Couldnt Win - LisMarie

28th Dec 2009 23:37 - 16 years ago
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Description : i would write my lyrics but I dont want anyone to steal them lol

I dont know who wrote the music in the background found it as I was looking for a track on my comp
hope you like...

dont comment on the voice effects...I know durrr...
It just doesnt sound like a recording without the effects k...

Comments (2)

If you have time take a listen and give LisMarie some feedback.

DanielGtrman
DanielGtrman 30th Dec 2009 07:59 - 16 years ago
To say you did this as a quickie shows you have great somgwriting talent. If you got more time I'm sure you could produce something thats right up there with the top chart material. Having said that, this track is very infectious in that you just gotta keep listening..for me that's the hallmark of a well-crafted song in any genre. Lack of time is one of my issues also, but I would like to be involved in producing something you might do in the future.....Seeing as you're busy busy busy book me in for 2114..!!..lol...great song.
MStokes
MStokes 29th Dec 2009 16:33 - 16 years ago
Good to see you back out here with a full song - great arrangement - particularly the last part where yr playing the with the time signature a bit - keep working on those fx! Try getting on top of em with a clean track and doubling underneath.
LisMarie
LisMarie replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thank you I have no time so this was kinda a quickie lol

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