writing comments to me if you're not going to help ?
do you just need to show you know somethings about music?
you're so nervous and pridefull.
i don't need your comments.
Cool track and great use of loops. It's well put together and has a dark heavy metal feel to it. A bit cinematic as I could hear this in a film sequence. The drums are powerful and effective. Well done!
Hi Wayne :)
thank you much much for the words .
i don't know much about differences of metal and rock
i thought this is rock because metal is faster and wilder toward this for me .
but as i see some people like you have called this Metal.
so i'm going to change the genre and put it in metal ....
thank you much much again.
Elena :)
Hi. You didn't tell me which software you're using but it should be quite easy to crossfade two bits of audio in any audio sequencer, also called a DAW. I just use Cubase and only have to select the two pieces of audio on the timeline and then press one button. And then the problem is removed.
If you have an audio waveform and then cut it off immediately, you will get an annoying 'pop' or 'click'. In your track, that is what is happening and it means that I can hear where you have put one riff next to another. The crossfade will just make the transition between the two pieces of audio smoother. So, it will very quickly fade out the volume of the first one and then fade in the volume of the second.
As I said before, I have to do this all the time as my compositional style means I'm always cutting up little pieces of audio and moving them around the timeline.
Search for something like 'crossfade audio' in the Help section or manual of the software you are using.
You track will sound much better if I can no longer hear the edit between the different riffs.
Otherwise, I do like the track so hope you can work out this crossfading technique as it is very useful.
Hello Staticnomad again :)
i use FLStudio , sony acid pro , audicity , adobe audition3 .
but to be honest i still don't reallize what you're saying !
what is wrong with me or my music in those seconds ?
but i'll underestand if you download it and correct it and let me hear that version if you can .
i don't want to make you in trouble for that , but i'll really appreciate if you can do that for me .
i will write my email for contact if you reply that you can.
thank you much much .
Elena :)
:) hey Behnam what a great look !:)
i like your new avatar !
thank you much much for checking my stuff out .
when you say this is good i know this is good .
Elena :)
Hi. I really like some of this track. The riffs, the drum beats, the kick drum and more.
It's a shame that you, like quite a few other people on the site, don't say in the track description what you're doing here. So then I have to ask before I can make a judgment. Are you playing any guitar here? Are you programming the drums? Are you using drum loops? Are you playing the bass?
One thing which you should be able to do really easily to improve things is learn to crossfade between your different sections of audio so that you remove the awkward click and pop sound that shows where you have put two pieces of audio next to each other.
Here are some times when I can hear those clicks and pops:
0:03, 0:06, 0:09, 0:28 and many more in the second half without the drums.
Ask if you're not sure what crossfading two pieces of audio means. I have to do this all the time in my music (like hundreds of times just in one track).
Hello staticNomad :)
thank you much much for the advice !
yes you should probably be right ! but can you please tell me how should i correct this secconds?
i mean what program or software and how ?
i appreciate you dropping this words .
Elena :)
I enjoyed this Elena, very creative use of a whole bunch of different loops. It sounds like a lot of the jams we used to do late at night after we completed a show :) I definitely am impressed with the way you wove everything together. Added to favorites for sure. I hope all is well.
Hello Bear :)
this is nice to know you've liked it.
i've always tried so hard to make unique pieces
and your loops are awesome for me.
i appreciate your kind words and favorite sign.
Elena :)
Hi Tune D :)
thank you much much for the kind words.
but I wonder to read you've thought tempo changes in this !
tempo is fixed in 150bmp.
anyway i really appreciate your review.
Elena :)
Hello Cyber :)
thank you much much for listening me.
about arrangement i don't underestand what you mean but you're wellcome to help me make it better .
Elena :)
I am way late in catching up with this one Elena...but glad I finally did...this is good rocking stuff...reminds me just a little of a group I used to listen to a long time ago (Steppenwolf) who did many of my fav rock songs...good straignt forward arrangement..those little drops/breaks work well...You should finish this one...some banging drums would be great and maybe a couple of short screaming lead parts...well done ladyinred......Ed
:) Ed I'm proud of your kind words .
about drum i wish someone can help me ...
i'm not really good abiut beats ...
and regarding screaming lead i wished someone like Behnam or you was kind enough to do that !
cause i can't play lead guitar.
