MisterBloodworth

Very Nice - good flow and well composed

Man, you got soul for the thing! Just let it flow!!!

Nice instrumental work!

hard bass wobble just sounds sick.good beat.

Nice Sound build up fam, Relaxing but still has some edge to it.

Hello ....

Me, I believe that it's well, because your concept is original, with enough variations to give interest ....
Thank you for sharing this moment and these harmonies.
I encourage you to persevere in this way ....

Dan

Ah... the Massive, if it wasn't a VST I would hug it everyday. Interesting pitched kicks. It sounds really great man! Nice composition, great sounds.

Nice Track man

sounds nice! good work

This is dope. Haha, you were right when you said it was a chill beat. I like this man. Keep it up.

I think you did a good job. For that special her, she will like. The instrumental is talking some experience shared. Them holding on moments within the piano. The flute of journeys. Pads that bring spacial orbit round a thoughtful image of her face in light. Vivid music. Thank you for sharing this with us. Enjoyed the peace here.

Thanks for the offer, Ookami, but I have so much music and so many tracks and albums to finish off and master. I do very much want to work more with others on new stuff but I prefer to do it by getting together with them in the same room (unless I already knew them and then it could be done over the internet). But good luck with this and I'm sure you can make it even more interesting and perhaps two versions eventually. Maybe work on it more and then contact me again to see if I'm interested...

Great start to what could be a really good piece. I would suggest adding some other instruments though I am aware that people do make pieces like this (and of this length) with just one. I'd also suggest doing one drumless version (as above) and one very much with drums. The one with drums doesn't just have to all be, say, progressive house. Perhaps make the drums move through hip hop, house, d'n'b and so on. That could be a really interesting approach. So, make the changes in drums the progression rather than anything else. Just a few ideas if I was working on it...

not simple! that is an amazing and enveloping and developing solo that ... oh man Terry Riley hasn't done this for years but that makes this better - deep deep listening gem!

Get some quality acoustic drums to make it more metal or rock. Loops would work but much better would be some hypersampled drum software in which you prgram all the intricate fills and cymbal crashes etc. Lots of this sort of software (maybe all) comes with excellent MIDI files from professional drummers so I would suggest that as one of the best ways to achieve what I think you want. Obviously some guitar would make it more rock/metal. Good luck.

Very interesting and refreshing approach on this tune. I hear 8 bit elements that old games use to sound like, takes me back many moons ago. Keep up the good work!

TBK