Spinning - PaNeGyRiZe

thanks! oh the lyrics are definetly emotional, my passion is more in the rnb tracks than the hip-hop. the lyrics starts at the verse: Inside im feeling, not quite right, my hearts giving up but it wants to fight, everything building up to one single thing... changes to life that love will really bring, but you know this girlll, and ill show this worrrlld, to ya baby i know that cha need a plan, a man in your life to lend a helping hand and please dont be surprised at what my heart says , it could all be lies, mabye instead well find a way to work around all these messes give it a try and see where life takes us as the world slowly spins around , ill spin with you until im in the ground , baby this fire in my heart is burning mee, needin your love to extinguish mee..
okw ell that was the whole 1st verse, i sing real good and it sounds awesome, i reherse it daily to sharpen vocals on it, let me know what you think please :D and thnx for review xD

yea this was my favorite beat as well as my 5th beat i ever did, over a year or so ive lost the good quality version as well as the studio file too, it has a staticy high amp noice in some parts that shouldnt be there, but i still like it too :D my other rnb beat on here is good too, im trying tom ake more slow jams cuz i have better rythme than i do rap