Ed thank you much much for the words.
i appreciate your time and comment .
:) Elena
hello. at the beginning of your track the mix of your loops is not so cunning and that is "heardable"(while playing the song with my headphone). in the right ear the sound is too loud, in my opinion. 0.22 second is disturbing. the second bridge is very beautiful.
Hello
you might be right !
generally i don't know and don't care about mix and mastering too much !
currently my focus is on my composing skill and
electric guitar playing , but i should learn mix later ..
i respect and appreciate your comment .
:)
thank you much much for listening and for you dropped
these words in my box .
Elena our tallented mentalitY & musical skill has improved & this is sensible buT this is 4th track of yours I remember in A & E & tempo about 140bmp ...
best wishes..__B
yes Behnam you are absolutely right !
it's wonderfull how you recognize scales!
good point and worth considering .
i shuould try on the other scales and tempo too .
i appreciate you much much Behnam .
very usefull comment as usual of yours.
take care my friend. :)
Elena
It's an expression that gets over used in my opinion, but this really does ROCK!!!
It's heavy, grungy and a little bit folky at the same time.
You say you want a beat added to it. Why not just go to the loop section and look for some drum loops? There's literally hundreds of them.
Failing that i guess i could have a go but it sounds like a pretty challenging piece and it could take a while.
Great work here, i'm pleased i listened to this.
FR
i know how should i find drum loops but i haven't
used drum because i know nothing about drum and my beats
never satisfies me ..
you're wellcome to gonna do something about drum
i appreciate your kind words and time to comment.
thank you much much.
:)
First of all I'm not a Rock guy, although I love all music when it's good...believe me this is really good. It made me feel as though I was at an open air Rock concert, that takes talent, which you truly have...I checked out your page and found it to be a lil cocky, or maybe just a lot of confidence..either way you are difinitely someone to watch in my book.... Looper Fam 4 ever
Like the energy - the drop starting at about 1:09 could be longer - it has interesting riffs. Like the balls to the wall aspect of this one - could be sick with a collab.
-clindsay
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I think this is a good headbanging piece of metal, nice work with the drums, good choice of riffs.
Well i made it all the way to the end of the track and i actually didn't notice any riffs that don't work with each other. I thought it was a bit muddy in places but that just gives it a nice live feel.
I enjoyed listening to your track.
FR
this is good if you think it works .
he doesn't talk about riffs , but i don't care what the others want to show about themselves.
this is very good to have your review .
thank you much much for dropping these words.
Elena :)
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I'm not sure I can explain any more simply what these small sounds are so maybe you're having trouble understanding my English. As I said before, search for something like 'crossfade audio' in the Help section or manual of the software you are using. I'm not sure what your first language is but if you can translate 'crossfade audio' into your language and then read what that means, I think you'll understand what the problem is. And how simple it is to fix.
"i'll underestand if you download it and correct it"
Sorry - I don't really want to but I don't mind writing out some things to help you (or anyone else). And this 'crossfading audio' technique is easy to learn about and easy to do.
Good luck...
Oh, and I still think is a good track and I still like the riffs.
do you just need to show you know somethings about music?
you're so nervous and pridefull.
i don't need your comments.
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Wayne
thank you much much for the words .
i don't know much about differences of metal and rock
i thought this is rock because metal is faster and wilder toward this for me .
but as i see some people like you have called this Metal.
so i'm going to change the genre and put it in metal ....
thank you much much again.
Elena :)
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If you have an audio waveform and then cut it off immediately, you will get an annoying 'pop' or 'click'. In your track, that is what is happening and it means that I can hear where you have put one riff next to another. The crossfade will just make the transition between the two pieces of audio smoother. So, it will very quickly fade out the volume of the first one and then fade in the volume of the second.
As I said before, I have to do this all the time as my compositional style means I'm always cutting up little pieces of audio and moving them around the timeline.
Search for something like 'crossfade audio' in the Help section or manual of the software you are using.
