Theory 4 - WC X 40A - Edaw

I like it but I just feel like sample should have a more complex rhythm when the verse starts to add diversity and trick the listener to believe that it is more than a four bar loop with hi hats. i think the kick gets thin with the bassline or you haven't layered the kick. Which ever it is, just make sure your kick has more presence in the mix. And also the break at 00:52 just makes no sense because the fundamental use of a break or pause should to add more visibility/clarity to line or thought of the main vocals. The sample at 01:45 also just takes away from the track oppose to adding to the harmonics.

We all need to improve. But I like the track. I love to hear what come of it since you said this is not the final mix. Keep us posted.