I would probably keep the vocal and beat.
And drop the whole synths, and change them.
They don't seem to work in harmony with each other.
Lots of dubstep loops here at Looperman.
Trial and error them and soon you will have somethings working sweet!
sorry I don't understand you !
I'm sure everything is in harmony with the other things!
I'm not sure if you're right or not !
but I respect your idea too .
:)
Elena
Well if you haven't yet found someone to put beats on this track then let me offer my services! It's great. I like the changing mood of the track and how "wanders" in all kinds of directions. Please contact me through my profile if you would like some help with this track.
heii YEEEEEPP !! :)
Holla Richie :)
thank you much much for accepting my collab request .
i'm going to send you a loopermanian message through your profile .
can't wait to see what you gonna do with it !
:)
Elena
I like the different feel of the parts. the transitions are a little abrupt, but when I listen to it as a collage of samples it's very appealing. Especially the dark sounding guitar riff with delay and the ring-mod bell sound that has stereo delay. Good work. could be tied together with a vocal or a lead instrument imo. Hi-five to all old bass players.
-Slimm
nice blend of those loops.
smooth and sweet .
this is good to see a girl who is a composer here !
i loved that saxiphone very much .
keep up music and i think you'll change to a unique composer as a girl .
:)
yes I've used loops from the bests of the looperman , but for any reason there are some others too from the bests who they usually don't share their loops , and i wished to could use some loops from them too .
thank you much much Orlando .
i am glad you liked it .
:)
Wow, what a pleasing song! The first part was very simple, but also very atmospheric and thought provoking. When the momentum picked up, it just felt so good to listen! The sax is a very nice touch indeed! I really like that slightly jazzy bass part, smooth. I don't think I could do a song like this justice with vocals, especially considering it's better with female vocals probably. I like it the way it is personally. You used those drum loops very well, those parts kind of made me think of something I would write, but with a twist. A high quality pop track! Fave!
Good song has a lot of potential, lead vocal is great- backvocals are about
a semitone out of tune, it just maybe the efx you have on them...
Never the less nice R&B intro and Bridge with Pop verses...Guess you could
call this fusion... :-)
whattt!!? i wonder to read you words about vocal !
you mean vocal sounding Falsen in this ??!!
i think you're wrong , cause nobody hasn't felt like that , except you !
Hello Danke how are you ?:)
thank you much much for dropping this words .
this is th best news to know you have begun to underestand my stuffs .
sorry for late responce i was sick .
thank you again.
Elena :)
Can't help out with the singing as i sound terrible but what i can say is that this is a nice pop arrangment. It's very bubbly and bouncy once you get past the intro. Like the way you carried the piano theme through the track and it's a good mix.
Also dig that saxophone.
Nice track.
FR
Thinking you did exceptionally well with what is shared here. Believed you used those loops in an appealing and special way. Example, from it's beginning it starts a path forward. The same as a thought before an action is in motion. The way you placed it together could give the listener a two step puzzle of finding yourself outside your normal life and a question of "why are you doing that which is known to be what you did not intend.?" Just saying it's easy to get lost in thoughts to this mix. It's not just sounds anymore which I know a lot of people here do a good job at. Thanks for sharing, It's good progress, don't give up. peace.
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another friend of mine will help me about drum line .
but thank you very much for suggestion .
Elena :)
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I'm surprised !
it's a superb rock Elena !
Congrats !
:) Cindy
thank you very much my friend :)
Elena :)
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i can't believe a sweet girl composed this !
wow...just wow !
thank you much much .
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:)
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cheers!
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great track
Go On and keep ROCKING
Samer
sorry for late reply , I've been absent .
thank you again Samer .
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this one is amazing
mixing every instruments was wonderfull
i realty like it
GO ON
Samer
:)
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it's a collab requested track to see whatv the other can do with it !
just tell me if its allrighgt with you !
:)
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I appreciate your comment , means a lot to me .
:)
Elena
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And drop the whole synths, and change them.
They don't seem to work in harmony with each other.
Lots of dubstep loops here at Looperman.
Trial and error them and soon you will have somethings working sweet!
Keep going forward. Blessings! - B
I'm sure everything is in harmony with the other things!
I'm not sure if you're right or not !
but I respect your idea too .
:)
Elena
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thank you for suggestion .
right
Elena :)
on lets forget about my inconvincible father by ElenaSatine
Well if you haven't yet found someone to put beats on this track then let me offer my services! It's great. I like the changing mood of the track and how "wanders" in all kinds of directions. Please contact me through my profile if you would like some help with this track.
Richie
Holla Richie :)
thank you much much for accepting my collab request .
i'm going to send you a loopermanian message through your profile .
can't wait to see what you gonna do with it !
:)
Elena
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-Slimm
please forgive me about such a late reply .
I have been absent .
thanks and sorry again .
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smooth and sweet .
this is good to see a girl who is a composer here !
i loved that saxiphone very much .
keep up music and i think you'll change to a unique composer as a girl .
:)
glad to meet you here.
kisses.
Elena :)
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Great job..
thank you much much .
:)
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Keep up the good work!
-RealProblemShuckers
thank you much muh for dropping these words in my box .
:)
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Orlando
thank you much much Orlando .
i am glad you liked it .
:)
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voices are loops uploaded here by FerryTerry .
i like your avatar !so sweet :)
thank you much much for dropping these words in my box .
:)
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sorry for late reply I was sick .
thank you much much for dropping these words .
you made my day Spiv !
Elena :)
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a semitone out of tune, it just maybe the efx you have on them...
Never the less nice R&B intro and Bridge with Pop verses...Guess you could
call this fusion... :-)
Nicely done...
you mean vocal sounding Falsen in this ??!!
i think you're wrong , cause nobody hasn't felt like that , except you !
on Need it work by ElenaSatine
What a refreshing track...so uplifting...everything is perfect here...I begun to understand your nice world...:-)
Congrats, Danke
thank you much much for dropping this words .
this is th best news to know you have begun to underestand my stuffs .
sorry for late responce i was sick .
thank you again.
Elena :)
on Need it work by ElenaSatine
Also dig that saxophone.
Nice track.
FR
and sorry for late reply , i was sick .
Elena :)
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you made my day !
:)
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bests.___B
kisses for comment
:)