You track will sound much better if I can no longer hear the edit between the different riffs.
Otherwise, I do like the track so hope you can work out this crossfading technique as it is very useful.
i use FLStudio , sony acid pro , audicity , adobe audition3 .
but to be honest i still don't reallize what you're saying !
what is wrong with me or my music in those seconds ?
but i'll underestand if you download it and correct it and let me hear that version if you can .
i don't want to make you in trouble for that , but i'll really appreciate if you can do that for me .
i will write my email for contact if you reply that you can.
thank you much much .
Elena :)
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Stunning drums.
Good work.
Paulo
this is nice to have your comment too here !
thank you much much for dropping kind words.
Elena :)
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i like your new avatar !
thank you much much for checking my stuff out .
when you say this is good i know this is good .
Elena :)
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It's a shame that you, like quite a few other people on the site, don't say in the track description what you're doing here. So then I have to ask before I can make a judgment. Are you playing any guitar here? Are you programming the drums? Are you using drum loops? Are you playing the bass?
One thing which you should be able to do really easily to improve things is learn to crossfade between your different sections of audio so that you remove the awkward click and pop sound that shows where you have put two pieces of audio next to each other.
Here are some times when I can hear those clicks and pops:
0:03, 0:06, 0:09, 0:28 and many more in the second half without the drums.
Ask if you're not sure what crossfading two pieces of audio means. I have to do this all the time in my music (like hundreds of times just in one track).
thank you much much for the advice !
yes you should probably be right ! but can you please tell me how should i correct this secconds?
i mean what program or software and how ?
i appreciate you dropping this words .
Elena :)
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Steve
thank you much much for the comment.
Elena :)
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tv
i appreciate .
Elena :)
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Bear
this is nice to know you've liked it.
i've always tried so hard to make unique pieces
and your loops are awesome for me.
i appreciate your kind words and favorite sign.
Elena :)
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I dig it!
Tune D
thank you much much for the kind words.
but I wonder to read you've thought tempo changes in this !
tempo is fixed in 150bmp.
anyway i really appreciate your review.
Elena :)
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I enjoyed this and it's rock for sure.!
The main thing is to enjoy what you try to create,and dont worry too much if it's not to everyones tastes.!
I
thank you much much for the kind words.
i'm happy you've enjoyed this.
Elena :)
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Handshake_Cyber
thank you much much for listening me.
about arrangement i don't underestand what you mean but you're wellcome to help me make it better .
Elena :)
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about drum i wish someone can help me ...
i'm not really good abiut beats ...
and regarding screaming lead i wished someone like Behnam or you was kind enough to do that !
cause i can't play lead guitar.
Ed thank you much much for the words.
i appreciate your time and comment .
:) Elena
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you might be right !
generally i don't know and don't care about mix and mastering too much !
currently my focus is on my composing skill and
electric guitar playing , but i should learn mix later ..
i respect and appreciate your comment .
:)
thank you much much for listening and for you dropped
these words in my box .
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best wishes..__B
it's wonderfull how you recognize scales!
good point and worth considering .
i shuould try on the other scales and tempo too .
i appreciate you much much Behnam .
very usefull comment as usual of yours.
take care my friend. :)
Elena
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It's heavy, grungy and a little bit folky at the same time.
You say you want a beat added to it. Why not just go to the loop section and look for some drum loops? There's literally hundreds of them.
Failing that i guess i could have a go but it sounds like a pretty challenging piece and it could take a while.
Great work here, i'm pleased i listened to this.
FR
used drum because i know nothing about drum and my beats
never satisfies me ..
you're wellcome to gonna do something about drum
i appreciate your kind words and time to comment.
thank you much much.
:)
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thank you thank you thank you !
:)
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Steve
you made my day ! thank you much much for dropping these words in my box.
i really appreciate your time and point of view.
:)
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thank you much much for the feedback.
tempo is 138bmp .
it could be nice to work with you .
Elena
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Tune D
i didn't mean to be cocky .
thank you for the words and checking my page out.
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thank you very much.
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thank you much much for this cute feedback.
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-clindsay
:)
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thank you!