RED VELVET - FEAT ANGELA FLEMMING THA SUSPECT1 - SteelCityRed

Some parts can be better, but overally its very nice
Respects, 7L

this beat is tight, smooth elements
hook needs work but overall sounds smooth af
keep at it

Sup homie...
It's been a minute.
Nice work. Good to see you dropping music.
Stay up bro.
T2

intro??first part i liked, and the last part was good. the middle?? good effort!!

Ok. So dont take anything as a negative as I am a very critical listener. Plus, I feel as if the goal is to uplift folks. Comments are just people’s personal opinions and preferences.

1. First thing is first, the mix. There are a ton of good elements in this track and a bunch of ear candy, but I feel like it could be more cohesive. Example: the rap is quieter than the chick singer.

2. Speaking of the chick singer; it seems she has a decent vocal but it’s completely not in the key of this track. This isn’t really a critique, because it’s just the fact unfortunately.

2. The guy singer with the auto-tune is in key, but at times it’s not properly modulated with the voicings of the instrumentation.

3. Like point 2, the “show me” voicings are clashing or competing with the voicings of the instruments.

4. I’m finding this to be very common, and that is this: the rap vocal needs a De-esser. The siblence of the “S’s” and “T’s” seem harsh.

Good work.