Listen To Purity Hip Hop Song By BONEZONMARZ | Looperman

Hi,

I don't think your friends are just being nice. Musically, technically, and structurally, your track is good.
Butand I think this is what Gizmo meant tooit's just a framework. A foundation. A solid and promising one.
To turn this foundation into a house, you need a few more floors.
This includes a singer who rises above the static base and adds a flexible, vibrant layersomeone who tells a story, an interesting and captivating story worth hearing.
And every house needs people to bring it to life: catchy melodies, ad-libs, backing vocalselements that support the singer at crucial moments.
A bridge would also be important, a passage that leads us from the basic structure to a climax, a kind of finale.

So keep building your house. It's worth it.

Best regards,
Manuela

I do like your work. As has already been mentioned, this track is very good from a technical pov. Everything is there: perfect mastering, good beat and melodic variety that go along exceptionally well with fine vocals. The song still bears potential for improvement in terms of variation concerning the latter because in my opinion it is a bit repetitive in the end. Nevertheless, great job. Keep it up!

A truly beautiful track - vocals, beat everything - we know what you mean, it is a slow process sometimes finding the right audience - keep going ;)

This track is beautiful with excellent sound but it needs those lyrics and the vocalist's part to really shine. I think that the songs that draw the attention of the audience are the one's complete. Nowadays it is more than easy to present "full scale" songs, they are created within some minutes and they are great music we have to admit. People all they want is to listen to good music, they don't care if it is AI or not. So, the process is a bit uneven for those trying all alone to produce music to get listened. Since you are not a professional musician, or a professional composer (I just suppose though) what is of care is the joy of making it. I do understand, recognition carries the will to continue and the feeling of real sharing. I think you are doing well though, and your music is well recognized by this community. Keep up the good work.
Best wishes, Anthony