GoldenOokami

She must be very happy to have you in her life. Grear production, very laidback with a great melody.

hey man i better like Competitions so you not turning this into a battle? but it need to have a work time = 24hours.

Well, it is definetly not a trap song, but that does not matter. It still sounds very well in its own way. Like the use of the synths although the piano starting at 2:24 should be altered(in my opinion). But for the most part I think its a fun production to listen to.

hey man can i cut in it and infect it? you get full credit ?

here i can eazy hear you have been useing to much reverb, you should removed complete and find a EQ tree effect.

This is a solid piece of work, lots of flavour mad feel...
I like the changes and the mix is right on the mark...
As well I hear a few different guitar patterns that would
bump it up a notch, but as it stands right now it's still...
Very tastefully done...

Peace...TG.

I wouldn't want to remix this one as I don't think I could improve on it, it's that well done!
Cru

hey there i think this could be abit more short, and you would get a better track nice work.

Not sure if id call it trap, it jumps genres. But whatever genre its pretty awesome.

Love the glitch feel too it, and the synth/violin/pluck thing at 1.40 is pretty cool
anyhoo... cool track man :D

keep it up

This is trap ?..what makes a track trap ? what is trap?
I really can't say that I know the elements of a trap song, but I do love this track and the mix as well...it's like 4:00am and I'm listening thru headphones, and it's sounding very nice.good work

I know your track isn't finished but I used it for some this song I made for my mom lol it was kind of a last minute thing but you should check it out

Greetings, Golden O.

This is good though I appreciate that it's very much a work in progress. Adding more elements (and length) should indeed help.

This is fairly skilfully put together and definitely the basis for some proper funk.

Jazz guitar keyboard playing is good and sets the tone nicely. Then the first problem: that hat stands out as having the wrong sort of sound (too dry, needs reverb) and the wrong timbre. I know there's no "wrong" in music, I'm just saying how I feel. I have loads of good drum sounds but in some tracks they do feel wrong. Might also have groove not quite right. Play around with some different quantise settings.

Brass blasts are decent. Could be a better sampled sound but I guess it's the best you have. I hardly have any decent brass sampled instruments. They generally don't sound good played in a regular way so I have to use them in a different way ie add loads of delay or whatever.

0:55 first cool brass fill. Makes me think not of funk but some other genre. More jazz or ska or something similar.

I hope these thoughts help just a little bit.

Good luck with it as it's definitely worth continuing with.

I like the brass section, it is very catchy & groovy, when comes to the drums they are a little bit killing it. I used to play drums and that feeling for the beat is simply not coming. Funky music likes to use rhytms going against main rhytm (3rd = 1st) or rhytms 1-3 with pre-striked snares or kicks. It is kinda hard to create such rhytms in 4/4 sekvencers without using some shuffling or groovizer and even after it will still can sound odd & robotic. If you do this in Reason I could make some drum loops for you, if you like..

Amazing work so far! Really love how groovy the track is! I would add some live playing, but my mic isn't of good quality so I think it would detract from the song, not add to it.

Great work!
Rico L.

very cool everything works well together, it has a sense of progression which is always good. Doesn't feel like its going nowhere.
BUT i would say currently it feels a little bland, you mention your going to add keys, that will most certainly fix it i think, some underlying chords, a melody or something on the keys should do the trick :D

Cool track G.O :D

cool sound

Very nic ok and atar naw

lovely track!

Really quality stuff here, GO! The mix is very good, with every thing coming through clearly. Very good remix.

Ciao,
M.

This kept me guessing. It is something that I wouldn't have thought of, very excellent! Your use of the pitch bending pianos is brilliant! Way to rock it. One more thing. You kept on bringing in energy like a car climbing RPM's. Well done!

~Doug

HEY MAN! great remix, you took it in your own direction which i liked, you didn't just replace 1 thing you made it your own, which the best remixes always do.

That intro is pretty cool, makes the piano pretty unrecognisable from mine :D, also the shakers at around 1min are a nice touch.
That piano at 3.07... aww man thats awesome!!

So yeah, great track man, definitely did the song justice! :D

Respect,

Xyilent

Pretty cool little groove here. I like the basic synth and drum theme you've created here. I think the funky bass thing around the 2 min and 2:45 mark could definitely be changed to something more suited to the track. I like the subtle piano part late in the track, gives a nice variation. Could probably afford to make the high frequencies a bit more gentle, but that's just personal preference. Nice song!

2:40 to 2:58 it get too conjested. The sounds sound too basic in the intro. I really like the beat and flow tho. Keep it up man.

I remember sound of FL studio and times I was working in it. Everything sounded like MIDI. I am a fan of jazz too. Drums does not sound much jazzy at least when comparing to real jazz. Melodies and bass line is quite well build. And also there is space to make sound more acoustic, using live samples or multisamples, not to sound like ringtone of cellphone(I mean MIDI sounding instruments - ). Depends on what the goal is.

real nice this,moves along nice