She Keeps On (Hello) - Cdm

4th Oct 2009 23:20 - 17 years ago
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Description : This is a new track I'm working on also. I alway do ever part of my on song. no samples

Comments (1)

If you have time take a listen and give cdm some feedback.

Spudsy
Spudsy 5th Oct 2009 09:45 - 17 years ago
Hi Dude.

Not a bad try at all fella.

Altho a few things i would deffinately consider changing would be too remove the drums altogether as they are way outa time and a little distracting.

And open you mouth a little more when you sing, your key is ok but your tone is really low so you need to open up you mouth or the words dont form propperly.

Nice composition tho fella. if you need any help with drum programming or sounds or anything really, just gimme a shout and ill be more than happy to help you out as much as i can:)

I really look forward to hearing this in the future as it grows into a fully fledged track :)

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