Purple Rising - Rorshach2021

9th Dec 2007 09:54 - 18 years ago
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Description : i still think this needs work. i love my main melody in this but it feels like something is missing. I would love to here any ideas on how to make it better. cheers

Comments (13)

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AidenAngel
AidenAngel 8th Feb 2008 00:20 - 18 years ago
I love this track! Don't change it.
Maxidogma
Maxidogma 21st Jan 2008 22:19 - 18 years ago
I think the only thing missing is the recording deal for the release. I love it. Keep 'em coming. MD :)
Hoga
Hoga 20th Jan 2008 23:42 - 18 years ago
Its sounds good but just add some crash when the beat ends ;)
SpAzz
SpAzz 10th Jan 2008 06:45 - 18 years ago
Dude i think its pretty much done.. put some lady vocals at a low calm volume and bam....tight ass beat
sensationdj
sensationdj 8th Jan 2008 09:54 - 18 years ago
Man its a cool melody that keeps me on I don't now why you think is missing something its a cool intro with cool effects but I'm wondering what program of mixing did you use........
fiery
fiery 31st Dec 2007 10:37 - 18 years ago
I personally think it sounds great as is. If you add anything make sure it doesn't detract from the basic mood, sometime simplicity works best. Enjoyed this very much.
waggly
waggly 19th Dec 2007 09:58 - 18 years ago
I like the song, I don't like the sound of the lead though, it's out of tune, and it sounds like a cheap trumpet. What I do when a song doesn't sound full enough, I add a pad or some strings with some cool chords. They don't need to be excessively loud, but to enhance the mood and timbre of the song, they really really help. Peace
ChaseManhattan
ChaseManhattan 15th Dec 2007 15:39 - 18 years ago
they covered it nice job
ultrabase
ultrabase 13th Dec 2007 08:14 - 18 years ago
i agree some crashes improve the chances.good work.a vocal hook could be nice
fiend
fiend 11th Dec 2007 16:32 - 18 years ago
Hell Yeah, it's all about what mood you're in are in in the 1st,2nd, or 3rd bardo if you're in the middle it's all good. States of comple E-laxtion. So whats this Zane Lowe dude all about then?
RogueAi
RogueAi 9th Dec 2007 15:04 - 18 years ago
More drum variation and snare rolls would make this even better. The leads are great though. Check out my song "Techtrance 5000(The Trance Machine)." I think it is great!
Xanatdul
Xanatdul 9th Dec 2007 12:02 - 18 years ago
This is really good. As for the stuff thats missing, the only thing I could think to add is maybe some crashes when the beat changes and to possiblly turn up your drum beat a little.
MrRobot
MrRobot 9th Dec 2007 10:03 - 18 years ago
cool track , much changes
i like this tune

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