Pathway To Cash Day - Overkill19

12th May 2010 05:07 - 16 years ago
Description : This track is me spitting a quick flow to a beat i made using magix music maker and its got 1 verse and a chorus PLEASE REVIEW, let me know what you think of the lyrics and the chorus, thanks.

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give Overkill19 some feedback.

rfalkenburg
rfalkenburg 15th May 2010 08:58 - 16 years ago
Be true to you...that is true. Original.
DJFredrick
DJFredrick 13th May 2010 04:05 - 16 years ago
Uh no. I reread his review and he doesn't mention too quiet, he was saying that the reverb from the walls was subtle but distracting. To me your voice is too loud..and it is probably for the reasons BT mentions, tinny and missing the depth. So maybe just fixing that will be fine volume wise.

luck bro

Dj
DJFredrick
DJFredrick 13th May 2010 02:06 - 16 years ago
not bad man. I thought that your voice was a little too dominant. I'd try turning it down and adding some effects to it. put it into the music not on top of it. yea I just read djbirchtree and I agree with him.
Good luck with it and keep it up.

DJ
Overkill19
Overkill19 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Alright man thanks but didnt bt say my voice was to quiet? so you think its too loud? get back at me, peace.
Keston
Keston 12th May 2010 20:48 - 16 years ago
hey man that was tight.
Overkill19
Overkill19 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks, appreciate the review.
BigReeg
BigReeg 12th May 2010 15:24 - 16 years ago
nice lyrics. flow so hot like bacon hahahaha. nice work. check out my new track hey shorty and review if you get a chance. PEACE.
Overkill19
Overkill19 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Yo i just heard your tracks today man, sick songs, and i noticed a similar bacon line in one of your songs,thats pretty random. Great minds think a like, thanks for the review.
djbirchtree
djbirchtree 12th May 2010 05:34 - 16 years ago
Not bad. You need to find a room to record vocals where you don't have to sound like your trying to keep your voice down and where you don't get the echo off the walls. It's subtle but it's distracting. It also is probably a result of your mic. Your voice sounds tinny and is missing the mid and low tones to give your rap some depth. Finally, you need to put more feeling into your vocals. It sounds like your not really feeling it and are really trying to force it. Take these as you will, it's not bad but with a little work it could be a lot better.
Overkill19
Overkill19 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
True man and ill be sure to work on all that, thanks for the feedback.
REGGAETONKINGZ
REGGAETONKINGZ 12th May 2010 05:12 - 16 years ago
nicely done ...but finish it ...because i think you got it right where it should be ..just tone it up a notch
Overkill19
Overkill19 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks man, what exactly do you mean by tone it up a notch? like lyrically or intensity of my flow?

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