Alive - Guitarguy316

7th Feb 2010 03:49 - 16 years ago
Tags :
Dance
1.70 MB
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Description : Fl studio track in progress... theres lots to dance about with this song. Just looking for some feedback as to how this thing is sounding!

Comments (14)

If you have time take a listen and give guitarguy316 some feedback.

PRINCELECTRO
PRINCELECTRO 14th Sep 2013 11:23 - 13 years ago
i will be happier if u add vocal and make extended version ;)

good job..
the47
the47 7th Sep 2013 16:21 - 13 years ago
way too much mid, can't hear the kick or anything else..
hope this helps you in any way
guitarguy316
guitarguy316 replied 7th Sep 2013 - 13 years ago
This was an old track that I did but from the looks of things, you know what your talking about. So, I will take your advice into consideration when I listen to it again, thanks!
Pippa777
Pippa777 2nd Sep 2013 11:58 - 13 years ago
Not gonna lie its catchy
guitarguy316
guitarguy316 replied 2nd Sep 2013 - 13 years ago
Right on thanks for givin it Listen!
MetalPriest
MetalPriest 28th Aug 2013 22:06 - 13 years ago
Good work I'm not even near of it. So thumbs up for this track.
guitarguy316
guitarguy316 replied 28th Aug 2013 - 13 years ago
Thanks for listening !
djvosha
djvosha 27th Aug 2013 17:43 - 13 years ago
Looks exciting.
Shall wait to see how it finally turns up.
Like the way your clap sounds.
Good luck!!!
guitarguy316
guitarguy316 replied 28th Aug 2013 - 13 years ago
Thanks but I will have to reproduce this track as it has been deleted since making it !
dellaa
dellaa 25th Aug 2013 18:12 - 13 years ago
Y agree vocals would give this track a lift :D
guitarguy316
guitarguy316 replied 28th Aug 2013 - 13 years ago
Thanks, and yeah vocals would be an interesting addition to this track!
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 23rd Aug 2013 17:32 - 13 years ago
first thing i noticed was the time sig when your just so used to 4/4, was quite surprised how easily people pick up on that detail! :)

As for the track i see no reason why not to do a remix off this as it has some catchy riffs and bass, would be quite interesting in to see the difference between the 2 track with 2 years more experience! :)

Nice work
guitarguy316
guitarguy316 replied 2nd Sep 2013 - 13 years ago
Thanks Dave, I only wish I still had the original project file; however some day I wish to perhaps reproduce this unusual but interesting little number !
DrClemmons
DrClemmons 21st Aug 2013 01:46 - 13 years ago
I like this! It remind s me of those Nintendo songs lol
guitarguy316
guitarguy316 replied 21st Aug 2013 - 13 years ago
Thanks for the review!
johnnyproducing
johnnyproducing 14th Aug 2013 10:28 - 13 years ago
Pretty good track, sounds a bit old fashioned with the bass and sounds but that doesn't matter really, maybe nice to add in a heavier kick or something like that, but on the other side I don't think that would fit in to great with the old sounds mm. Sounds very happy ;d
guitarguy316
guitarguy316 replied 14th Aug 2013 - 13 years ago
Old fashioned lol, when I heard that I had to check out your bio, I'm 41, so I guess it may sound a bit older because I am. I play music that I grew up with and of course I'm an 80's child, so that is the music I've always looked up to...and still do! Although my tastes vary to different degrees, my inspiration will always be lets say " of yesterday's era" .
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 13th Aug 2013 04:23 - 13 years ago
One thing to fix is what I see as a common problem with lots of stuff on Looperman (and I'm definitely guilty of it too): It's all too loud. Have a look at the waveform to see what I mean.

You probably need to turn it down and leave some headroom as I think that will give it a better overall sound.
guitarguy316
guitarguy316 replied 13th Aug 2013 - 13 years ago
Yeah, this was done a few years back when I was new to recording! I have learned a big more since this was done! Terminator 2 and Full Beauty have better volume control by far! ( my other tracks)
crucethus
crucethus 13th Aug 2013 03:11 - 13 years ago
I can tell you that it's 140 bpm and a guess that it's in 5/4 time signature!
MisterBloodworth
MisterBloodworth 13th Aug 2013 01:29 - 13 years ago
There's no doubt that this is a dance song. I'm really digging it. I'm curious though, what is the time signature on this track. I'm unsure if it is 4/4 time or something else. The tempo is precise, but I'm unable to detect the down beat. Regardless though, very interesting and fun track! Although this is 3 years from its release on this website, I'm glad I was able to come across and listen to this.

~Ookami
guitarguy316
guitarguy316 replied 13th Aug 2013 - 13 years ago
Thanks for your feedback! Im actually not sure of the time sig. ,When I get a chance to work on this AGAIN, I will fill you in! I am hoping that I can locate this file. However, I am thinking that it may be gone. But, this could be an opportunity to re-produce it? As I listened to this little number, I really cranked my stereo and thought...Wow!"'... I really like this one! Wouldnt it be nice to finish it? .....to be continued!
keyj
keyj 26th Jun 2010 11:04 - 16 years ago
I think it's a funny track. A bit 90's. Very Nice bass.
Maybe a strong vocal could give the right hook
Go on with it, it's a good beginning

ciao
K
guitarguy316
guitarguy316 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Havent had as much time as I would like to expand this track "yet", but I would like to take the time to thank you for review it!
DJAid
DJAid 8th Feb 2010 19:38 - 16 years ago
This is sounding good! Great, powerful synths and nice panning effect in the beginning. Nice electro bassline as well. A bit short but as you said its a work in progress. This track is progressing well and from what ive heard the finished version shall be great.

DJ AID
guitarguy316
guitarguy316 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Great, some feedback, no one was reviewing,...(lol). Thank you for your review, it keeps me inspired. As for the rest of this track, keep watching because this one aint staying on the shelf long! Peace, Music is my release!!!!!!!!!!!

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