LunnchBoxx - Coin Slot 777 - LunnchBoxx

15th Jul 2020 11:17 - 6 years ago
Description : This is my first attempt making melodic riddim, I just recently saw a tutorial and thought I'd give it a try.

Comments (13)

If you have time take a listen and give LunnchBoxx some feedback.

Aarexx
Aarexx 17th May 2022 21:38 - 4 years ago
damn this is fire
HeathAlexander
HeathAlexander 30th Jul 2020 17:03 - 6 years ago
The melodic section from 1:20-2:10 sounds great and the switch at 2:14 is very cool. The track has a nice full sound and with ValveDriver's advice it'll sound even better. I don't usually care much for riddim but this track is very enjoyable. Great work.
LunnchBoxx
LunnchBoxx replied 1st Aug 2020 - 6 years ago
Thanks Heath, I'm currently working on a new track and learn so much with the advices and critics that got here at looperman.
ripzore9191
ripzore9191 26th Jul 2020 15:48 - 6 years ago
I am honestly amazed of how good you are with fl studio mobile. Well done over all.
LunnchBoxx
LunnchBoxx replied 28th Jul 2020 - 6 years ago
Thanks :>
Xzysin
Xzysin 25th Jul 2020 06:15 - 6 years ago
Quick question. Why does it sound like it has three different keys?
LunnchBoxx
LunnchBoxx replied 25th Jul 2020 - 6 years ago
Maybe because of the melodic part @1:20 and here at @2:14 track is only in F key tho.
ValveDriver
ValveDriver 24th Jul 2020 18:42 - 6 years ago
I have FL mobile, but rarely use it for anything more than a "sketchbook" to take down ideas. So I don't know how detailed the mixer is, or how in depth you can really go with the whole thing.

That being said, here is my suggestion to help with the mix.

Dynamics and automated motion. Right now, even though there is stereo separation, everything is still sitting in the middle. Try panning different elements of the drop to different spots on the left to right scale. With everything being in the middle it's all fighting for the same spaces and the frequencies are essentially tripping over each other and crowding up the joint.
Not only will that free up spaces for everything to come through more clearly, but it will give a much fuller, and dynamic sound. Making it bigger and and more grandiose.

As far as levels go, the volumes are all good. At least through my headphones. Everything seems to be sitting in the mix just right. Nothing really jumps out, or ducks behind. The sidechaining is a little heavy for my own personal taste, but that's just me. I've never really been a fan of that. So, take that bit of criticism for what it's worth.

The percussion is pretty good. The hats and cymbals are a little low in there. Maybe boost the volume on those. Again, if you can, maybe put a stereo separator on the claps. Widen them out. Bump the hi-hats off center just a bit.

I'm assuming that this is all original, and not a mix of loops...even though it is Looperman, home of the loops. So, again, take my opinions and criticisms for what they're worth. If they help, great. If they don't, then no harm, no foul.

Overall, excellent work. I'm looking forward to hearing what you come up with in the future.

Take care.
V.
LunnchBoxx
LunnchBoxx replied 25th Jul 2020 - 6 years ago
That's what I'm struggling for in my mix, it's all good in my headphones but when I play it on my speaker it sounded off and empty, thanks for this, and about the sidechain I check it out and it's really a bit heavy would definitely working with that, and from the loops, I just used two bass shots and process it a bit, thanks again and have a nice day.
bitronix
bitronix 24th Jul 2020 12:59 - 6 years ago
Really great structure, though I wonder why the drop kinda got muffled. Probably the sub is overpowering the other elements thus being muddy. Maybe try cutting somewhere in the 20 - 150hz range by about 2-4 db? Oh, if you also want a more powerful (you probably know this) try reducing the master db/volume of everything BUT the drop by ear, and then the drop should be at the normal volume (for example, I'm using FL Studio, I'd automate the master volume know at 60%-65% on the verses and buildup, and the a jump to the normal 70% volume on the drop) just to give it that good impact when the drop drops.

Anyways, can't believe you just tried riddim, even though it looks like you've already done a lot!
LunnchBoxx
LunnchBoxx replied 24th Jul 2020 - 6 years ago
This what I've been waiting for, to pinpoint where to cut because I'm struggling in equalizing stuff, thanks for the effort and tips appreciate this a ton.
zipbass
zipbass 21st Jul 2020 05:00 - 6 years ago
You knock at my door at 02:14
add a part with the x2 speed hit drums =)
LunnchBoxx
LunnchBoxx replied 22nd Jul 2020 - 6 years ago
Thanks, not a fan of x2 speed hit drums though.
djphildrummin
djphildrummin 18th Jul 2020 07:54 - 6 years ago
DOPE!!! GREAT JOB!!!
Eighteen
Eighteen 18th Jul 2020 04:12 - 6 years ago
First attempt?
xD I don't believe that, but if its true, its really awesome, the double drop is sick xD

Jokes aside, I don't recall ever hear one of your tracks before so I have no idea at this moment what your usual comfort-zone tracks sound like.

But this is really awesome enough for me to put this on my play list instantly!

Awesome job!
+1fav

Cheers!

~Eighteen
LunnchBoxx
LunnchBoxx replied 18th Jul 2020 - 6 years ago
My comfort zone right now is 'Melodic Dubstep' so I think switching it up to melodic dubstep on the second drop would be good and it turns out fine, btw thanks for taking the time to listen.
ronabo
ronabo 17th Jul 2020 16:37 - 6 years ago
Hey, this is a nice dubstep. I like the production.... a lot going on but I like that.. :)

I may try a dubstep soon. Thanks for sharing this fav.

Ronabo
LunnchBoxx
LunnchBoxx replied 18th Jul 2020 - 6 years ago
Thanks, I would love to hear what you produce I'm definitely checking that out.
DJDarkLight
DJDarkLight 17th Jul 2020 15:13 - 6 years ago
Nice song, but whats the name supposed to mean?
LunnchBoxx
LunnchBoxx replied 18th Jul 2020 - 6 years ago
This arp @0:25 reminded of a slot machine so I decided to put more 'slot machine' base sounds, like the fills at the drop @0:44 @0:51 @0:54 and so on, anyway thanks, appreciate this a ton.
DijamMusic
DijamMusic 17th Jul 2020 13:17 - 6 years ago
I like it!
dvnmusic
dvnmusic 15th Jul 2020 14:32 - 6 years ago
Nice.

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