Purity - BONEZONMARZ

I agree with everything that's been said before. I can't give you my opinion on mixing or mastering, because I don't even know how to do it for my own tracks, haha. But what I do know is that what I hear sounds good; it sounds clear, crisp, and has a well-defined rhythm. I think it's a very good foundation for creating a great track, as others have mentioned, adding lyrics that draw the listener into the story you tell. I think you're doing a good job.

Great track but you need some voices into it!!!
Master is a tad bit much on my own, but who knows???
Congrats of course!
Fistbump,
Danke

I do like your work. As has already been mentioned, this track is very good from a technical pov. Everything is there: perfect mastering, good beat and melodic variety that go along exceptionally well with fine vocals. The song still bears potential for improvement in terms of variation concerning the latter because in my opinion it is a bit repetitive in the end. Nevertheless, great job. Keep it up!

A truly beautiful track - vocals, beat everything - we know what you mean, it is a slow process sometimes finding the right audience - keep going ;)

This track is beautiful with excellent sound but it needs those lyrics and the vocalist's part to really shine. I think that the songs that draw the attention of the audience are the one's complete. Nowadays it is more than easy to present "full scale" songs, they are created within some minutes and they are great music we have to admit. People all they want is to listen to good music, they don't care if it is AI or not. So, the process is a bit uneven for those trying all alone to produce music to get listened. Since you are not a professional musician, or a professional composer (I just suppose though) what is of care is the joy of making it. I do understand, recognition carries the will to continue and the feeling of real sharing. I think you are doing well though, and your music is well recognized by this community. Keep up the good work.
Best wishes, Anthony